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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
*Choking splutter*
How. Dare. Thee. Threaten me. With such a thing.
*Shudder*
FINE.
He stared at me with frozen awe. I stared back. This must be one of those immortal mortals, the first children of blood to walk the earth. The quendë. An Elf. I could hardly breathe.
He was dangerous, this child of blood. Not that I was so…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 3 weeks ago
A girl in red plaid sits in the college library. Dreadful words – Assignment Due Tomorrow and Proyecto de Clase de Español? -waltz across the screen before her weary eyes. Those words have no business in libraries. Her sanctuary is become her prison. She sighs and clicks on her phone.
Smack
A wet clod of wintery chill flies into her…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Hi…. (: in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 4 weeks ago
EEKERS. IT’S GODLY.
*Ambush hug*
I was holding onto hope that as long as your account hadn’t gone “anonymous” you’d still come back. How are the charries? November, Ara, Luna, Jocelyn, Grimm and Miss Raven? Any adventures? I’m trusting November recovered from the non-canon bout of scurvy.
I’m still writing… Running into plot…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Hi…. (: in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 4 weeks ago
*Screams*
*Tackle hugs you to the wall*
YOU’RE ALIVE!!!!!
Ugh, I’ve missed you on here. How’s November? Lynn? Vulka has decided to take up skydiving someday, much to his brother’s alarm. He’s also met this girl named Katya… she’s pretty spunky.
I’m still so excited that you’re back. XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 months, 4 weeks ago
Yay! Congratulations and a cup of cold cider! That was really good. The Black Mongoose struck again. Struck our heartstrings, that is.
I’m glad you went ahead and judged it. I meant to step out last night. My second story was not coming. Besides, these stories were all really good.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
I expanded what I had to 202 words, but it’s still really flash fiction. Let me see if I can get my other idea in order.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
Lol. This is hilarious. I finally wrote a short story I would consider submitting for this and it’s just 179 words long. Back to the drawing board. XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months ago
I was wondering if that was the inspiration. Rhoda is one of my favorite Bible characters. XD
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months ago
Hmm.
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I like it. 😄 I’m still suspicious about all this new governor has in mind, which is good in a literary sense. The events make sense even as they toss the next bit into suspense. This version is less intense than the previous one, but I liked having a period of quiet worry about what would happen suddenly change to…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months ago
Also, I am working on a short story for the prompt, it’s just gotten a little delayed (I decided to totally scrap my first idea in favor of another one Thursday. It’s been interesting)
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Koshka replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months ago
WHAT???!!!
*Undignified squealing commences*
Oh, she is kinda scary. I think she’s done a good thing though. She deserves the medal.
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Koshka replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months ago
*GASPETH*
*Throws confetti*
*Offers you a medal of honor for your bravery in the Character Protection Squad service*
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Koshka replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months ago
*Straightens sunglasses*
I’d say don’t kill the boys. You could bring them close, scare the living daylights out of the others, but don’t kill them.
I expected them to get captured and killed. It felt like “here we go again”. So many characters by this time have been killed, that it was almost…boring? Change…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
Noo! XD At least, I don’t think so. 🤔😉
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
By the way, this article isn’t (or maybe it is) about psychological suffering, but since I’m pretty sure it’s point is what you’re intending in your stories, I’ll share it. It definitely changed the way I think of pain.
And it’s hilarious, so you know. Thought you’d enjoy.…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months, 1 week ago
Ok, I will say that I enjoyed how it was carried off in this section. I agree with what @linus-smallprint said about that. It reminded me of The Healer by Dee Henderson. (A book about facing the grief of a broken world.) Very good.
What I say is redundant is the fact that it feels like more characters are dying than those who…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months, 1 week ago
Eeellllllleeeeeeetttttttte………
Why shouldn’t you kill them? Well, because it’s getting redundant. I love your story and your characters. The setting has a unique feel of its own and the characters are compelling to say the least. However, unless you have a brand-new absolutely unseen point to make with more death, it may…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 3 months, 1 week ago
Awwww, so fun! (Why do your grown characters still ignite the “poor little babies” part of my brain?)
Also…what does Nikolai look like perchance? And have you done a collage for him? (If you haven’t…well now, I don’t know a whole lot about his story, but I think I’ve caught his drift)
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
😊 Maketh my heart gladeth.
Does it fit how you pictured him? The plushie is yet unclaimed.
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