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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Homework for Video 15: Theme & Major Characters in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 5 months ago
I’m going to go with Arianwen again. Her arc mirrors Harold’s, making it a type one. They both follow disillusionment arcs.
Arianwen’s, however, more represents the flip side of Harold’s, because while Harold was particularly disillusioned with the ‘good guys’ and almost considered joining the bad guys, Arianwen, because she was on the wrong side…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic A Short Fairy Tale Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
@Overcomer *grins* I like this. Muchly. The only thing I might say do differently than how you have it is make this the peddler’s story, not the princess’s. By which I mean, take out the intro about the princess who had trouble dancing (hilarious though it is) and just start with the peddler on the road meeting the dancing master. That will give…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic A Short Fairy Tale Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
Yay! Thanks, @daeus ! 😀
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic A Short Fairy Tale Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
Hey @daeus ,
It was a short story that disappeared when I tried to edit it … technical diffulties! *sigh* I’m trying to put it up again, but it doesn’t want to go up because it says it already exists …
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic A Short Fairy Tale Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
Hey guys,
I’ve been working on this short story I wrote a while back, and I thought it might be a good idea before I get started on the next draft to ask for your opinions and see if any of you have ideas for improving it. (I’d really appreciate them!) 🙂
I wrote draft 1 1/2 recently and looking over it afterward, it occurred to me that it’s…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier started the topic A Short Fairy Tale Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
Hey guys,
I’ve been working on this short story I wrote a while back, and I thought it might be a good idea before I get started on the next draft to ask for your opinions and see if any of you have ideas for improving it. (I’d really appreciate them!) 🙂
I wrote draft 1 1/2 recently and looking over it afterward, it occurred to me that it’s…[Read more]
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Homework for Video 13: Theme & Antagonist in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 5 months ago
@aratrea Alright. A foil, then. And yes, Ard is very interesting. I still am working on figuring out the end of his arc…
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Homework for Video 12: Foil Characters in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 5 months ago
@aratrea Yes, it might have something to do with that too. Actually, it will probably have a lot to do with the negative EiL and consequences from events over 30 years ago… *grins* *heads off to work on details*
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Discussion for Video Twelve: Foil Characters in the forum Discussion Questions 9 years, 5 months ago
@aratrea Yep. The one piece of truth they have is the piece the MC is missing. It so much fun when the villain or main antagonist knows and (in some sort of manner) teaches the MC the truth they need to hear even while mortal enemies.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@winter-rose Bringer, Chase, Taliman, Harrison, Grayson
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@jane-maree *stops charge* Ahem, Frodo wouldn’t have gotten far without Sam. For Sam too! *resumes charge*
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@jane-maree *stops charge* Ahem, Frodo wouldn’t have gotten far without Sam.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@jane-maree @winter-rose For the Shire!
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Snapper replied to the topic Hi guys! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 5 months ago
@kina-lamb WIP is a Work in Progress, unless you already asked @daeus. 😉
Ah, King George and the Ducky, I love it when Melvin shows up. The song of ‘There Once was a Man’ was great, the tale short and sweet, as well as amusing. Favorite silly song…ouch. Er, I like Bubble Rap, as well as Pizza Angel, His Cheeseburger and all of them besides…[Read more] -
Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@winter-rose @daeus @overcomer @ethryndal @northerner @perfectfifths @kina-lamb @kate-flournoy @the-bean @hope @jane-maree @graciegirl @r-j-wordsmith @allthepeoples
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Homework for Video 12: Foil Characters in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 5 months ago
@daeus That makes sense. Thanks. 🙂 I figured it was something like that…
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Homework for Video 13: Theme & Antagonist in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 5 months ago
Can characters be antagonists on and off? Because I’ve a number of characters that are antagonists at some points and work with the MC at other points.
Silvara: An archeress. She’s been a legend for 500 years and thinks the whole name deal is a bit hilarious. Though when it comes to the respect people have for her just due to her name and not…[Read more]
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Homework for Video 12: Foil Characters in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 5 months ago
Hmm, just realized Zevlin might actually be an antagonist off and on… More on than off. 😉
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Homework for Video 12: Foil Characters in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 5 months ago
Just two… Foil characters are so much fun. These are for Fidelyon, again. The rest of my work will probably be for that novel. My trilogy isn’t developed enough for this yet… Anyway:
1. Seamus: the page boy of the MC. His EiL is that names don’t mean much, if anything. He’s an orphan, and couldn’t care less. It is what he…[Read more]
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