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Sara replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
THAT IS SO SAD….but I love Riker…<3
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Sara replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Marcurious
“Trust me, my kind can inflict nasty wounds on each other.”
“I believe it,” he muttered under his breath. Ottoline raised an eyebrow, and flashed him a look that said shut up before you offend someone! Marcurious shrugged.
Ottoline
“How do I know if I’m completely healed?” she asked. “I might feel fine, but I could be hurt still.”
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Sara replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Wow. I really did forget about Marcurious. So I should probably RP him, huh? lol
Marcurious
Words couldn’t describe the relief he felt when Ottoline opened her eyes. He immediately took her in his arms. “Thank you,” he said to Snake. “You good, sis?” He asked and helped her to a sitting position.
“Yeah,” she said, looking at the armband, then…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Aww I love that! Lukas is great for Xandro XD
Livia
She wandered around the mall for what seemed like an hour but was really only five minutes. She couldn’t understand why Xandro always had to stick his nose into her business…quite literally this time. In a moment she realized that it would be rude to leave her new friends behind,…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Ohhhh. Okay. You’re fine!
Ottoline
“What happened?” she said again. She felt herself growing stronger by the second as if some strange power was mending her injuries.
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Sara replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 11 months, 2 weeks ago
IT’S SO SAD
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
@thearcaneaxoim
True. I’m not sure the best way to put this then.
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Sara replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Ottoline wasn’t saying that she wasn’t lucky they had magic. She was saying that she felt better and would be fine, and didn’t even know they were using magic. Sorry, I’m just kind of confused by Ellis’s RP lol
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Sara replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Ottoline
“Oh,” she frowned. “I’ll live.” she shrugged. “I’ve been through worse.” She laughed as if a joke, but several people looked at her with concerned expressions on their faces.
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Sara replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Ottoline
Pain.
With every pulse of her blood, her head ached. Her shoulder throbbed with pain so deep that she felt herself slipping away….She didn’t want to wake up…she didn’t want to feel the pain anymore….
And suddenly, it wasn’t there anymore.
Her eyes fluttered open to reveal a number of concerned faces.
“What? Huh?” she looked…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Wait. Now I’m thinking about it more, and since everyone knows that the Pythonos take the children away, then he wouldn’t think that his parents threw him away.
Maybe he just sees himself as worthless because of what the Pythonos do to the Paynes? Like you said, he can’t shake the feeling that somehow he deserved what the…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
I know…
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Sara replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 11 months, 2 weeks ago
oooh, I like it!
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Sara replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Livia
““Hey, um… it wasn’t your fault.” she felt a touch on her shoulder, and saw Lukas’s breathtaking smile, before managing a quick smile. To her surprise, she was able to keep the tears at bay long enough to push past Lukas and Xandro and walk off to find a bathroom. She couldn’t risk any waterfalls of emotions, not in front o…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
“Hey, um… it wasn’t your fault.” He offered her a lopsided smile, quickly pulling his hand away and shoving it into his pocket.
Awwww <3
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Sara replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
He’s more concerned about being torn apart atm. lol! Though he’ll probably have one eventually.
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Sara replied to the topic Dark Castle (RP) in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Fracture
“I want answers! And I am going to get them if I have to tear each of you apart!”
“Well, that’s not very nice,” Fracture frowned.
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Sara replied to the topic My WIP (historical fiction) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Aww I love that scene so much!!!!!!! It was so sweet! Great job!
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Sara replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 2 weeks ago
Yeah, I did notice that. It always seemed kind of unnatural and kind of stilted to me. Would it make it better if I tied it into the fact that he’s an orphan? He kind of struggles with that, because he was abandoned and never knew his parents. He loves Azazel and Indie so so so much, but he feels like he’s not worthy to be treated…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 2 weeks ago
NO NO NO NO NOOOOOOO! YOU CAN’T KILL AMIR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sobs into my pillow for two hours*
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO *takes deep breath* OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Anyway……
I do like the idea that he’s dying in place of Dabir. I think your idea that it could be part of the law that anyone can willingly take the…[Read more]
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