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Thanks, @dragon-snapper ! I’m glad you liked it. 🙂

@winter-rose , what about that last verse doesn’t work for you? Do you think it’s disjointed?

Hmm … they are a bit on the bumpy side, @daeus . Do you think they could be tweaked and made better? If you have any thoughts on that I’d appreciate it. The hardest part for me when it comes to…[Read more]

Thanks, @dragon-snapper ! I’m glad you liked it. 🙂

Good point, @winter-rose , I’ll keep that in mind.

Hmm … they are a bit on the bumpy side, @daeus . Do you think they could be tweaked and made better? If you have any thoughts on that I’d appreciate it. The hardest part for me when it comes to editing poems … is editing.

I can…[Read more]

@overcomer Very nice! I’ve been hearing birds like that all week, and I love it! I’m glad you were able to show that in this poem. 😀

I’m hoping to gain some writing insight that will help me with my story planning. 🙂

@Ethryndal OHHH!!! Yes, okay! That one was just adorable. I’m sorry. 😛 Painful but it was so cute, and the way it turned out was beautiful for everyone. Poor John. 😛 Yes, definitely lots to be admired there.

@Ethryndal yes! I’ve seen the BBC series of it and I started the book, but I hate electronics and it was on kindle, so I’m kinda looking for it in physical format (unabridged 😛 ) before finishing it.
That love triangle was actually not my favorite just because I didn’t care all that much for Pet Meagles, and I was mad at Arthur for falling for…[Read more]

@S-G-Dewey nice! I love it. 😀

@S.G.Dewey nice! I love it. 😀

I got 69 too, @kate-flournoy.

@northerner

I got 69. *grins*

@Daeus so should I. Plan to meet you then.

since most of my characters have undergone tragic backstories (courtesy of me =P)

*chokes* YES. lol

An organizational freak? *cough*INFJ*coughcough* :’D

@Aratrea

since most of my characters have undergone tragic backstories (courtesy of me =P)

*chokes* YES. lol

An orgizational freak? *cough*INFJ*coughcough* :’D

@Aratrea

since most of my characters have undergone tragic backstories (courtesy of me =P)

*chokes* YES. lol

@Aratrea

@Daeus aaaand tonight of all nights I can’t. :/ Good luck though.

I think theme is exciting because it takes a vague idea for a story helps me shape it into something I don’t just want to write because it’s interesting, but need to write because it matters to me. Theme helps me come up with a message for my story, and goals for my characters.

@Aysia-Serene ha, yes. There’s so much to be said on that subject it’d take whole books. 😛

Perhaps another important difference is that in 2/3 examples you picked, the MC was /not/ the winner of the love triangle, so instead of just being a gushy ending of success, the MC actually has to face hardship and work through it to become a better…

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@Aysia-Serene ha, yes. There’s so much to be said on that subject it’d take whole books. 😛

Perhaps another important difference is that in 2/3 examples you picked, the MC was /not/ the winner of the love triangle, so instead of just being a gushy ending of success, the MC actually has to face hardship and work through it to become a better…

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