@anna-brie
Active 6 years, 3 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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ClaireC posted a new activity comment 8 years, 2 months ago
@anna-brie, sorry forgot the ‘@’ symbol in front of your name!
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BlueJay replied to the topic Welcome Says Me! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 2 months ago
@gideon-sowdon It’s very simple. Let’s use yours as an example. So click on your profile picture and you can see what your tag is @gideon-sowdon. Click on mine and it is @bluejay. Not everyone has their tag as their name. As in, Greta is her name, @gretald is her tag. Does that make sense? You’ll start to memorize them the more you use them.…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic W.I.P. Lounge Club (Writers Only!) in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 2 months ago
I love the idea of Rapunzel, and your story sounds interesting, @anna-brie . Kidnapped princesses are a fairly common stereotype. It should be a fun challenge making it fresh for your readers. (If you plan on publishing it.) 🙂
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ClaireC replied to the topic Welcome Says Me! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 2 months ago
@gideon-sowdon. And just because I’m curious (I know, curiosity killed the cat!) Who’s older? Anna-brie, or Gideon? @anna-brie
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ClaireC replied to the topic Alternative Historical Fiction Book Premise in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
@daeus, @ingridrd, @gretald, @kate-flournoy, @jadamae, @anna-brie, emma-flournoy, @dragon-snapper, @blujay, @aratrea, @sarah-h, @winter-rose, @overcomer. I wrote out this long and detailed reply to you all, explaining all the things you were wondering about. And then…I accidentally shut down my computer and lost the whole thing! 🙁 So I’m sorry…[Read more]
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ClaireC replied to the topic Welcome Says Me! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 2 months ago
Whoo hoo! another Aussie! Welcome brother-of-@anna-brie, @gideon-sowdon! I’m from Brisbane! 🙂
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ClaireC replied to the topic Structure and Character Arcs in the forum Characters 8 years, 2 months ago
I have to agree with @anna-brie. But as @sarah-h said, I’ve never really heard of any others.
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Structure and Character Arcs in the forum Characters 8 years, 2 months ago
Sure will. @theliterarycrusader @bluejay @claireC @Anna-Brie @overcomer @gretald @jess @timothy-young @dragon-snapper @julia-r @hislittlerose @spradlin @hannah-c @winter-rose @graciekry @aratrea @everyone-else-that-I-missed.
I’ve actually only heard of the Three Act Structure, so I didn’t have the luxury of picking favorites. I’d rather keep…[Read more]
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Structure and Character Arcs in the forum Characters 8 years, 2 months ago
Sure will. @the-literary-crusader @bluejay @claireC @Anna-Brie @overcomer @gretald @jess @timothy-young @dragonsnapper @julia-r @hislittlerose @spradlin @everyone-else-that-I-missed.
I’ve actually only heard of the Three Act Structure, so I didn’t have the luxury of picking favorites. I’d rather keep quiet and learn from everyone else; I’m not…[Read more]
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Jess replied to the topic Plot help please! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
@anna-brie, well since my target audience is more sci-fi/dystopian, I’m good with that. 🙂
I love your idea! (The first one.) I don’t think twins would exactly work for this one… -
Hope Ann replied to the topic Quick Critique in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 2 months ago
@anna-brie Sorry, I just realized I never replied to you. *sheepish grin* I’m hoping to traditionally published…hopefully at Enclave. Though if that doesn’t work, I will publish myself. But even if a publisher does write a blurb for me (which I’d love) I like to have my own for blog work and stuff.
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Rolena Hatfield replied to the topic Howdy! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 2 months ago
@Luke-C Hi Luke! Glad you’ve joined us here at KP! I’ve only dabbled in film making and found it’s lots of fun and a lot of retakes! Have you created any short films?
@anna-brie yes, yes please have your brother join!
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
Hey, 🙂
So, I have this poem from last year that I know needs some work, (ahem, a lot) but before I hacked it to pieces I thought I would share it first and see what y’all think.
Does it make any sense? Do you have any suggestions? Any ideas? Give me your harshest criticism! Hahaha! 😉 (Seriously, please do! And tell me if it’s terrible!…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
Hey, 🙂
So, I have this poem from last year that I know needs some work, (ahem, a lot) but before I hacked it to pieces I thought I would share it first and see what y’all think.
Does it make any sense? Do you have any suggestions? Any ideas? Give me your harshest criticism! Hahaha! 😉 (Seriously, please do! And tell me if it’s terrible!…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
Hey, 🙂
So, I have this poem from last year that I know needs some work, (ahem, a lot) but before I hacked it to pieces I thought I would share it first and see what y’all think.
Does it make any sense? Do you have any suggestions? Any ideas? Give me your harshest criticism! Hahaha! 😉 (Seriously, please do! And tell me if it’s terrible!…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
Hey, 🙂
So, I have this poem from last year that I know needs some work, (ahem, a lot) but before I hacked it to pieces I thought I would share it first and see what y’all think.
Does it make any sense? Do you have any suggestions? Any ideas? Give me your harshest criticism! Hahaha! 😉 (Seriously, please do! And tell me if it’s terrible!…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
Hey, 🙂
So, I have this poem from last year that I know needs some work, (ahem, a lot) but before I hacked it to pieces I thought I would share it first and see what y’all think.
Does it make any sense? Do you have any suggestions? Any ideas? Give me your harshest criticism! Hahaha! 😉 (Seriously, please do! And tell me if it’s terrible!…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic Editing Advice (Poem) in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 2 months ago
Hey, 🙂
So, I have this poem from last year that I know needs some work, (ahem, a lot) but before I hacked it to pieces I thought I would share it first and see what y’all think.
Does it make any sense? Do you have any suggestions? Any ideas? Give me your harshest criticism! Hahaha! 😉 (Seriously, please do! And tell me if it’s terrible!…[Read more]
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BlueJay posted a new activity comment 8 years, 2 months ago
@anna-brie I hope to make a difference one day. My younger sister wants to publish a set of stories about a cat called Chaos, that I’ve written, so maybe one day….
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BlueJay posted an update 8 years, 2 months ago
I have got BIG news. (No I didn’t just get engaged.) I entered a writing competition a few months ago and the presentation for the prizes was last night. I had just moved out of the 14-18yrs, so I was against adults. *nervous gulp* But here are the results.
Adult short story – Anna’s Savanna – 1st place
Adult poetry – I’m proud to be Australian -…[Read more]-
Wow!! Way to go, @Bluejay! Great work! Congratulations! So proud of you. 😀
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@kate-flournoy Oh, thanks. 🙂 I was so shocked when it happened. 😀
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Wow, @bluejay , that’s awesome! 😀
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I hope we get to read some of this stuff …
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@overcomer *taps side of nose* You might… *mysterious grin* 😀
And thanks. 🙂
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That’s fantastic and super exciting! Congratulations! I love the fact that we have amazing KeePers who are sharing their stories. Great work! 🙂 🙂 🙂
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From stories shared, we learn. 🙂 @christi-eaton I should go in for quote making. 😛
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You totally should @bluejay 🙂 Who knows I may have to use some of your stuff. I love quotes, and accidentally stumbling across good ones 🙂
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Sweet @bluejay! 🙂
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😉 @daeus Totally (please tell me that you’ve seen Finding Nemo.)
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@bluejay I have. What does that have to do with this?
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I got it! 😀
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@christi-eaton & @julia-r Yay! You got it. 🙂
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@bluejay– Awesome! That’s so cool! Writing competitions scare me. Way to be brave!
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@julia-r Writing competitions can be scary. I felt sick as we were driving over. But it is a great reward for all the hard work put into story writing.
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Congratulations! That’s really exciting. You keep writing those stories, and someday you’ll make a difference in the world.
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@anna-brie I hope to make a difference one day. My younger sister wants to publish a set of stories about a cat called Chaos, that I’ve written, so maybe one day….
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Woo Hoo! Way to go, @bluejay
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@clairec Thank you. 🙂
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Congratulations, @bluejay!!!!!! That is so exciting!
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@hope I still can’t believe that it’s happened!!!!!!! Thanks.
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@dragon-snapper Finding writing competitions is definitely hard. I only know one or two.
*grins* No worries. *takes one of the ice creams and sits licking it happily*-
@dragon-snapper For some reason your comment has disappeared. 🙁 Did you want to write a new one? 😉
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*sniffs pitifully* It doesn’t like me!!! Wahhh!
Anyways, I said something about finding KP in my search for writing competitions, and Congratulations!-
@dragon-snapper I think it was partly my fault. Did you “reply” to the comment I sent to Hope. Cause I found a spelling error in my message, after you had posted, and so I deleted it and made a new message and it probably took yours too. You can go to you history if you wanted to find out what you said.
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DUDETTE!!!! THIS IS SO AWESOME!!!! *high fives all around* SERIOUSLY AWESOME JOB! I am so proud of you! 😀 😀 😀
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*returns high five* Ah, thanks Sarah. 😀 😀 😀
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Oh, wow @bluejay! That’s awesome! Much applause! 😀
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🙂 😀 🙂 😀 🙂 😀 🙂 😀 Thank you. 🙂 😀 🙂 😀 🙂 😀 🙂 😀 🙂
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Yay!!! That’s so exciting! I would’ve been so nervous to go up against adults. Good for you! 🙂 Would you mind posting Chaos and The Drummer Boy? I’d sure like to read them. 🙂
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@sarah-h I was nervous. Extremely nervous. I only expected a highly commended. I will definitely let you read Chaos and The Drummer Boy. I shall send them to @spradlin for publishing. (Only with Chaos, it’s a series of stories which if you read number 3. (which this one is) it won’t make much sense. I shall have to send in 1 & 2.
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@bluejay Great! I can’t wait to read them! 🙂
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Hey, hey! @bluejay That’s awesome! 😀 😀 😀 😀 CONGRATULATIONS. <3
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Thanks @gretald
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So happy for you, @bluejay! Congratulations!
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@ingridrd 🙂 😀 🙂 😀 Thanks.
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You rock, dude! (How’s that for a Finding Nemo reference. 😛 )
You won ALL the categories??!!
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Sweet…..Totally! 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 There were more categories, but those four were the ones I entered. 🙂
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So you won all four of the ones you entered!!
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@emma-flournoy I only got an encouragement award for one of the categories. 🙂
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Oh whoops…it says that. 😛
But still!
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Wow–that’s awesome @bluejay! Congrats!!!
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Thanks @aratrea 🙂
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@jadamae Thank you. Well, I thought people might get a bit confused as we had just been told BIG news and then I said I had BIG news. 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Aw @winter-rose Thank you.
You guys are all so awesome. 🙂
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@clairec Thanks for the reminder. I’m sure I don’t thank Mommy enough for all that she does for us. I’ve begun to realize that she doesn’t have such a thing as free time; we 5 children take it all up. It’s hard for me to imagine making a sacrifice like that, every day, all my life like she has, and I really appreciate her. Three cheers for…[Read more]
@sarah-h. I call my parents Mummy and Daddy, but when I’m talking to other people, I generally say Mum and Dad.