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@alia That’s terrible. Hopefully she’ll recover. 🙂 *gives you a hug a comfort.* ** wishes I could do it in person**

@alia That’s no good. What’s wrong with her? *will pray*

@alia You’ve got it, girl! I am so sorry. 🙁 Pets are like family members.

That is pretty @Alia 😉 I think the simplicity gives it a soft feeling 😛

If God keeps His eyes on the fallen of the world,
What right does the world have to say “No consequence”

In this bit I think you should take out the “If” at the beginning and maybe add a “they are” between “say” and “NO”.

Other than that it looks great 😉

That’s pretty @alia! 🙂

Hi, @Alia! I like comics, but have never written one. That’s cool that you do, though! I’m not sure I could do caricatures either, @kate-flournoy! I don’t know if I’ve actually ever attempted it. Something to try. 😉

Hi, @Alia! I have never written a comic strip in my life. That’s cool that you do, though! I’m not sure I could do caricatures either, @kate-flournoy! I don’t know if I’ve actually ever attempted it. Something to try. 😉

My sister likes drawing cartoons (@ingridrd, come over to this topic!). I don’t know if that counts or not. 🙂
@Alia

@Alia I got into drawing comics a few years ago- and got out of it just as quickly ’cause I’m really bad at it. I’d love to see some of yours, if you want to post them. 🙂

Comics as in how, @Alia? You mean caricatures/drawings/strips that tell stories? I have absolutely no problem with comics. I love them, if done right. But though I’m an artist, I have zero knack for caricatures. 😛 More’s the pity. I love making people laugh.

@alia Glad to be of service! Good Luck!
@bluejay Yes, everyone should always agree with the Dragon.

@alia Glad to be of service! Good Luck!
Ah, so @bluejay, I’m honored to see that you admit I’m right. 🙂

@alia What about The Kidnapping? Or Stranded? Or…..*squeezes eyes shut* just go with the dragon. 🙂

@alia What’s the central message of the story? What’s the major conflict? That should help me come up with ideas.

@alia, that sounds like a fascinating story line! I love the mix of history and future.

I also liked @dragon-snapper‘s title idea. It may not fit exactly but something along those lines would flow well with the second title.

Also keep the flow in mind when you get to naming the third book 😉

Oh yeah! My name’s Anne. Anne Swiftblade. Nice to…[Read more]

@alia
Maybe because the second book is called ‘The Choice’ (I’m guessing that in the book somebody has to choose something?) that the first book should be called ‘The Hunt’ (because they are hunting for the other organization.
Hope this helps!
-Dragon Snapper

Hello, @Alia! I don’t believe I’ve had the pleasure of meeting you yet. I’m Ingrid. 🙂 🙂 🙂
Oooo. I love the name. And I think that’s a great trilogy title.
So, you need a name for the individual books in the trilogy. I think I need just a bit more information before I begin giving you ideas (and mark my words, they may not be good ones. 😉 )

Hello, @Alia! I don’t believe I’ve had the pleasure of meeting you yet. I’m Ingrid. 🙂
Oooo. I love the name. And I think that’s a great trilogy title.
So, you need a name for the individual books in the trilogy. I think I need just a bit more information before I begin giving you ideas (and mark my words, they may not be good ones. :))