@anna-brie
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BlueJay replied to the topic Faith and Prayer in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@corissa-maiden-of-praise
*this is a quote* “I heard a story once about two farmers who desperately need rain. And they both prayed to God for it. But only one went out and prepared his fields for it. Which one do you think trust God to send the rain?” (This is from Facing the Giants) 🙂Is constantly praying for something a lack of faith? God…[Read more]
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ClaireC replied to the topic Those Dear, Fuzzy Angels in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 1 month ago
@ingridrd, @corissa-maiden-of-praise, @christi-eaton, @winter-rose, @emma-flournoy, @gretald. Thank you so much for the feedback! Wow, I can’t believe it affected you guys so much. I didn’t really think it was that great, but I am so glad that you all liked it! 🙂 @corissa-maiden-of-praise, I used the internet for a little bit of information on…[Read more]
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Greta replied to the topic Announcing… Jess! in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 1 month ago
@Jess I’m contemplating reading it as well. Right now, I’m in the middle of reading the Fellowship of the Ring for the third time. 😉
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Greta replied to the topic Those Dear, Fuzzy Angels in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 1 month ago
@clairec Wow, I loved it! Great with the characters and the story! Keep writing because you’ve got a gift from God. 😉
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ClaireC replied to the topic Those Dear, Fuzzy Angels in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 1 month ago
@sarah-h, Interestingly, not many people do know much about Australian history…a lot of Australians included!! I don’t know a huge amount either. I know the basics, but I only know about, um, *scratches head* maybe 3? of our prime ministers. So, yeah. 😉 I only know a lot about the Pacific War (the Pacific in WWII) because that’s what my current…[Read more]
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ClaireC replied to the topic Bible Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@sarah-h. Great! I suppose we just need to keep striving through the Lord’s strength. It’s nice to be able to do it with someone else!
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ClaireC replied to the topic Those Dear, Fuzzy Angels in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 1 month ago
@bluejay, Wow! I can’t believe it nearly moved you to tears. I’m really glad you liked it! 😛 (Oh, bother, here we go again!)
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ClaireC replied to the topic Those Dear, Fuzzy Angels in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 1 month ago
@bluejay, Wow! I’m so glad you liked it! I can’t believe it nearly moved you to tears. I’m really glad you liked it! 😛 (Oh, bother, here we go again!)
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BlueJay replied to the topic Those Dear, Fuzzy Angels in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 1 month ago
Actually @clairec I haven’t heard of Fuzzy Wuzzy Angels. *Must look it up*
But OH MY GOODNESS!!!!! That’s an awesome story. Nearly made me cry. I was just to hooked to let the tears get in my way. I…well…I really don’t know what to say. It was AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!! Well done. 🙂 -
BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@jess Yes, he does know why he doesn’t want to be king. Very simple; it’s a boring job. It would be much more fun to be out fighting dragons and saving princesses in distress. 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@daeus. After much careful thinking and all of that kind of stuff, here are my answers to your questions.
Do your normally edit your stories? No. I give them to my Mum.
Have you ever gotten an in-depth critique from another writer? No. Let me rephrase that. I just got one. Still haven’t looked at it.
How many times do you re-edit a story? As…[Read more] -
ClaireC started the topic Those Dear, Fuzzy Angels in the forum 10 years, 1 month ago
@bluejay, @anna-brie, @sarah-h, @overcomer, @gretald, @ingridrd, @jess, @daeus, @kate-flournoy, @christi-eaton, @acacia-kate, @dragon-snapper, @corissa-maiden-of-praise, @emma-flournoy, @dancefree7, @hope, @winter-rose, @aratrea. Here’s a short story I wrote for a school assignment a while ago. It’s a little wordy here and there, a I had to…[Read more]
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ClaireC started the topic Those Dear, Fuzzy Angels in the forum 10 years, 1 month ago
@bluejay, @anna-brie, @sarah-h, @overcomer, @gretald, @ingridrd, @jess, @daeus, @kate-flournoy, @christi-eaton, @acacia-kate, @dragon-snapper, @corissa-maiden-of-praise, @emma-flournoy, @dancefree7, @hope, @winter-rose, @aratrea. Here’s a short story I wrote for a school assignment a while ago. It’s a little wordy here and there, a I had to…[Read more]
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ClaireC started the topic Those Dear, Fuzzy Angels in the forum 10 years, 1 month ago
@bluejay, anna-brie, @sarah-h, @overcomer, @gretald, @ingridrd, @jess, @daeus, @kate-flournoy, @christi-eaton, @acacia-kate, @dragon-snapper, @corissa-maiden-of-praise, @emma-flournoy, @dancefree7, @hope, @winter-rose, @aratrea. Here’s a short story I wrote for a school assignment a while ago. It’s a little wordy here and there, a I had to…[Read more]
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ClaireC replied to the topic Bible Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@sarah-h, How have you been going? I haven’t been doing well for a while, but am doing a little better now. I spent an hour this morning and read 13 chapters, plus some prayer/quiet time. So I’m quite happy with that.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@daeus No support. No reason. No plot. No excitement. Does that help you understand it?
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
Well I was writing about a king who didn’t like being king. But I got stuck so I’m using Word Lists to write a short story. You can check out the lists here We are up to the third list if you are interested.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Word Lists in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
Hmm I just found out that I made a few mistakes in the list above.
So anyone who is doing it (@his-instrument) take out one of the “approximately” and harass and accomplishment 🙂 -
BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
You still going @jess?
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