Anne Swiftblade

@emma-flournoy
@daeus

On similes using heaven and hell, I think its ok sparingly. The reason I say sparingly is because you don’t want to trivialize heaven and hell into a byword.

@emma-flournoy

Here I must disagree with you, though I’m glad you agreed with me first off.
God specifically tells us not to swear by heaven or e…[Read more]

@emma-flournoy
@daeus

On similes using heaven and hell, I think its ok sparingly. The reason I say sparingly is because you don’t want to trivialize heaven and hell into a byword.

Here I must disagree with you, though I’m glad you agreed with me first off.
God specifically tells us not to swear by heaven or earth. VERY S…[Read more]

Also @daeus, there’s an old post floating around that Reagan wrote called Should you include Cussing in your story? I encourage you to go read it. I remember reading it when it first came out and it has stuck with me since.

@dragon-snapper @daeus Great. 🙂

Great point @dragon-snapper, Though I may alright in reading it to an extent, (It’s why I am learning to be careful with what books I recommend on KP and write book reviews on) I know that some readers are highly sensitive, and causing them to stumble is the last thing we want to do.

Also, we must remember that we need to strive to glorify God…[Read more]

@daeus @bluejay @winter-rose Here I am!

@daeus Well, I don’t think that cursing or coarse language should be in a book, or in movies, or anywhere. I have a few reason that I’d like to point out (please keep in mind that I haven’t read much of the other points that people have made. )
1. When I read, words stand out to me. Each word has a meaning. So, the word stays in my head for…[Read more]

@daeus Well, I don’t think that cursing or coarse language should be in a book, or in movies, or anywhere. I have a few reason that I’d like to point out (please keep in mind that I haven’t read any of the other points that people have made.
1. When I read, words stand out to me. Each word has a meaning. So, the word stays in my head for whatever…[Read more]

@winter-rose Great.
@perfectfifths I’m editing now. I don’t know quite when I’m going to stop. Feel free to join us.

@winter-rose Great.
@perfectfifths I’m editing now. I don’t know quite when I’m going to stop. So feel free to going us.

@nataliemarie Welcome, welcome, welcome and er…welcome. 🙂
Oooo poetry. I’m just getting in to that. I’d love to read some *puppy dog eyes* please???????
Anyway, as Daeus said, this is the bestestist place on the interent, so enjoy your time here. 🙂

@natliemarie Welcome, welcome, welcome and er…welcome. 🙂
Oooo poetry. I’m just getting in to that. I’d love to read some *puppy dog eyes* please???????
Anyway, as Daeus said, this is the bestestist place on the interent, so enjoy your time here. 🙂

@jess @overcomer @winter-rose @daeus @kate-flournoy @dragon-snapper @perfectfifths (I thought I’d introduce you to the bestestist forum on KP) @anyone I’ve forgotten.
I’m editing right now, is there anyone who wishes to join me?
@perfectfifths So how this works is you find someone who wishes to write with you and you set a time, i.e an hour. You…[Read more]

@jess @overcomer @winter-rose @daeus @kate-flournoy @dragon-snapper @perfectfifths (I thought I’d introduce you to the bestestist forum on KP) @anyone I’ve forgotten.
I’m editing right now, is there anyone who wishes to join me?
@perfectfifths So how this works is you find someone who wishes to write with you and you set a time, i.e an hour. You…[Read more]

For me personally, I am not someone who is sensitive to language within a novel. It only bothers me if it is used too often and without a true purpose other than to shock a reader. In your case, as a reader of your book, I would not have a problem with it because you use it sparingly and only when you feel that you have a good reason. There have…[Read more]

@mark-kamibaya Is your unreleased quote from Rogue 1?

@mark-kamibaya That’s fine. I understand that it was an insanely long post. 😛

@perfectfifths: sorry I’m a little late but welcome! Another music person! Perfect fifths are great. Unfortunately, I don’t have the privilege of living in Australia. I’m stuck in the good ol’ USA. Hearing about other countries always fascinates me. What is it like over there? Is it as pretty as everyone says?

“It’s okay to have dreams, as long as you don’t believe in them too much.”
Quote that!
That might be too easy.