@aella
Active 8 years, 7 months ago- Rank: Loyal Sidekick
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@arella-noreen @overcomer @anyone else I’m back to it.
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
Awesome, @arella-noreen ! 😀
I’m going to write a few minutes more since I’m coming along well with my poem editing. I came up with some changes I like and a few suggestions to consider, so I’m happy! 🙂
Thanks for writing with me! 🙂
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
I’m back, @arella-noreen ! Let’s write! 🙂
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
Hey @arella-noreen . I just saw your message. I’ve been writing, but I’m going to take a ten-minute break now. I’ll probably write for 15 minutes more when I return if you want to join me. 🙂
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Homework for Video 3: Discovering & Deepening Theme in the forum Writing Assignments 9 years, 5 months ago
That is very helpful, @aratrea , thanks!
I’ve been mulling it over some, and then working on other projects, and then mulling it over some more. The hard part for me is choosing the main theme because there are several ways I could lean with my story. I’m getting close, though. 🙂 Trying to identify what all of the different themes are for my…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
Okay, @dragon-snapper . 😉
I’m still writing and will be for at least another 30 minutes. 🙂
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@overcomer I call this meeting under recess. I’ve got to eat something.
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@overcomer I’ve always wanted to be on the council. 😛
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
Yay! @dragon-snapper , let this meeting of the Jedi Writers Order begin! 😉 🙂
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@overcomer Yup yup!
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
Are you still writing, @dragon-snapper?
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
@overcomer @jess @daeus @kate-flournoy @winter-rose @northerner @ethryndal @r-j-wordsmith @graciegirl I’ll be writing/copying/typing up stuff for about a half-an-hour.
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
I’m stopping now, but I’ll be around later if anyone’s writing then. 🙂
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 5 months ago
Hey! 🙂 I’m editing a poem this morning. Do any of want to join me? 🙂 @dragon-snapper @winter-rose @graciegirl @northerner @ethryndal @r-j-wordsmith @daeus @jess @anyone ?
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Snapper replied to the topic Hi guys! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 5 months ago
@kina-lamb *Let’s see…how late can I be in replying??? Hmmm* 😛 Sorry.
Ah, yes. Barbara Manatee. And Hairbrush.
Ummm…I can’t seem to think of anything immediately… I must have went around wearing a protective suit of armor for most of my life and just can’t remember that being the case. 😛
The Bible is the best book, (it’s on the assumed…[Read more] -
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Hi guys! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 5 months ago
@Kina-Lamb Bravo! You’ve got this.
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic A Short Fairy Tale Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
Really? Okay, thanks, @daeus . 🙂
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic A Short Fairy Tale Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
Thanks, @graciegirl ! 🙂 I’ve been thinking about working on a theme for my next draft. I wrote this story pantser style, so I didn’t really think about a theme when I wrote it. It was fun. 🙂
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic A Short Fairy Tale Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
Thanks, @daeus . I was thinking that I could leave the structure the way it was if I just developed the story and characters a bit more, so it was nice to find that someone else thought it would work. 🙂
I’m not sure which route I will take. I like how focusing more on one character (either the princess or the peddler) would allow me to…[Read more]
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Mallory O'Bier replied to the topic A Short Fairy Tale Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 5 months ago
I’m glad you enjoyed my story, @winter-rose ! 😀 Thanks for sharing your perspective, and giving me some things to think about. 🙂
Thanks, @jane-maree . That was nice of you to do that. 🙂 I’ll be sure to give it a look when I prepare to write the next draft.
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