Josiah DeGraaf

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  • in reply to: Kingdom Pen Captions #78710
    Josiah DeGraaf
    @aratrea
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      This is one of my favorite threads. And @epicaddie2, that is definitely what I look like right before a plot twist. 😉

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      in reply to: Character Development Methods #70203
      Josiah DeGraaf
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        @ariel-ashira Here you go! 🙂 https://storyembers.org/resources/

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        in reply to: Character Development Methods #70130
        Josiah DeGraaf
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          @gh24682468999 I use a character questionnaire sheet I made up that used to be on KP and is currently on the Story Embers site. For me, a lot of a character has to do with asking enough questions about them to boil them down to three central qualities about who they are as a person. Once I have a set core for the character, it’s easier for me to write them.

          One place to start if you don’t want to do a long questionnaire is to figure out what your character’s biggest desire is, what their biggest fear is, and what their biggest weakness (moral failing) is… You need more to a character can that, but that can give you a good start for what kind of person a character is in my experience. 🙂

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          in reply to: Kingdom Pen Captions #68628
          Josiah DeGraaf
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            @dekreel That presumes I have a Pinterest account. 😛


            @rochellaine
            This is why I don’t let @the-real-kapeefer beta-read my novels.

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            in reply to: Comic Poem Tag Experiment #66940
            Josiah DeGraaf
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              @dragon-snapper Accurate ending. xD

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              in reply to: Farewell Josiah #66233
              Josiah DeGraaf
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                Thanks @dekreel. 🙂 Know that I assumed that sentiment behind those words even if you never directly said them. It’s been a blast to shoot those videos with the siblings.

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                in reply to: Farewell Josiah #65736
                Josiah DeGraaf
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                  @aislinn-mollisong It’s been an honor to be the editor-in-chief here. Thanks. 🙂

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                  in reply to: Farewell Josiah #65674
                  Josiah DeGraaf
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                    @corissa-maiden-of-praise Aww; thanks. 🙂 I appreciate it a lot. You all are the bestisest people on the bestisest place on the internet. That Ecclesiastes passage is a very relevant passage for me during this time!


                    @daughteroftheking
                    Yeah; I’ll still be around the forum (especially when tagged), but there’s going to be some new people taking on my role in the KP staff.

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                    in reply to: Kingdom Pen Captions #65527
                    Josiah DeGraaf
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                      @dekreel Classic.


                      @jenwriter17
                      Yeah. I think it’s the “Worst Allegory Ever” video.

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                      in reply to: Any Advice on an Ever-Evolving Theme? #65063
                      Josiah DeGraaf
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                        @ethryndal Looks like you’ve already gotten some great answers here! In my opinion, this is natural. When I started writing my current novel, I thought my primary theme was anger with a focusing question of “How should you deal with your anger?”, but during drafts and revisions, the primary theme ended up morphing into moral principles with a focusing question of “How should you follow moral principles in your decision-making?” Anger is still a major theme in the work, but it’s no longer the primary theme.

                        In general, the outline you initially construct may not match what you end up writing and I don’t think there’s a problem with that. You may need to re-outline your novel after the first draft, though, to figure out what plot & theme you’re <i>actually</i> trying to tell so that you can revise your story from there. My first drafts have always been a mess of plot, characters, and theme so I can sympathize with where you’re at right now. 😛 And I agree with what some others have said. “The worth of humanity” may be an interesting major theme to complement the primary theme of “the depravity of humanity.”

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                        in reply to: A Year Ago… #64378
                        Josiah DeGraaf
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                          @that_writer_girl_99 Seems hard to believe it’s only been a year. Feels like you’ve been a part of this for much longer than that. 🙂

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                          in reply to: Facebook #64353
                          Josiah DeGraaf
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                            Step #1: Post the FB page link here so we can follow you. 😀

                            Step #2: Make sure it’s linked on your blog, and possibly include a link to it in your welcome email sequence for new subscribers (assuming you have a mailing list).

                            Step #3: My personal approach has been to be posting writing or reading related statuses 4-5 days a week, and then as people I know like the page, it will show up in other people’s feeds who will then be introduced to me and my writing.

                            Step #4: I know some people have had really good experience with FB ads. I’ve never tried them.

                            Step #5: A number of people I know swear by FB live videos. I’ve only done a couple for KP and never tried them for my personal page, but they’re worth trying since I know FB likes to naturally promote videos on their platform.

                            Interested in hearing about what other people do with their pages.

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                            in reply to: Kingdom Pen Captions #64307
                            Josiah DeGraaf
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                              @ariella-newheart Accurate.


                              @dekreel
                              Ok; not going to lie, that last pic of me kind of creeps me out…

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                              in reply to: The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton #64071
                              Josiah DeGraaf
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                                @rochellaine Haha; I was worried for a moment that I should have recognized your name on here long ago. xD No; you’re fine. I remember who you are now, and I remember enjoying talking to you since there weren’t a bunch of people who stopped by the booth for extended periods of time at CHAP. Glad to know you ended up making it over to the forum. 🙂

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                                in reply to: The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton #64042
                                Josiah DeGraaf
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                                  @dekreel Wow; well, I got to say you captured the standard opening thread replies and what I do when meeting newbies on the forum. xD


                                  @rochellaine
                                  Were you one of the people I met at the CHAP conference last summer? Trying to remember when and where we met since I’m terrible with names. 😛

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