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BlueJay replied to the topic A Tale From Two Views in the forum Poetry 10 years ago
Post them all and I’ll use what I can @sarah-h
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@jess No doubt the format will muck this up, but here is my poem for the dare that you gave me. 🙂 Enjoy.
Horse
Majestic, Fierce,
Galloping, Neighing, Prancing, Rearing,
Stallion, Foal *Bull, Calf,
Bawling, Chewing, Grazing, Plodding,
Calm, Gentle
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BlueJay replied to the topic Bible Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@sarah-h He dressed like like the Chinese, yes, and he used chop sticks. And yes, the missionaries where very offended by that. I read about him in a Trailblazer book. But I know there are lots of different books on him.
I can’t begin to imagine how it has been made into a movie. That’s just unbelievable. Is it graphic? -
BlueJay replied to the topic A Tale From Two Views in the forum Poetry 10 years ago
@sarah-h Can you give me a list yourself then?
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BlueJay replied to the topic Fruits of the Spirit in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years ago
@sarah-h no problem at all. *bows low to you.* 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic The Next Book Choosing in the forum Book Discussions 10 years ago
@graciekry @his-instrument @jess @clairec @the-happy-bookaholic @dragon-snapper @timothy-young @warrioroftherealm @emma-flournoy @winter-rose @ingridrd @aysia-serene @adry_grace @daeus @belegteleri @hope @overcomer @vanna @faithdk @gretald @kate-flournoy @jadamae @hislittlerose @hannah-krynicki @writefury @hannah-olsen @zoe-wingfeather @dbhgodreign…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Bible Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@sarah-h Definitely Hudson Taylor. I could just keep repeating his name. He was so awesome. Really trust in God and relied completely on Him. But I just finished off a book called Gift Hands and Ben Carson (the guy the book is about) is pretty amazing too.
Okay, I wasn’t sure if you’d moved to a different state, cause you got on KP earlier than…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic A Tale From Two Views in the forum Poetry 10 years ago
@sarah-h Where do you get the vocabulary lists from?
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BlueJay replied to the topic Fruits of the Spirit in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years ago
@sarah-h
1. Click on “link to poem”
2. Right hand click on picture and click “view image info”
3. Highlight all the text beside the word “location” (make sure you get all of it.)
4. Press ctrl (control) c on your keyboard
5. Come back to KP.
6. Begin a new message.
7. Click on the “img” button.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Fruits of the Spirit in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years ago
Oh good it worked. I’d explain how I did it, but I think it would be too confusing. However, if you really want to know, I can tell you.
Hey, I notice you spell Saviour with a ‘u’. Why is that? I thought America didn’t spell it that way. Same with colour and other words which the website is telling me are wrong.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Fruits of the Spirit in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years ago
@sarah-h Oh, you lost your profile pic??? Well, the one you have no is cute. 🙂 I have a friend who as a cockatiel.
As for the poem, it’s great. I hope you don’t mind, but let me try something…

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Emma Flournoy posted an update 10 years ago
@Bluejay, I wondered if you’d like to be e-mail pen-pals? I know you’re four years older than me; and we’ll in all probability never meet, as we live on opposite corners of the world; and I’m not a writer (of fiction at least 🙂 )…but I’d like to get to know you better, and correspond regularly, if you’d like that. Whadda-ya say, Tessa? 🙂
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@daeus I won’t be able to write tonight either. I’ve got stuff I need to do. Sorry. 🙁
@dragon-snapper You’re Deaus’s only hope. -
BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@daeus I won’t be able to write tonight either. I’ve got stuff I need to do. Sorry. 🙁
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@Daeus I won’t be with you tonight. Have fun though!
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BlueJay posted an update 10 years ago
Correct me if this doesn’t make sense, but this was a quote that I made up myself.
“Everything in life is fair. It’s just not always what we want.” ~ Tessa 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Fruits of the Spirit in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years ago
@daeus Yes, I did realize what the visual allowed you to see. I had planed on doing a cross first, but the words came and formed a body, which I like better.
Okay, yeah, I understand that. Thanks for critiquing this for me. I don’t normally write poetry, but I love this form.
Do you mind if I submit this poem to KP with your changes, as long as I…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Help With Synopsis in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
Ah! @Hannah-c
I’m glad that worked out…Synopses are the worst thing in the world!!! So boring…
And BTW, the description makes me want to read it already. Actually, you just gave me an idea for a story! *flies off to brainstorm* -
Greta posted an update 10 years ago
@rolena-hatfield
Long time no see. Nice to “see” you again! 🙂-
Hey @gretald! Nice to “see” you again too! It has been a long time since I’ve been around KP. Mostly because I was gone for the summer at camp as a counselor. I missed the community here! How was your summer? Did you have any family vacations?
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@rolena-hatfield Being a camp counselor is fun, though! 🙂 What sort of camp was it? My summer was awesome! I got to go on a nice long vacation and have some quality time with my family.
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@emma-flournoy Sure. I’d like to do that. I’ll warn you now, I’m terrible a checking my own writing, so you’ll probably end up with a lot of spelling and grammar errors in the emails. Mum is trying to get me to slow down so she’ll read my first two or three emails, so they should be problem free. 🙂 (My fingers try to keep up with my brain and…[Read more]
Oh yay! I’m glad you want to… 😉
I’ll e-mail Sarah and ask for your address; how do I e-mail her? :/
And I’m extremely meticulous with my spelling and grammar, so we should be a good match then!
@Bluejay
Just email me at kingdompenmag@gmail.com! 🙂
Thanks @spradlin. 🙂
@emma-flournoy Can’t wait for the first email between us.