Anne of Lothlorien

@anne-of-lothlorien *gasp* How selfish! Why, the most humble dragon on earth would never do that!
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Hello everybody tagged below!

I’ve got a bunch of unfinished drafts of stories (plus the finished draft for the Pilot for Aquila) and I was wondering if any of you would like to alpha-read some of them (and, perhaps, beta-read the finished draft). I need input on what I’m working on because I’ve got some stories I’m stuck on.

So, for those of…[Read more]

@anne-of-lothlorien Older, though two people now have thought he was younger (weird… XD)

Ooh, that’s a great idea. How can you not be suing talking animals when you can have scenes like that??

Another idea (feel free to poo-poo it completely 😉 ) what if she doesn’t know (at least at first) it’s an anaconda, she’s just hearing its voice and…[Read more]

@anne-of-lothlorien

It’s my online alias. It’s a clever (I think) modification of my real name, which I am not prepared to share on a publically accessible website. 😛 You pronounce the Leu part of my name like you pronounce the Leu in Leukocyte or Leukemia. It used to be Lee-oo, then Lay-oo, now it’s just Lou. 😛

@anne-of-lothlorien Haha! Yeah–absolutely. Our facebook account can be found here: https://www.facebook.com/kingdompen/ You should be able to access it without having a Facebook.

@anne-of-lothlorien I’m assuming she finds out it’s a snake when she feels the scales and long body??? 😐 …. Yes, of course 😛

I don’t think he wants it to be too cheesy

I honestly don’t think, when done the right way, talking animals are cheesy at all. I love the Jungle Book (the actual book 😉 ) In it, Mowgli learns the languages of the a…[Read more]

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Okay, fair enough. 😛 You could ask him what he’s using, or if I get into contact with him myself, I could ask. 😛

And, yes, I am @perfectfifths‘ brother. 🙂

Also… I’m not sure how an anaconda takes care of its young… I don’t know. I’m sorry if I’m sounding like I’m picking apart your brother’s story, it’s just I find it…[Read more]

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Okay, fair enough. 😛 You could ask him what he’s using, or if I get into contact with him myself, I could ask. 😛

And, yes, I am @perfectfifths‘ brother. 🙂

Also… I’m not sure how an anaconda takes care of its young… I don’t know. I’m sorry if I’m sounding like I’m picking apart your brother’s story, it’s just I find it…[Read more]

@anne-of-lothlorien @leumeister Yes, that’s him. I told you he’d make himself known 😉 😀

@Anne-of-Lothlorien – Your first poem is beautiful! I’m not very good at poetry, so I’m afraid I won’t be able to give any suggestions, but I love the imagery you used. 🙂

And…I loved your Star Wars poem! It was great! It’s so true…those with the most wisdom oftentimes have the roughest lives. 😉

@anne-of-lothlorien My brother’s an animator too 😉 Though he’ll probably tell you that since he’s in that long list of tags

First off, I think the South American version of the crocodileormaybeanaligator is the caiman.

I do want to know as well why the animals don’t talk. Like @Northerner said, it would make for some funny dialogue, plus it…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper *looks up butcher bird to make sure I got it right* Yeah, I think that’s it 😉 I think it was a young one, because it had more brown feathers (hence thinking it was a kookaburra, if you know what they look like)

Oh, cool! We don’t have woodpeckers here. At the very least, I’ve never seen one 😉

@anne-of-lothlorien @aratrea That’s…[Read more]

@Anne-of-Lothlorien the first is beautiful and the second hilarious. XD

@Anne-of-Lothlorien what @Daeus said. 😛

@Anne-of-Lothlorien I don’t see anything to pick at, but there’s not much more than externals here. Here are my questions to get to the heart of the story.

1. What’s the girl’s inner longing? e.g. she wants her parents to be reunited.
2. What’s the girl’s story goal? e.g. get back to her parents. (it’s best if her longing and goal can be closely…[Read more]

@anne-of-lothlorien The first “I don’t know” is Mackenzie; the second is Rolena’s sister who came along for the ride.

@dragon-snapper Here’s the picture Anne was referring to. There are more photos on our social media accounts if you’re able to access them!

@anne-of-lothlorien The first “I don’t know” is Mackenzie; the second is Rolena’s sister who came along for the ride.

@dragon-snapper Here’s the picture Anne was referring to. There are more photos on our social media accounts if you’re able to access them!

@anne-of-lothlorien The first “I don’t know” is Mackenzie; the second is Rolena’s sister who came along for the ride.

@dragon-snapper Here’s the picture Anne was referring to. There are more photos on our social media accounts if you’re able to access them!

@anne-of-lothlorien The first “I don’t know” is Mackenzie; the second is Rolena’s sister who came along for the ride.

Maybe it’s just because I’m recovering from Harry Potter at the moment, but I like the twist of the giant snake being friendly and worthy of trust. And it could make for some good character developement for it to be her guide when she’s blind. (And some humour, as the poor snakey tries to prove its care and concern for her well-being stem from…[Read more]