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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
In no particular way, one of them is pretty old. But Josh decided he was terrified of them and couldn’t ride until they were all gone. Apparently, in his eyes they are monsters who might eat him.
I’d have to check, but I believe its one on Sir Francis Drake, but I could be wrong. We could have a few actually.
What’s Lydia…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@seekjustice “tyrannical rule of the Shetland ponies?” Haha! Sounds intriguing. In what manner, exactly, are ponies tyrannical?
Which book do you have? Oh, well, the one I was referring to is Dale Robertson. He’s not far above a lot of other favorite actors I have, but he’s the one I’ve “picked” to be at the top of the list right now. 😛 …[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
My littlest brother was just demonstrating his use of bicycle brakes and showing off. Of course, I pretended to be all excited about his remarkable abilities.
Me: Whoa, you can use your brakes, Josh!
Him: No, I was not using my brakes.
Me: Oh, did you stop using your strong imagination?
Him: No, I used my back brakes.
Me: That’s…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
Sorry, I just had to save my brother from the tyrannical rule of the Shetland ponies and then he fell off his bike and I had to deal with that as well 😀
I have heard of Henty. I’m pretty sure I have one of his books as well, but I haven’t read it. Oh, who’s your favourite actor?
😛 Love the Princess Bride quotes 😛 if it actually…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@seekjustice I was just reading where Chessy disapproves of Justice’s methods of trickery and bribery, but for some reason doesn’t disapprove of his plan to kill people… 😛 Yeah, I know that’s not really what’s going on, but it just reminded me of this:

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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@seekjustice The Haitian revolution is very horrible and very interesting. It has many similarities to the French revolution. I first heard about it in a G.A.Henty book. (Have you heard of Henty? He’s extremely popular as a historical author among U.S. homeschoolers) I later watched a movie about it, and absolutely loved it. (It didn’t hurt…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
Yep, its after Napoleon was exiled and Louis XVII (maybe? there’s so many Louises I get them mixed up) is on the throne. No, I’ve never heard of the Haitian revolution.
I don’t necessarily mind people getting married young, say if the girl was seventeen and the guy eighteen or nineteen, and I don’t necessarily have a problem with…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@seekjustice Well, since I’ve never read Les Mis fully, I guess I didn’t notice the time period much. I probably would be able to tell if I read it in-depth, since, as you say of yourself, I am also a history nerd. 😛 Okay, so this is after Napoleon, right? I actually don’t know much about Napoleon, either, except as he has to do with the Ha…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
You aren’t alone in thinking that 😀 The June Rebellion, which was what it was called, happened in 1832 and it was mostly led by students. See, after the French Revolution, the monarch eventually was restored to the throne and things got even worse from then on (for the poor at least. For everyone else, things were dandy) and there…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@valtmy Yeah, sorry, I really haven’t been on top of my beta work for a while. SeekJustice sent me her part three several days ago, and I haven’t even read half of it, while I usually read her stuff straight through day of or next day. And I didn’t get to Jen’s book until a couple of weeks after she finished it, I think.
So, if I don’t get to i…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@seekjustice Haha, okay. I thought that it was set during the French Revolution. I don’t know a lot of French history, mostly where French history interconnected with the history of other countries. What exactly happened in the 1830s that Les Mis was set during that period?
Okay, so about Jean leaving Chessy in the trench, yeah, he should pr…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
The 1830s. 😛 My inner history nerd must correct you.
Very true, but our culture is hypocritical in the extreme. We still see prostitution as a bad thing in the present day, and a shameful thing, even if we don’t have any morals regarding pregnancy and children out of wedlock like we did back then.
I can see that Jonas, Quillon and…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@seekjustice Um, yeah, but children’s rights hadn’t been discussed yet in the 1700s…
Setting your story in the present day/future means that the cultural things won’t all match up with the circumstances in Les Mis. Such as the thing I talked to you a long time a go about, with Sapphire being looked down upon, which is not so much a thing…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@valtmy No, you weren’t making it too obvious, it worked fine for me. 😉
Oh, oh! Haha, I’m so sorry! I just realized how that sounded. I didn’t mean that you don’t understand jokes unless they’re explained to you. I meant that you prefer more realistic circumstances, as you were pointing out how the nurses and doctor didn’t act prof…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
Actually, I’m surprised by the inconsistencies and problems you guys have pointed out to me, when it seems that you missed the two that have bothered me the most.
a). Jean leaves his daughter all alone in the trench in order to rescue Justice who he doesn’t even like.
b) Justice was originally seven years older than Chessy.
And…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
True.
It has to work with the story, okay? Eponine is fifteen/sixteen when she goes to the barricade, so there we go. 😛
Poor Kendall. No one cares about him.
I’ll try to fix it up. In another draft. Not now.
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@valtmy I’m not sure…I think it was the part about the party where she was talking to all her brother’s friends and embarrassing herself by not knowing the meaning of the poetry. 😉
Anyway, we’ve already established that we enjoy different types of humor, right? 😛 You need to have your humor carefully explained and diagramed, while I prefer…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
I truly think that Justice doesn’t care. Not necessarily that he doesn’t care about her, but that he doesn’t care she’s underaged. Revolutions aren’t usually made of people of military age after all, especially people’s revolutions and since most of them are students, even the people they’re riling up are going to be quite…[Read more]
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SeekJustice replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
@catwing Goodbye!
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 1 month ago
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