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Rochellaine replied to the topic My Superhero WIP in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 4 months ago
@jenwriter17 Whenever I hear “superhero WIP” I become wary because I pretty much hate Josiah’s stories, but I’ll try to give an unbiased opinion. 😛
So…my first thought on reading your ideas was that if I read the book I would immediately think her grandparents were villains. Maybe you should play this up a bit, and either have her trust them…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic My Superhero WIP in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 4 months ago
@ariel-ashira Yes, her grandparents really love her a ton. Kaylee was told her parents died in a car accident, but I want the accident to be linked to some superhero business of some sort (maybe they were heroes???). haven’t quite figured out the theme.
yeah I guess Pinterest boards can tell a lot about a person 😉
thank you! 🙂
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Ariel Ashira replied to the topic My Superhero WIP in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 4 months ago
@jenwriter17 What a cool bunch of ideas! I like what @skredder suggested. I will try to think of something, and let you know if I have any ideas. So, do her “grandparents” care a lot for her? What happened to her parents? And do you know what theme you might be using?
I think biracial people are beautiful. I guess one way you could let r…[Read more]
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic My Superhero WIP in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 4 months ago
@skredder ooh yeah that’s a good idea *writes it down* thank you! <3
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic My Superhero WIP in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 4 months ago
Aaaaand forgot to tag people 😛 @rochellaine @kaya-young @alia @ariel-ashira @seekjustice @catwing @daughteroftheking @claire-c @skredder @ingridrd
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Jenna Terese started the topic My Superhero WIP in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 4 months ago
Okay y’all…
Now that I’ve finished the first draft of my sci-fi dystopian (and diving into the edits), I’ve been picking my next book project from my endless list of plot bunnies. And I think I’m going with a superhero book, that I’ve actually partly outlined already.
But I’m having a bit of trouble getting the plot off the ground. I need some…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
Sorry, I was having internet troubles ;D I don’t know why, but it just cut out.
No, I don’t really know any Youtubers, occasionally I watch a video on writing if it pops up, but I usually just read blogs.
Farewell (again!)
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@seekjustice Well, I really have to go now. Bye! 🙂
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@seekjustice do you know of any writer youtubers? I watch Abbie Emmons’ videos, which aren’t all about writing, but creative life in general.
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@seekjustice Awesome 😉
Now…what crazy late-night (well, late for me anyway 😉 ) things can we talk about? 😛
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
Yep, I’m still on 😀
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@seekjustice *slides in and waves sheepishly* um, hello again. I’m gonna stay awake a little longer, cuz I wanna get to a good stopping point in editing. So I’m gonna hold open my eyelids with toothpicks and eat something sugary. 😛 I’ll be on for about 20-30 minutes. You still here?
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@jenwriter17 (I love Zac as well. We have a support group for the end of this book too, just so you know) 🙂
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@seekjustice Oh, yes that sounds familiar! I’ll have to check it out 🙂
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@seekjustice Looks like I’m gonna have to go to bed too 🙁 I’d love to stay up late and chat, but I’m really tired. I’m hoping to finish reading your book tomorrow, if not, most of it. (I’ll be on tomorrow most likely)
By the way, Zac is my favorite character right now! 😀 You did really well with him.
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
Nope, it’s set in the French Revolution and it’s about a guy who rescues people from the guillotine. Its one of those weird old classics that everyone (including myself) loves!
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
@seekjustice That sounds really familiar. It’s not a Sherlock Holmes story is it?
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
Hey, have you ever read the Scarlet Pimpernel?
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #17 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 4 months ago
Look at you, actually going to bed early *pats you on the back*. I’ll see you tomorrow then 😀 Looking forward to it!
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