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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Book Description Opinions in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 6 months ago
@Daeus Oh yeah, totally know what you mean.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Book Description Opinions in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 6 months ago
Or ‘wistful’, but that may not be strong enough.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Book Description Opinions in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 6 months ago
@Daeus Ah yes, that’d do it.
How about ‘aching’? I looked up synonyms for yearning and that was the only one I saw yet that might possibly sound good…
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Book Description Opinions in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 6 months ago
@Daeus Ah yes, that’d do it.
How about ‘aching’? I looked up synonyms for yearning and that was the only one I saw yet that might possibly sound good…
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Book Description Opinions in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 6 months ago
@Daeus *gags* No THANK YOU.
Hm… good point. I’m drawing a blank though. I shall return if something comes to me.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Book Description Opinions in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 6 months ago
@Daeus For the [insert descriptor here] you should do ‘tear-jerking’.
No, I’m kidding. It’s true but bittersweet kind of already says that. 😛 Eh…I’ll tell you if I think of anything.And you don’t need to eat your humble pie—how will they know how good it is if you don’t tell them?!
The only thing I’d say to fix is to italicize the book…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Book Description Opinions in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 6 months ago
@Daeus you were born to sell things, weren’t you?
I love it. I think it’s great. Can’t find anything right off the top of my head that needs fixing.
And hey, it’s not flattery if it’s true, now is it?As for descriptions… solemn?
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Call for beta readers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 6 months ago
@Northerner Okay…I’m not s’posed to post the link in a public place, so what should I do? Wait, I can probably e-mail Sarah (Community Happiness Director) and ask her to give you the address. I’ll go do that.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
I’ve got to go now too, so thanks for the balloons!
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Call for beta readers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 6 months ago
@Northerner Yep, than makes sense. So, even if I notice spelling/grammar errors, should I not point them out?
I think I can manage this. I’m not familiar with working on Google Docs, so I may need some help learning the ropes, but it shouldn’t be too difficult.
Now you need my e-mail address, right? (Mom’s, ’cause I don’t have one. 😉 ) -
Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@daeus Great! Hop in!
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Call for beta readers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 6 months ago
@Northerner That doesn’t sound too long…I’m thinking about it, but lemme make sure I understand the schedule better. So, you’d send the document, and then you’d like one chapter a week at least…so I’d make note in the document on anything I notice (in your post here it says not everything, but on your blog it said anything…which is best?),…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@winter-rose Welcome!
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Call for beta readers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 6 months ago
@Northerner Approximately how long is it? Better tell me in page, not word, number—I’ll understand that better. 😉
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Sam I am: Doom, Glitter, and Iphones in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 6 months ago
@Winter-Rose XD Poor Martin.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
And I’m back for more writing, everyone. 😛
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Call for beta readers in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 6 months ago
@Northerner I would love to, especially as this is one of my absolute favorite time-periods, but I’m afraid my schedule will not allow for any consistent sort of time-table, at least not currently. Keep me on your list of for the future though— I really want to read this.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@winter-rose I was about to take break as well, but I’ll be back in about half-an-hour. I’m still planning, but its fun, so I don’t mind.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
@r-j-wordsmith Great! I was able to get a bout of page of notes done. My thoughts are on paper, so I’m happy. 😀
Anyone else, I’m still going, and I should be for a while.
@daeus @kate-flournoy @graciegirl @winter-rose @overcomer @ethryndal -
Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 6 months ago
I’m planning out theme and ascertaining how it ties into the plot.
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