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Michael Stanton replied to the topic Handout for Distribution Among Friends: Brainstorming Needed in the forum Stewards of the Pen 7 years, 4 months ago
@bethanysinkyroses, I think that will work nicely. I will right up a quick summary for @theliterarycrusader to use to create a graphic (don’t worry, I will also put it in the official channel of “getting stuff made”).
Goal of the Handout:
A physical reminder of an amazing conversation with a fellow writer that communicates the core qualities of…[Read more] -
Hope Ann replied to the topic Website Feedback in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
@Aratrea The advantage of a follow button is that you’ll get followers that way who aren’t otherwise committed enough to actually sign up to a newsletter. Depending settings, they will automatically get an email when you post something and your post will show up in their reader feed. I know there are a number of blogs I follow because it just…[Read more]
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Daeus posted a new activity comment 7 years, 4 months ago
@kate-flournoy @that_writer_girl_99 @aratrea Part 1 has outlines for all the lessons if you’d like to go check them out. 🙂 I’m hoping to write out lesson one today.
@sierra-r Have you seen this yet?
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Website Feedback in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
@Aratrea I really like it! Everyone else has touched on things I would mention – mainly that it is very much a ‘story first’ blog rather an an ‘author first’ blog. Which is great, if you plan on just posting about your stories. If you plan on posting articles or stuff about yourself, you might want to change that aspect of it, even if it is just…[Read more]
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Website Feedback in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
@Aratrea I just bet you did. 😀
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Snapper replied to the topic Songwriting Competition in the forum Music 7 years, 4 months ago
*blinks at the silence*
Are the songs really that bad?
😛
Thought I might throw out there that I need any replies or comments you do have by the 9th.
@daeus @kate-flournoy @rolena-hatfield @perfectfifths @warrioroftherealm @aratrea @graciegirl @jane-maree @winter-rose @that_writer_Girl_99 @anyone else -
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Website Feedback in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
@Aratrea I concure mostly with what the others said (though I’ll admit I skimmed over a lot of the techincal detail stuff. I know next to nothing of web design. :P). Mostly what I thought when I first went there though was the focus on the story right away, instead of you and the blog. Someone else mentioned it too; it just struck me a little odd…[Read more]
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Snapper started the topic Songwriting Competition in the forum Music 7 years, 4 months ago
Hi, Kapeefers!
So, there’s a contest that I’m entering this month, a songwriting contest, and I’ve not really done this that much before.
Yep, you guessed it, I’m asking for help. 😀
I can’t decide between these two songs, so all you music lovers out there, I could use some critiques. 😀
Which song do you like better and why? And if there’s…[Read more] -
Gracie replied to the topic Do You Want to Be In a KP Promotional Video? in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
@aratrea Okiday, my mom cleared me. You can expect a video from me soon. 🙂
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NC Stokes started the topic *raises hand shyly* Um, hello people. I've got a question! in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
See title. So, I’ve got a character who I really want people to like. So it will be really dramatic when I reveal he’s evil! (MWAHAHAHA!) Ok, a little backstory; My MC, Dianne, has two brothers. (she also has a sister, but that’s beside the point.) Her oldest brother, Wyatt, is nice enough, but irresponsible, unpredictable, and really bad at…[Read more]
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NC Stokes started the topic *raises hand shyly* Um, hello people. I've got a question! in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
See title. So, I’ve got a character who I really want people to like. So it will be really dramatic when I reveal he’s evil! (MWAHAHAHA!) Ok, a little backstory; My MC, Dianne, has two brothers. (she also has a sister, but that’s beside the point.) Her oldest brother, Wyatt, is nice enough, but irresponsible, unpredictable, and really bad at…[Read more]
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katie replied to the topic Website Feedback in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
@aratrea – I am referring to the link to your ‘Contact’ page. I am on a MacBook Pro and the ‘Contact’ button was underneath all of the other buttons. It very well could be that my screen is smaller than yours! 😀 I understand how everything rearranges depending on what screen size you’re using 😉
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SleepwalkingMK replied to the topic Homework for Video 4: Experiment in Living in the forum Writing Assignments 7 years, 4 months ago
@aratrea Okay, thanks!
He changes to #3 and #1. He is now motivated by seeking revenge and protecting those he cares about. Revenge (#3): He feels he will only be truly satisfied if he cleanses the land of the peasants. Protection (#1): He is afraid of the peasants, and believes they will hurt other people he loves if he doesn’t wipe them out.…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic The Thread Where I Complain in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
@mark-kamibaya @daeus @that_writer_girl_99 @kate-flournoy @mariposa @brandon-miller @aratrea
Thanks for the encouragement guys. I am feeling alot better about it now. And I will definitely try most, if not all of your suggestions. Thank you so much!
@bethanysinkyroses *commiserates with you* Yeah. It’s tough. 😀 We got this, though! -
Jane Maree replied to the topic Website Feedback in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
@Aratrea I’ll definitely tell her that. 😛 (her website is alicemaywebdesign.com.au if you wanted to check it out) I’m glad we could help out! 😀
The text does look better and easier to read now, yes.You did a great job. 🙂
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Thread Where I Complain in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
@dragon-snapper I think it’s funny you tagged me in this, because I can sympathize with you on so many levels. I sympathize with you so deeply, in fact, that all I can really do is sit down next to you, pull up my own WIPs, and cry, cry, cry because I understand how you feel.
I agree with what @aratrea said. Maybe you just need to take a break…[Read more]
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Website Feedback in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
(for some reason this thing isn’t posting properly. >.< Sorry about all that. :/)
@Aratrea what @Daeus mentioned about the lines of text on the home page being closer together (unless I’m misinterpreting) is called ‘line height’ if that helps in your searching.
Some points that I and my web designer sister picked out: (admittedly a great deal of…[Read more] -
Jane Maree replied to the topic Website Feedback in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
@Aratrea what @Daeus mentioned about the lines of text on the home page being closer together (unless I’m misinterpreting) is called ‘line height’ if that helps in your searching.
Some points that I and my web designer sister picked out: (admittedly a great deal of them were my sister, and she very much enjoyed stalking your website XD)– if…[Read more]
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Website Feedback in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
@Aratrea what @Daeus mentioned about the lines of text on the home page being closer together (unless I’m misinterpreting) is called ‘line height’ if that helps in your searching.
Some points that I and my web designer sister picked out: (admittedly a great deal of them were my sister, and she very much enjoyed stalking your website XD)– if…[Read more]
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Jane Maree replied to the topic Website Feedback in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 4 months ago
@Aratrea what @Daeus mentioned about the lines of text on the home page being closer together (unless I’m misinterpreting) is called ‘line height’ if that helps in your searching.
Some points that I and my web designer sister picked out: (admittedly a great deal of them were my sister, and she very much enjoyed stalking your website XD)– if…[Read more]
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Awesome! I’ll look them over today, probably later tonight. @daeus
@Daeus which one is part one…
Part 1 – emotion telling. Right at the top of my outline. There are four lessons listed under it.
Aha, thanks. Found it. 😉
Which lessons make up Part 1? Is there a doc somewhere that categorizes/lists all these lessons?
Here’s the outline https://docs.google.com/document/d/1W87kcWtV1azNc5zA34D9jQ3yNl-wbnGDgYOnxAhrs5k/edit
In parentheses at the top it says (part 1 – emotion telling) The four lessons under that are the ones that have outlines.