Anne of Lothlorien

@His-Instrument Aaahh, you too. Many times over. 😀

@ariella-newheart  Another cookie? Why, thank you!!

Yesss, I’m sitting on pins and needles waiting to join

@ariella-newheart  Sure! Thanks so much!

@ariella-newheart  That’s okay. *pats you on shoulder* 😉

COOKIE! *pounces*

… Um, yeah okay, do that XD

@ariella-newheart  Oh! Okay so the rank you get depends on how many posts you’ve made on the forums. Here is a list:

• Bumbling Henchman: 0-20 posts
• Charismatic Rebel: 20-50 posts
• Wise Jester: 50-100 posts
• Loyal Sidekick: 100-300 posts
• Knight in Shining Armor: 300-1000 posts
• Eccentric Mentor: 1000-2000 posts
• Chosen One: 2000+ posts

@ariella-newheart <3 <3 <3  It doesn’t help that I already REALLY wanted to play The Aetherlight. But after reading that, I REEEEEEEEAALLLLLLLYYY want to play it!!

@Dragon-snapper yeah. They said it. 😛

@Dragon-Snapper I’m just gonna shove this on you because this taught me almost everything I know about choppiness.

And as far as action/dialogue tags… that’s when things get tricky. Like Daeus said, it’s a complicated dance of changing up the pattern of things. What I’ve found helps is when you take a basic action and elaborate on it. Don’t…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper  Oh, didn’t see your earlier post. Byeeeee

@dragon-snapper  Still here?

@skredder  Well done! See ya later 😀

@dekreel @skredder I’m signing out now. I really didn’t get that much done. Wrote about 150 words, read some articles about choppy writing, and resolved I need to read more.

@dragon-snapper  Ohhhh, I see

Yup. Gamma and epsilon are Greek.

@dekreel Well, I was going by the military version. Gamma an Epsilon… I think those are Greek? Or some other version.

I don’t know. That’s just what I’m calling them.

@dragon-snapper Ahhh, interesting! 🙂

Why aren’t they called Gamma and Epsilon? (Honestly Charlie and Echo are awesome names, it’s just…)

@dekreel Alpha – 1st readers of unedited work.
Beta – 2nd readers of 1st edits
Charlie – 3rd readers of 2nd edits.
Delta – 4th readers of 3rd edits.
Echo – 5th readers of 4th edits.
And so forth. I don’t know if this actually exists.

@dragon-snapper  Alpha? Beta? Charlie?! How many types of proofreading are there?!

@warrenluther04 Lol. *pats shoulder* There there. You’re only ah… two months late.

LOL Yes you can read it. BUT, you’ll probably have to wait a bit until I’m done with this round of edits. Then, I’ll ask for another round of beta-readers (charlie-readers). But I will need that kind of people, so I’ll be sure to tag you if you’re available…[Read more]