@anna-brie
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Faith Kindred replied to the topic HALP! (Blog Titles Are Literally the Worst) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
The Author’s Staccato(s), maybe? 😛 Uh… Staccato… Umm… Wow. -_- I’ve been reading this topic for a while now, and let me just say – @spradlin, I totally get why you’re beating your head against the wall. This is insanely hard (and I only just started 😛 🙁 )
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BlueJay replied to the topic HALP! (Blog Titles Are Literally the Worst) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
How about:
Sarah’s Staccato Notes
Noted Staccatos
Notes of Staccato
Spradlin’s Staccato Notes
Super Staccato Notes
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BlueJay replied to the topic HALP! (Blog Titles Are Literally the Worst) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
Sweet Staccatos?
I think Staccato Notes would work well too. 😛 -
BlueJay replied to the topic A letter for my story in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
So let’s get some guys onto this topic. *Stares hard at them* I’m stuck. 🙁 And I’m dying to find out how my story ends. HELP!!
@aratrea
@dbhgodreigns
@lightningmouse
@levipierpont
@markmcguire
@daniel-leinad-thompson-2-2-2
@reaganramm
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BlueJay replied to the topic HALP! (Blog Titles Are Literally the Worst) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
Whoa! I LOVE that idea. @spradlin. I love sing Staccato. It is really fun and uses a lot of tummy muscles. Do you sing? I do. I’m in the soprano range which is very special. (I just have to remember to practise.)
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BlueJay replied to the topic HALP! (Blog Titles Are Literally the Worst) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
Sticky Notes.
Notes of Harmony
Whole Notes
Notes from a Composer
(So those above involve music. I’ll see if I can think of some different ones later) 😀 -
Faith Kindred replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
I fake a laugh. This guy is really getting on my nerves. “Yep, that’s what it is alright.”
He ducks back through the door and a moment later it expands into normal height.
“Voila!” I see him through the doorway with his hands raised triumphantly.
“H-how did you…the door…it just…”
He shrugs. “No biggie. Actually it’s pretty easy to use magic…[Read more] -
BlueJay posted an update 10 years, 5 months ago
“I am only one;
but still I am one.I cannot do everything,
but still I can do something.I will not refuse to do something
I can do.”-Helen Keller
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BlueJay replied to the topic A letter for my story in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
No. Re-phrase it should be nearly 8pm not 7pm.
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BlueJay replied to the topic A letter for my story in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
@daeus It’s tomorrow. 😀 No, it really is. Even though the time has flown by, it is definitely tomorrow. Plus we have just end day light savings. (Or started. I’m not sure which one.) So when I post this it should be nearly 7pm over there.
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Faith Kindred replied to the topic Little Problem Here in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
Wow, @kate-flournoy! I don’t normally like poetry that much, but believe me, you have a masterpiece here. 😉 I really enjoyed reading it!
Daeus got mostly everything. But I would change this,
The children’s feet! Upon the turf they running come to meet him,
To this:
The children’s feet! Upon the turf they’re running up to meet him,
or,
The c…[Read more]
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Faith Kindred replied to the topic Little Problem Here in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
Wow, @kate-flournoy! I don’t normally like poetry that much, but believe me, you have a masterpiece here. 😉 I really enjoyed reading it!
Daeus got mostly everything. But I would change this,
The children’s feet! Upon the turf they running come to meet him,
To this:
The children’s feet! Upon the turf they’re running up to meet him,
or,
The c…[Read more]
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Faith Kindred replied to the topic Little Problem Here in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
Wow, @kate-flournoy! I don’t normally like poetry that much, but believe me, you have a masterpiece here. 😉 I really enjoyed reading it!
@daeus got mostly everything. But I would change this,
The children’s feet! Upon the turf they running come to meet him,
To this:
The children’s feet! Upon the turf they’re running up to meet h…[Read more]
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BlueJay and
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BlueJay started the topic A letter for my story in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
Alright, this is aim mainly at men, due to the fact that the letter is by a guy, but if anyone has some helpful feedback I would appreciate it. Let me explain:
You teased a girl at school and got her into trouble all the time. On a wet day you run after her, and slip on the pavement. You crash into and she falls onto the road and is hit by a car.…[Read more]
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Faith Kindred replied to the topic Where do you live? in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
Wow, that’s great @bluejay. 🙂 Keep it up! And yeah, I think there are other states like that too. There’s a Union City, California and a Union City, Tennessee… probably even more.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Where do you live? in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
Coming from you, I’m sure it’s great.
Thanks @faithdk. That’s really sweet of you. Hopefully it will work out so you can read it. It is 6,686 words at the moment, which is my longest story yet.
Wow, that’s an interesting fact about Ohio and Indiana.
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Faith Kindred replied to the topic Where do you live? in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
@bluejay, one Indiana city bordering Ohio is Union City, and it’s actually pretty interesting because it is split between the two states (which is why it’s called “Union” City). Thus you have Union City, OH and Union City, IN. 😀 Its zip code is 47390. Some of its street names include: Ball Park Rd, Beverly Dr, Boggs Ave, Cadwallader St, and North…[Read more]
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Faith Kindred replied to the topic Where do you live? in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
@bluejay, one Indiana city bordering Ohio is Union City, and it’s actually pretty interesting because it is split between the two states (which is why it’s called “Union” City). Thus you have Union City, OH and Union City, IN. 😀 Its zip code is 47390. Some of its street names include: Ball Park Rd, Beverly Dr, Boggs Ave, Cadwallader St, and…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Where do you live? in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
Thanks @hope. Yep. That will work really well. I appreciate it.
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Awesome quote, Tessa! Helen Keller was an absolutely amazing person. 🙂
Thanks Greta. Yes, I absolutely agree with you. She was extremely amazing. I sometimes wonder if I would have been able to copy with it all.
That is so powerful!
Thank Ingrid. It’s great encouragement to me.