Anna Brie

Interesting thoughts, everyone!
As far as writing goes, I noticed that there was a lot of telling in the beginning, too, but as you said @daeus, I don’t think that it was necessarily a bad technique. As a reader, I was engaged the entire time. And that’s really all that matters, right? 😉
The characters are great. Each animal has a strikingly…[Read more]

@Hope Honestly, I like it. I don’t think it’s cheesy at all. Great idea, combining the word legionnaires and the word legend. 😉 I’d definitely go with it.

Great job @bluejay! Unfortunately, I didn’t get anywhere near that amount. 😛 But I’m trying to write a song for my WIP, so it’s a little harder. And no problem! It’s always fun to write with someone -even if they’re 9,000 miles away! 😉 Haha!

561. And I’ve finished the fifth in my Chaos the Cat series. 🙂 and Started the sixth. 😀 *squeals with delight* Thank you for writing with me @faithdk. Sorry I can’t go for longer.

@bluejay Sure. That’s fine with me 🙂

Actually make that just half an hour as I have something else I’ll need to do. That okay? @faithdk

Oh good. Hey that would be great. @faithdk.

@bluejay I’ll write with ya! 😉 …How about an hour?

Is there anyone still awake on KP who wishes to write??? I have been told from a very reliable source (thanks @spradlin) that west side of America is three hours behind the other side of America. *hmmm…I don’t think I’m making much sense, but hey, what’s new???*
So let me tag a few people and if you are interested in writing with me for a time…[Read more]

Ooh, I want to read the rest! Let me read the rest! This is a really great start to your story! I loved it! Seriously. Everything Kate said. 😀 The humor is fantastic, the plot sounds like it will be very interesting, and I love your style as well. You are a very talented writer, Hannah. 😉 Keep it up!
Also, it was very interesting to read that…[Read more]

Let me tag a few people so that you definitely see this. @kate-flournoy; @david; @christi-eaton

@reaganramm probably prose, characterization, or plotting. Those are what I struggle with the most.

“Two o’clock. Time to sleep.”
“I agree.”
“Goodnight.”
Three scaly dragon lay down on the paved floor and started to snore. All of a suddenly a screech filled the air. The three dragons leaped a mile into the air and crashed into the ceiling of their basement. They banged back onto the ground and looked around dazed.
“What was that?”
“My head…[Read more]

I was wondering where you were @daeus. That’s okay. I’ll see you Monday then. 🙂

Yes that’s it. Well, I got 752 words. How’d you go?
@hannah-c

Yes that’s it. Well, I got 752 words. How’d you go?

@hannah-c What do you dial when you want the fire brigade?

Yippee! I’ll be going to 9. @hannah-c

I’m starting ten minute early so tag me if you can join me now. 🙂 @daeus @kate-flournoy @hannah-c