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@mark-kamibaya @daeus @that_writer_girl_99 @kate-flournoy @mariposa @brandon-miller @aratrea
Thanks for the encouragement guys. I am feeling alot better about it now. And I will definitely try most, if not all of your suggestions. Thank you so much!
@bethanysinkyroses *commiserates with you* Yeah. It’s tough. 😀 We got this, though!

@Dragon-Snapper what they all said.

I will just add that it’s definitely not an uncommon problem to have. There were times in the past two years as I waded through two drafts of my WIP that I just felt like going and drowning any capability of conscious thought in a deluge of mindless articles— anything to save myself from having to open my…[Read more]

@daeus 😛 Yay! I’m trying to write my muse back to life. 😀

@that_writer_girl_99 @winter-rose @jess You guys there?

@daeus Haha! Too funny! Okay, how much did you get done.
I’m actually quite happy with I got done. 1887 words.

@daeus You’re still going, right? I am, just making sure that I’m not alone. 😀

@daeus Okay, Yoda. Here now, I am.

@aratrea Nuts. You didn’t call us KaPeeFers. 🙁
Anyways, looks pretty to me. I like your bio. 😛

@daeus I was only able to get 595 down, half my usual amount. I’m kinda at war with myself and this novel, though, so I guess something is something.
Tag me when you’re back.

@Aratrea I really like it!

First thing I noticed— in your bio you said, when you were describing KP, ‘through proficiency and purpose.’ I thought it was ‘with proficiency and purpose.’

If it’s possible, it might also be better to have your page options in a little bit bigger font. It took me a second and a few confused glances to find them.…[Read more]

@daeus You picked the thing that I really don’t want to do, but the thing that a really, really need to do… Ummm… Thanks. 😀

@That_Writer_Girl_99 sounds like a plan.

Ahhh… you can do it. 😉

@daeus Awww.
*sigh*
Okay. I guess I’ll…mmmm….which should I do, you tell me cause I can’t decide.
1. Write in my novel
2. Write something else
3. Edit finished book
4. Story planning

@daeus Okay. I’ll spend that time doing some procrastinating. Tag me when you’re back. 😀

@daeus Wait for me!

@That_Writer_Girl_99 Aw, really? I’m glad to hear that. 😀 My pleasure.

@Cloudy just want to let you know I haven’t abandoned you; I’m going through the story bit by bit and formulating thoughts and such. 😉

@That_Writer_Girl_99 meh. Logic. Who cares about logic? 😛

Forget the logic for a sec. What is the most natural emotional course for the characters? Go wild. Not even kidding.
And one question that might give you some answers— what is the Warden going to do with Blake? What are they saying/doing, locked up in that office together?

*pulls out sword pen and sticks it behind her ear* How can I help?

@That_Writer_Girl_99

Oooooh, I like it!

There is one thing that could use tweaking though. Both Kara and Matthias seem a little scattered and unfocused as to their emotional state. Now they’re supposed to be; I know. They’re both confused. But the reader shouldn’t be. It’s not that both of them shouldn’t be struggling with several different emotions at once, but that…[Read more]