Adry_Grace

Awesomesauce @adry_grace! Let’s see if we can make it to 8:30, that all right with you?

Thanks, @kate-flournoy 🙂 It sounds a little like “Whittington.” I’ll probably like it then. *puts on game face* In the words of Linguini, “Let’s do this thing!”

Thank you too, @adry_grace 🙂 Political history sounds great, although I think the chances of getting caught up in off-branching discussions on this book may be nearly as great as…[Read more]

I got 709 done in the second part of writing. In total: 1303. I’m very happy with that. Thanks for writing with me. It was fun and I felt really focused. @adry_grace

Alright @Adry_Grace I’m back. How many more minutes will you be write from now?

I got 594 words written. And I’ve reached an exciting point in my story!!! How’d you go @adry_grace? I’ve got to stop to pick some apples for stewing, but then I can continue if you want?

Whoopee. @adry_grace. Ready, Set, Write!!!! (and yep, that still counts.)

Whoopee. @adry_grace. Ready Set, Write!!!!

Anyone want to write with me for half an hour? @kate-flournoy, @daeus, @faithdk, @rolena-hatfield, @adry_grace, @anyone??? *listens to crickets chirping*

Well let’s just make this a party! I’m in til 3:30 too! @kate-flournoy @Adry_Grace @Daeus

@Adry_Grace @kate-flournoy I’m in with you till 3:30

@Adry_Grace awesome! How about till 3:30?

Goody, now let me round in the other peeps. Hmm, let’s see.
@faithdk @hannah-olsen @vanna @overcomer @zoe-wingfeather @ingridrd
@adry_grace @cahndida-serkhaman @lightningmouse @anna-brie @hannah-krynicki @mas410 @gretald @ivy-rose @dbhgodreigns @the-happy-bookaholic @belegteleri @writefury @kate-flournoy @hannah-c @jenali @hislittlerose @wordfitly…[Read more]

Goody, now let me round in the other peeps. Hmm, let’s see.
@faithdk @hannah-olsen @vanna @overcomer @zoe-wingfeather @ingridrd
@adry_grace @cahndida-serkhaman @lightningmouse @anna-brie @hannah-krynicki @mas410 @gretald @ivy-rose @dbhgodreigns @the-happy-bookaholic @belegteleri @writefury @kate-flounoy @hannah-c @jenali @hislittlerose @wordfitlys…[Read more]

Goody, now let me round in the other peeps. Hmm, let’s see.
@faithdk @hannah-olsen @vanna @overcomer @zoe-wingfeather @ingridrd
@adry_grace @cahndida-serkhaman @lightningmouse @anna-brie @hannah-krynicki @mas410 @gretald @ivy-rose @dbhgodreigns @the-happy-bookaholic @belegteleri @writefury @kate-flounoy @hannah-c @jenali @hislittlerose @wordfitlys…[Read more]

Great film.

Here’s my thoughts on some of the different structural points.

Inciting Incident: Girl walks into square

Key Event: Second musician shows up.

Second Act: When the stakes rise, and the musicians are fighting over the coin.

Midpoint: Coin going down drain. (This changes the trajectory of the story and like @Adry_Grace said, the…[Read more]

Great film.

Here’s where I pinpoint some of the different structural points.

Inciting Incident: Girl walks into square

Key Event: Second musician shows up.

Second Act: When the stakes rise, and the musicians are fighting over the coin.

Midpoint: Coin going down drain. (This changes the trajectory of the story and like @Adry_Grace said, the…[Read more]

@adry_grace I agree with @Daeus. There would have to be something important beyond the art for one to risk there life. As much as I love my nation, I’m not going to risk almost certain death simply to save a historical document like the Declaration of Independence or raise a fallen flag. Now, if it served a greater purpose, like rallying the…[Read more]

@adry_grace Well, first of all, I don’t think risking one’s life is wrong. I do however thing that it could be a devaluing of one’s life. For instance, if I risk almost certain death to rescue a famous painting, that painting had better have some phenomenal value (and I don’t mean monetary or sentimental value). The Mona Lisa is worth millions,…[Read more]

Yes, @Adry_Grace! Very good point.

A few quick things I love about this short— one, the body language is amazing.
Two, the structure is perfect. We open with a bored musician obviously waiting for someone to come along and make his effort worthwhile— something instantly wanted. Enter little girl with coin; want becomes must have. The stakes…[Read more]

Oooooh… wonderful topic! Nice brain stretcher! Okay, let’s see here, bear with me as I try to organize my thoughts.

1. I do not believe that mercy killings are acceptable. Simple enough— I’ll explain, but gimme a moment.
2. I do believe it would be a fantastic story element to challenge any character if it is not glorified.

Now. Why don’t I…[Read more]