Alia

@alia ‘Ello!

@dekreel @alia @sam-kowal @dragon-snapper @catwing

Shalt thou join me in my heroic quest to write, yon Kapeefers? *swishes sword around*

@alia  I am back! You still around?

@sam-kowal Hi again! 😀

@alia Bye! (Queen of the house, eh?)

@dragon-snapper 😀 I’m back now.

@alia Alright, Cya!

@alia 😀 He’s so pleased! He even blew a flame that was longer than a candle flame!

@alia *nods* Writing as a teen usually involves getting distracted, doesn’t it? 😉

@dekreel Ten chapters? Ah…that’s a good question. Call it super-excitedness for the climax. Call it four years of writing? I almost never write short stories–those are what’s hard for me. Happy shopping! 😀

@sam-kowal XD Well…I doubt I’ll be able to post a…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper @dekreel 🙂 Usually I’m the complete opposite. The first page is easy for me, but the ending… AGGH

@dragon-snapper You are going to post the Kiwi story on here once its done, right? Cause I’m super hyped for it. And so is Stan, he wants a Kiwi still.

@alia Stan is my pet dragon.
*ahem*
He doesn’t like it when I call him a pet-…[Read more]

@alia Hi hi and doubly hi! 😀 Whatcha working on?

Hi, @alia! I’m still here 🙂

@emily  @sam-kowal  @dragon-snapper  @that_writer_girl_99  @alia  @aislinn-mollisong

Well, I take pen in hand and am, once again, trying to tackle the KPA. I had to rewrite the entire first chapter! (Or at least what I had so far) Care to join me?

@alia @dragon-snapper @dekreel

It feels like a long time since I’ve been to the Corner

😀 Finally back tonight to work on this neverending story…

@aislinn-mollisong @dekreel @jane-maree @ethryndal (to hijack more threads? *facepalm* @alia @catwing @anyone else
I’m plotting. *hehehe*

@alia *gasp* The Westing Game by Ellen Raskin!!! I love that boooook!

@dekreel You know, surprisingly for the writer I am, I read so little. I really only read the Magic Tree House, but I love them. All of them!! They were great! And are, may I add. But yeah, I’ve always had a problem of not reading much. I’l admit I didn’t read the Chronicles…[Read more]

@alia  Sorry I didn’t reply sooner!

The line “Must tell the Jolly old elf” in particular should be longer. Maybe “I must report now to the Jolly old elf.”

In general, the more similar the poem lines in a poem are in terms of syllables, the more beautiful the poem as a whole will be. So maybe you could lengthen/shorten all your lines to the same…[Read more]

@alia This is cute! I like the story! I think you could tweak some of the lines, so they don’t sound too short and choppy, but other than that, it’s awesome 🙂

@cindygreen I second that.

@alia Yeah, we’re trying at least.

@alia  It’s going okay. It’s hard not to overuse verbs of being though! My teacher found billions! Personally I don’t find much wrong with verbs of being, but…. *shrug* 🙂

I love it when characters do that! It’s a good change! 😀

@alia @dekreel I have come! And I’m working on Firebird a story I put to the side that I must write now… So bye Starting Fires.
I will write you later
And spark all your raging flames
Til they glow high.

*pulls out Firebird notes* This is such a different story…

@supermonkey42  Oh they are called droids , aren’t they? They are! I forgot and thought they were called “drones!” Alright, I’ll do that! Thanks!

@alia Thank you! What! You don’t like Harry Potter??