Josiah DeGraaf

@dragon-snapper

*raises hand nearly popping arm out of socket* ooh! ooh! If there’s still a reader slot open, I’d LOVE to read it! Congrats on finishing it! 😉

btw, I checked out your blog. it’s looks great and i look forward to posts in the future 😉

@that_writer_girl_99  Can I just say…wowza!!!!!

I love those.

So much.

@allison-grace  I am back from the dead (aka Christmas break)!  This question is for a more experienced writer than myself, but I definitely agree with what @that_writer_girl_99 said about making it real.  Sorry, I know I’m not very helpful, but honestly this is tough for me too!

@Rochellaine Sweet. If you want to check out my friend’s art, she has some of her work on Deviantart, which you could look at.

@seekjustice This sounds like an awesome idea! If you don’t already have the readers you need, I’d be happy to be one. 😁

@winter-rose First, I think the blurb is very interesting. I agree with some of the others; it might be a tad long. And it might add a little something if there was some backstory to Rook’s avoidance of girls. Other than that, I think it’s great!

I have a friend who’s an artist/illustrator, but she’d probably charge a little for doing something like this. It also depends exactly what you’re looking for.

@inkling-for-christ Depending on the style of editing you’re looking for, I don’t actually have anyone scheduled in at the moment so I’m not too busy. I do charge (a low cost) for a professional edit though -you can check out my details HERE– but I try keep it affordable.

If it’s an incomplete manuscript, I would be happy to work through it and…[Read more]

Congrats @dragon-snapper! I’ll let you know when I check it out. Silver Phoenix is a cool name too👍

Wow! Sounds amazing. I’ve read your stuff before and thoroughly enjoyed it, so I’m in.

@rochellaine Ha, you should head down to where I live, then. Plenty of heat here.

Hey~

I’m a little confused as to what you’re asking here. Are you asking about the Biblical soundness of including “humanoid” creatures in your story? Or are you debating the differences between animal and human?

If your question relates to the former, I’d like to ask what impact God has in the world you’ve created. Do your characters actively…[Read more]

Hi there! @allison-grace

A few things to consider here, but first, check out this video: https://kingdompen.org/character-types-the-strong-female-character-tm/

Okay. Now, I’m no expert on this, and without any knowledge of how exactly your MC goes about saying anyone, this might be a shot in the dark, but here’s my advice: make it re…[Read more]

@seekjustice you’re totally fine. 😉 Thanks for the good wishes. 🙂

@rochellaine Hi! Welcome to KP.

Where are you from?

http://www.theliterarycrusader.com/ Check this out. I can’t remember Brianna’s tag at the moment, but I’m sure she’d be willing to answer any questions you might have.

@rochellaine no no, it’s fine. XD

Longfellow has some really great stuff. Tennyson too, though I haven’t read as much of it. Mostly just The Lady of Shalott. ;P

@mariposa awesome job! 👍