@aella
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
Numero 5. *jaw drops*
@that_writer_girl_99 I should probably do the same. -
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Hi there! in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 4 months ago
Hello @Moriahs! Welcome aboard!! Do you know your MBTI personality type?
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 4 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 I’m coming! Haven’t had time to do this yet.
But now that I’m here, I have something really helpful to say: what everyone else said. *sheepish grin* I know, that’s resounding, but there you have it. Most of what everyone else said I was thinking too, especially concerning the info-dump-ishness of the stuff about her having lived with…[Read more] -
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's grief in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@Northerner *chains the bear up* ‘e won’t get out for some time yet. Now go forth and conquer.
(Btw, @Kate-Flournoy just almost lost that stuff, but we were able to fix it in time. After great stomachache. Otherwise…*coughcough* her computer might have suffered great damage from a certain being.) -
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 4 months ago
@Christi-Eaton That’s an amazing drawing, but what I really noticed is how much the face looks like yours. Seeing it right next to your profile pic…the resemblance is striking. Other than that she’s not smiling, but if she were I think it would almost match perfectly.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 4 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 YES. Much better. *thumbs up* Notice how the details ground you.
And I think it would be really cool for that to be part of Maya’s dream. Go for it. 😀 -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 4 months ago
@Christi-Eaton thanks. 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years, 4 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 I like this.
*switches into professional mode* Your prose is stronger than a lot I’ve seen, and you show a lot of promise with dialogue and characterization. Your sense of flow and pacing does seem to be a bit off— the prologue was too short and vague, for one. It didn’t connect me to the story, which is what a prologue is for. I…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 4 months ago
@Christi-Eaton *squeals* Still love it!
… can I post mine again here for comparison? It’ll make it look awful but I want to see the similarities. Thanks. 😀
*doesn’t wait for permission*
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Favorite Movies in the forum Film 9 years, 4 months ago
@Mark-Kamibaya YES. Rogue One. Everyone. Watch it. The more I think about it, the more sure I may be becoming that it’s my favorite movie ever. Seriously. Everything about it was so well done, and the theme—!
*buries face in hands* Just… watch it. You’ll see what I mean. -
Hope Ann replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 I don’t think I ever cried so much at an episode.
@that_writer_girl_99 Oh, yes. That one. The poor Doctor… It was so sad. Because you think it’s over and they’re safe and then… *sniffs*
Ok, enough emotions for tonight. And I just finished Rogue One again too… I’m off to bed. See you all! 😀
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Hope Ann replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 Talking about emotions and Doctor Who, remember the one where there was two Amys? My sister and I… that was the worst one ever. INTJ or not, I just… I couldn’t. It was so sad. *weeps at the memory*
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Hope Ann replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 What, Sherlock?!?!?
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Hope Ann replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 Not sure… I like Martha. I liked Clara on and off. Amy and Rory were probably my favorites when they were together.
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Hope Ann replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@f5a8c3e92 Eh, you can come back. Mrs. Hudson took away my skull.
Sherlock is an INTJ, by the way.
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Hope Ann replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 He’s fantastic. Not my favorite, just cause Eleven is so great, and I love twelve, but… they’re all great.
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Hope Ann replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 Hey, they were cute. XD
Yep, Moffat… he’ll tear your heart out and roll it in broken glass.
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Hope Ann replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 To each her own. *smirks* I love Nine, but I won’t prove my point with a dagger. This time. You have a right to your own *cough* opinion.
@f5a8c3e92 *shakes head soberly* Turn around. Your face is putting me off.
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Hope Ann replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 And skip Nine and Ten? *sniffs* How could you? Eleven is my favorite, but I love the others too…
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Hope Ann replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@graciegirl I love Doctor Who too. You’ve got to get into it though. It can be a bit cheesy, especially the earlier seasons. 😉 I love the characters more than the storylines. But the emotions… How can a 45 minute episode start so happy and end so sad so many times?
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