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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Critique, anyone? in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 7 months ago
Yep, what @Ethryndal said, even though I didn’t know what it meant. @R-J-Wordsmith
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Love Triangles— what the Classical Authors knew that we don't. in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
That’s awesome @Vanna! Perfect use of foil characters and thematic contrasts. *thumbs up* Sounds like you absolutely nailed a good (skillful rather 😉 ) love triangle.
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Rachelle's "Hello" in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 7 months ago
@rachelle Ooh, digital art, how neat! AND comicy cartoony things. I guess you get the added satisfaction of being an artist and a writer at the same time. 🙂 One day I’m going to try some of that stuff… But at the moment, I stick to pencil, with a bit of water-color mixed in. I mainly do people too, though I’m more of a portrait artist.
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Critique, anyone? in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 7 months ago
@r-j-wordsmith There’s nothing so tragically wonderful as a sad story, and boy, you’ve written a good one. I have nothing further to add to what has already been pointed out, but I will say that I agree with you about the condemned sign. (Even though I didn’t know what it meant either. 🙂 ) If the house goes for sale, readers would be left to…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Calling all KeePers— the Realm of Pen needs you! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
New topic.
Potatoes.@Ethryndal @GracieGirl @Hope @Emma-Flournoy @Winter-Rose @The-Bean @Rolena-Hatfield @R-J-Wordsmith
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Calling all KeePers— the Realm of Pen needs you! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
New topic.
Potatoes.@Ethryndal @GracieGirl @Hope @Emma-Flournoy @Winter-Rose @The-Bean @Rolena-Hatfield
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Calling all KeePers— the Realm of Pen needs you! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
Each door was painted with a different name in careful golden letters, and each name just as carefully crossed out.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Theme Mastery Q&A in the forum Theme Mastery 9 years, 7 months ago
@Aratrea Monday, Feb. 27th at 7-8 pm EST is the only one that’ll work for me. This sounds super exciting and I’d love to do it, but if I’m out-voted don’t worry about leaving me out of the rotation. 😉
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Ethryndal replied to the topic The Fears of a Writer in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
@Daeus I’m not even going to attempt to read that list…yeesh, I didn’t know the writerly kind were such cowards! XD
@Dragon-Snapper *gasps* Is it an Elven cloak???
Now. I wouldn’t be completely honest if I didn’t say my biggest fear was letting other people read my stuff. Even the thought of giving my writing to someone else makes me want to…[Read more]
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Rachelle's "Hello" in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 7 months ago
@Rachelle Human, elf, or dragon? 😉
Excellent choice, Lord of the Rings. Ever read the Silmarillion? (I ask because I’m currently reading it and need support…) What do you like to draw/paint? (And while we’re on the subject, is it drawing or painting? I’m an artist also; I appreciate that kind of thing. 🙂 ) Welcome to the Kingdom! Beware the…[Read more]
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Rachelle's "Hello" in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 7 months ago
@Rachelle Human, elf, or dragon? 😉
Excellent choice, Lord of the Rings. Ever read the Silmarillion? (I ask because I’m currently reading it and need support…) What do you like to draw/paint? (And while we’re on the subject, is it drawing or painting? I’m an artist too, I appreciate this kind of thing. 🙂 )
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Homework for Videos 6-8: Developing Character Arcs in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 7 months ago
@aratrea Ah, okay. My sister pointed out the left-field thing as well. I’m spending some brain juice on it. I’ve got a rough catalyst for Mash #2, but I’m going over that one also and trying to make it more…catalystic.
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Theme Mastery Q&A in the forum Theme Mastery 9 years, 7 months ago
@aratrea Wow, this sounds cool. Either the 24th or the 25th will probably work for me, but I’m pretty sure the 27th won’t, unless I’m blessed with a miracle. 😀
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Theme Mastery Q&A in the forum Theme Mastery 9 years, 7 months ago
@aratrea Wow, this sounds cool. Either the 24th or the 25th will probably work for me, but the 27th I’m pretty sure won’t, unless I’m blessed with a miracle. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Calling all KeePers— the Realm of Pen needs you! in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
Whoa @Ethryndal that could get crazy. *grins* Thank you.
Of the thirteen blank, sterile white doors in the blank, sterile grey wall, one was painted a soft shade of creamy yellow. Pasted in ugly xs all across it were strips of yellow tape marked DANGER. DO NOT ENTER.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Critique, anyone? in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 7 months ago
This should totally be a children’s book. With the right illustrations it would be perfect. I love it. As Emma pointed out, a few errors as far as punctuation and spelling, but otherwise it’s lovely. Good work, @R-J-Wordsmith.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Critique, anyone? in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 7 months ago
This should totally be a children’s book. With the right illustrations it would be perfect. I love it. As Emma pointed out, a few errors as far as punctuation and spelling, but otherwise it’s lovely. Good work, @R-J-Wordsmith.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Critique, anyone? in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 7 months ago
@R-J-Wordsmith Ooh, I like that. It’s nicely short, but you still made it interesting and fit the story in.
*sniff*
I’m not sure I caught the meaning of the ‘condemned’ sign though; she died, but I don’t know any better than the mailbox what the sign means. 😛
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Rachelle's "Hello" in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 7 months ago
Hello and welcome @Rachelle! Do you play any instrument? Have you read Les Miserables?
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic The Fears of a Writer in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 7 months ago
that if my work can impact just one life for Christ, I’ll have succeeded.
@R-J-Wordsmith Yes.
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