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Snapper replied to the topic Please critique this story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@ingridrd I can’t hug all of them!! I had like 120 stuffed animals…now I have guilt.
*sigh*
My only critique is that I though the dog was real so I was confused when you said the button nose was falling off…but otherwise it is really cute. 😀
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Ingrid replied to the topic Please critique this story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
Maybe I should tag some people…what an idea?!? *slaps face*
@emily @dragon-snapper @kate-flournoy @daeus @that_writer_girl_99 @anyone -
Ingrid started the topic Please critique this story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
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Hey, guys!
I wrote this very short story a while back and just looked at it again. Could you give me some constructive criticism? Pretty please?? Thanks!The day I arrive, Mother stuffs me in the dark closet to wait. She places me inside a cardboard box, filled with the other toys. There is a necklace, a set of paints, two…[Read more]
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Ingrid replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@dragon-snapper Come back! I didn’t mean it!
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Ingrid replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@daeus I know, right?
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Snapper replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
Even the king is against me.
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Snapper replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@ingridrd *cough* Dragons are our friends.
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Ingrid replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago

No offense to @dragon-snapper. -
Ingrid replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@emily-d The story of my life…lol
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Ingrid replied to the topic Character/Story Theme Songs in the forum Music 8 years, 6 months ago
@catwing Glad to be of service! All of those songs are great, btw.
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Snapper replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
There. I made one!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
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Snapper replied to the topic Character/Story Theme Songs in the forum Music 8 years, 6 months ago
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@emily Enya! (Watch, I’m not going to die this time) *lives* Isn’t it awesome! 😀
Well, I was listening to some videogame music, but it was scratchy, so I turned to my battle playlist.
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Snapper replied to the topic Character/Story Theme Songs in the forum Music 8 years, 6 months ago
@emily … Um… *shrugs* Maybe it comes from the term, “It’s to die for…” ? Which never made sense to me because if you died for it then you can’t have it. Okay, so I didn’t die. I pretended to die. I’m still alive!

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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
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Snapper replied to the topic Is This Any Good? in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
It kinda disconnects me in a way. Even in third person narratives, you can reach this point where you feel like stuff in the story is happening right now. But dairy entries interrupt that for me. They serve as a constant reminder that the action I am reading about has happened already which is a bit distancing. Maybe it’s just me.
Nope. I’m w…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner #10 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@allison-grace @emily @ingridrd @daeus @catwing @epicaddie2 Baring unforeseen circumstances such as dog or something else, I’m writing for the next hourish.
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