Anna Brie

@that_writer_girl_99 I think of Clifford.

@daeus Well, that’s always important. Pizzazz. I’ll have to use that word.

@daeus Well, that’s always important. Pizzazz.

@jenali Haha. The introverts will rule the world! Just after I finishing writing this book…

@emma-flournoy @kate-flournoy @daeus @winter-rose @that_writer_girl_99 @jane-maree Here is the FULL Prologue and Chapter 1. I didn’t actually provide the entire of Chapter 1 before. Tell me what you think.
Prologue
Halle’s heart raced. They’re coming. They’re coming for me. Her hair flew out behind her, blending with the browns and greens of the a…[Read more]

@that_writer_girl_99 I meant that Supergirl got a bit stupid. Sorry.

@daeus @emma-flournoy @winter-rose @kate-flournoy @jane-maree The entirety of the Prologue and Chapter 1 (I didn’t actually give you guys the whole of Chapter 1 to begin with):
Prologue
Halle’s heart raced. They’re coming. They’re coming for me. Her hair flew out behind her, blending with the browns and greens of the autumn forest. She leapt over…[Read more]

@daeus I thought you already had that covered. You know, campaigning?

@that_writer_girl_99 *pats you on the back* Don’t worry, its very helpful in the end. (or at least, I think it is)

@that_writer_girl_99 For my first novel, I managed not to do so, but now I’m falling into that black hole and being turned into spaghetti. Why can’t words be perfect the first time?

… What did you guys do while I was out? I said no crazy parties! Security shall look out for danger in the form of TV shows.

@that_writer_girl_99 @christi-eaton Comic-book geek here. I’m not really a fan of the CW series. I did watch Flash and Supergirl for a little while, but… it got a bit stupid. I like superheroes because they’re superheroes. We don’t need romance!

@emma-flournoy Good point. ‘She leapt over the fence and cried out in pain as her hair caught in the wire’s deadly barbs. Grunting with frustration, she drew her knife and with one quick slash, the tangled orange mass was left behind.’
True about the muttering… Weird. In my actual document, I don’t have a comma after ‘Aunt’. Must’ve been a typo.

@that_writer_girl_99 Oh, tell me about it. I am such a perfectionist.

Numero 5. *jaw drops*
@that_writer_girl_99 I should probably do the same.

@christi-eaton Yes, Slade Wilson. I don’t watch Arrow, but I’m a huge DC nerd.

@christi-wilson Yes, Slade Wilson. I don’t watch Arrow, but I’m a huge DC nerd.

@f5a8c3e92 Yess that’d be a great idea. I think it would be cool to have a weird daydream and then hold it- it was real?? *nods*

Oh yep, that prologue is good.

@daeus @winter-rose @kate-flournoy @jane-maree Could you guys tell me if you think it’s a good idea to make Halle part of Maya’s daydream? Please note that they will meet in person at the Academy in a few chapters. Here’s an update on the Prologue:
Halle’s heart raced. They’re coming. They’re coming for me. Her hair flew out behind her, blend…[Read more]

@daeus @winter-rose @kate-flournoy Tell me if you guys like the idea of Halle’s prologue being a dream-sequence of Maya’s. She’ll be meeting Maya herself at the Academy, so… I don’t know. Any other opinions are most welcome. Here is an updated version of the prologue:
Halle’s heart raced. They’re coming. They’re coming for me. Her ginger hair…[Read more]