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Snapper replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 4 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 You have no idea.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 4 months ago
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
I shall say farewell now. I edited about 2 chapters, or 20 pages. Adios!
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Yay, @Daeus!
I’m going too, guys. I wrote and edited my blog post.
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@delightinlife Well, I really don’t know enough about the story to be of any help in what sort of situation it could be. But as far as his reaction; how about anger? Anger at the injustice—not a bad thing—but it makes him explode when he should have behaved quietly and calmly.
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@DAeus @Dragon-snapper @winter-rose I’m here too. I’m attempting to write a blog post.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@daeus *shuffles feet and shifts around in melted chair* Erm…yes. I know…it’s rather crazy…but it’s worth a shot… I might not get to some of them, but they’re the best ideas I’ve had in a while. Besides, novellas should only take about a month to write, right? That’s an entire years worth of writing. Yikes.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@daeus I’ll be researching/planning/brainstorming 10 novellas/novelettes.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@Daeus it just doesn’t like me. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Okay @Daeus my post does not appear to be showing up. My guess is it got spammed.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 wow, that took an unexpected turn. 😛 I love it. Good job with the prose. 😉
You’re right though, the shift in Matthias is pretty obvious.
And… that might actually be a problem. It’s perfectly fine for him to change his personality as you write him; that’s not what I’m worried about. It’s that the Matthias we meet first and…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 wow, that took an unexpected turn. 😛 I love it. Good job with the prose. 😉
You’re right though, the shift in Matthias is pretty obvious.
And… that might actually be a problem. It’s perfectly fine for him to change his personality as you write him; that’s not what I’m worried about. It’s that the Matthias we meet first and…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@That-Writer_Girl_99 wow, that took an unexpected turn. 😛 I love it. Good job with the prose. 😉
You’re right though, the shift in Matthias is pretty obvious.
And… that might actually be a problem. It’s perfectly fine for him to change his personality as you write him; that’s not what I’m worried about. It’s that the Matthias we meet first and…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 well I’m here now. XD *folds hands primly**ahem* You had a question?
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@That_writer_girl_99 *jumps in late AGAIN to respond to something that happened four pages ago* Yup, Sarcastic Elf. That’s me. Summed up and wrapped in glittery perfection in two incredibly awesome words. *bows*
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Shorty Story – Mystery in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@dragon-snapper I’m always going to call them Shorty Stories from now on. XD
Now. The first few paragraphs, though I didn’t really find confusing, needed a little more development. They’re just sitting by the window at midnight?! How about you make mention that Jack had woken Daniel up or something? Also, it seems like you had trouble remembering…[Read more]
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Shorty Story – Mystery in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@dragon-snapper I’m always going to call them Shorty Stories from now on. XD
Now. The first few paragraphs, though I didn’t really find confusing, needed a little more development. They’re just sitting by the window at midnight?! Also, it seems like you had trouble remembering which brother is the MC.
“Thieves?”
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Lightningmouse replied to the topic Writing Contests (USA) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Well, I don’t really know about many contests myself that you could enter (though I heard of an annual short story writing contest awhile ago I forgot most of the stuff about it. I’ll get back to you when I find it 🙂 ), but I’d advise looking in official places for them (college websites, Writer’s Digest magazine (…[Read more]
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Ethryndal replied to the topic Ren in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@perfectfifths *falls off chair and chokes laughing* I’m an elf, okay? This Galaxy stuff is beyond me.
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Keleigha Liess posted an update 9 years, 4 months ago
@ethryndal So, I am curious, are you and Anne of Lothlorein any sort of relations?
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@ceaseless-prayer Erm…no, not really. Don’t even know each other except through KP. Now I’m curious—why’d you think so? *lowers voice* Is it because of the elf thing? 😉
Hehe, well, sort of, more because you guys picked the same “country/ region” whatever. ;), & because you talk sort of similarly, if that makes sense. 😉 I notice my sisters & I tend to say things in similar ways. So, do you have any siblings or anything on KP? 🙂
That’s so funny! I never realized that. Maybe we’re long lost sisters or something. 😛
Alas, I have no siblings on KP. I like to pretend that everyone’s my siblings to combat the loneliness. 😉 How about you? Is your sister on KP?
Maybe!! Haha.
Yes, I am blessed, I have three sisters on KP. 😉 You’re welcome to share, if you like. ;p Do you have any siblings?
Aw, that’s so cool! I have two siblings, a brother and a sister.
So how long have you been on KP? I don’t recall seeing you around that much.