Anne of Lothlorien

@daeus @jenali I’m signing off as well. I wrote 1100 words, and conquered a rough spot in the running of the plot. for the most part, I’m happy with what I got done.

@emma-flournoy Sawyer is the only one at the door (I’ll try and make that clearer). The word is definitely ‘prised’. Good points. Yeah, I need to get rid of those habits… 😛

@daeus Coolio.

@daeus I found your conflict. Work is getting in the way of writing.

@daeus Ooh, nice. Conflict is always nice. 😀

@jenali Huzzah!

@jenali @winter-rose @that_writer_girl_99 @graciegirl @daeus @kate-flournoy I’m going to see how well I can write, even though I can’t see anything because of the glare. 😛

@jenali @winter-rose @that_writer_girl_99 @graciegirl @daeus @kate-flournoy I’m going to see how well I can write, even though I can’t see anything because of the glare. LP

@That_Writer_Girl_99 yeah. What he said. XD

Here are some things. I guess some of them were there with the previous excerpts too, I just didn’t remember them all (or didn’t have time to be thorough enough, which is also possible. :P).

Halle… Moonglade. Yes. That was the perfect name. Sure, she’d attempted to write several books, leaving them unfinished… but this was different. Yes, she’d…[Read more]

@That_Writer_Girl_99 ooooohhhh… you know what? It looks like you’ve got really good potential here for a disillusionment story. I really, really love the idea of the world outside being even worse than the prison.
What do you know about theme/message and building your story around it?
Because if you do have the world outside be worse than the…[Read more]

@That_Writer_Girl_99 no, I know. It isn’t. 😛 Have you come up with any ideas so far? Need help brainstorming? Seriously, just dump them all right here and I’ll help you pick through them if I can. That’s what we do here. We’re all writers after all… 😉 Even if you think the ideas are dumb, please— share them. I have dumb ideas all the time.…[Read more]

@That_Writer_Girl_99

Wow.
Okay, first of all, may I just say congratulations on the very strong character voice. Most people go for the snazzy voices of characters like Tam to carry their story if it’s first person, but I love the subtle yet very distinct tone of Kara’s. It’s beautiful.

In fact, your prose itself is actually very strong, and I…[Read more]

@That_Writer_Girl_99 I totally get that. You’ll be fine. I promise. 😉 Tag me when you do post and I’ll get back to you with opinions as soon as I’ve done a thorough read through. 🙂

@That_Writer_Girl_99 ha. XD Not at all…

@That_Writer_Girl_99 *salutes* reporting for duty! And really, we’re not monsters. 😀 Just start a new topic over in General Writing Discussions or something and we’ll have a nice little critiquing party with cake and brownies and punch for everyone. 😀 (Virtual, of course. *wink*)

@alia. What don’t you like about Ten? He was funny and clever (and I loved how he’d wear a trench coat and Converse). (It was a shame he couldn’t use his Scottish accent…)
Nine was good (like bananas). I’m going to miss Twelve after this season… 🙁
*cue sad rendition of the Doctor Who theme*

@alia Ten. Twelve is a really close second, then eleven and four are together another close third.

@alia Yes. The Whovian is here! How may I be of your service?

Haha. Thanks, @that_writer_girl_99. It took me a good five minutes to decide which TARDIS picture I wanted to use…