ArcticAnimals

part II

@ellette-giselle

And by “something kawaii”, I basically mean just something cute as a front design, like on a tee shirt… so something like this would work:

@ellette-giselle

That is completely not me, so we’ll see how this goes. lol. 😀

lol same 😄

Oh, btw, do you have a picture of the tank-top. I’m not a fashion person so I have no idea what “something Kawaii” means. haha

lol I’ll have to use real pics….

The tank is very plain, and would look something like this:

part II of this message…[Read more]

Ugh, so I can’t post two pics in one post, eh?

Give me a minute and I’ll repost… in two separate messages… 😒

@ellette-giselle

Alrighty, I’ll give a character of mine! 😄

Name: Fir Sayre

Age: Fifteen

Gender: Female

Clothing: She typically wears a stylish halter-top white tank top with something kawaii on the front, a pink hoodie wrapped around her waist, a knee length pink or pastel blue skirt, and some kind of white sneaker with white s…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

GIRRLLLL I’m so excited for you!!!!! That’s awesome! 😄😄😄😄😄😄

How is everyone else’s writing going? <3

Terrible lol. I’m mostly kidding. I haven’t made too much progress on my novel recently… but my brother and I have been writing random prompted short stories, and those are… well, those are also terrible haha &…[Read more]

@rae

I… completely forgot I was ever in this RP 😂

Yeah, I think I’ll be dropping out.

But I’m still stalking 👀

@rae

Ok… here is mine!

@ellette-giselle

Love them! Are all of these characters the ones from the story you posted the prologue and chapter about?

Also it’s really cool that you made up most of those quotes! That can be a taxing job sometimes lol 💛💛

@savannah_grace2009

I like it! 💛💛

@ellette-giselle

😀 XD

ooo the other boards look good too! The temporarily misplaced quote is funny XD

Oh that’s ok. I was more looking for general response as a reader, not so much critical  feedback as of yet. (though it’s always welcome.)

Ah, ok! 😀

@ellette-giselle

I think it’s good! Intriguing. I don’t really have any thoughts in a critical sense, and I’m not the best person to ask… but I do like it! The last part was pretty sad to read!

Ugh, I’m sorry that it took me a while to respond…😓😓

(also I love the board!)

@rae

Oh, I also read your scene for Chase’s book. Don’t really have any comments, but I like it. Nice title, too.

@rae

I read your scene, and overall, I think it’s really good. I’m not very good at critiquing, but I did want to mention just a couple things I noticed.

One, Mandin said it would take Nahim several minutes to defeat an opponent with a sword. Exchanges with swords actually usually last for a handful of seconds.

(Btw, do you have an in-…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Mm. Yeah, I guess it’s not bad at all then! 🙂🙂

@ellette-giselle

woah….

It definitely does sound interesting.

I feel like them talking out all of their plans for a whole chapter/prologue isn’t the most… eye catching… at least in my opinion…

But then again, I feel like this could set up for the following chapter pretty well—especially if the next one jumps right in a bit.

I also agree with…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I like this chapter a lot! (And the one you shared before it—I meant to reply to that one but I didn’t have a moment 😅)

Cassian is a good friend! 😍❤️❤️

Um… I know you were asking Ellette… but I don’t think your chapters are cringey.

@keilah-h

lol XD XD

Wait a second… is there no firework emoji??