@acancello
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
You guys, thank you so much for reading it and for everything!! I was kinda scared for some reason that nobody would be interested to even look at it!
 The first one does pull me in better and I want to read more, but I just love the description and feel of the second, however, it may be a bit slow for the beginning…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
I will definitely think about all this! I need to get more opinions before I make a decision…I am just so new to all this and want to see what more people think.
It’s a neat idea with the time change or whatever, I just don’t want it to be too confusing, and/or abrupt, you know?
Awww your dedication and acknowledgement…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
I have skimmed through these pages here and read pieces of your WIP and I have to say… I love them! Your really good at describing the way things look and feel.
Wait…really???!?!?! Aww thanks that means so much to me!!! I am excited for your feedback!! AND I CAN’T WAIT FOR MORE HUGO!!! lol
Also, feel free to tag you in any post w…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 1 year, 2 months ago
@acancello
Thanks <3 I love learning too!!! (everyone thinks I'm weird for that XD) Ooooh! A trip!! We might go to Havre (a town in Montana) this weekend for Christmas, if my mom's back gets better. It really hurts her to travel in a car, so it all depends on how she's feeling. -
SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@jonas @thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium @rae @vinagirl @trailblazer @grcr @esther-c @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings @keilah-h @acancello @hybridlore @anyone-else
Okay, guys. I need serious help. My novel is kind of going nowhere…because I don’t know which way to start it!!!
I have two beginnings for my story. One jumps straight into…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 1 year, 2 months ago
@acancello
Turns out I might get out of school thursday the easy way…I just got sick XD AND I HAVE A TEST TOMORROW!!!!!!!!!! AHHHH!!! the timing couldn’t be worse…but at the same time I have all the time I’m sick to study lol -
SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 1 year, 2 months ago
@acancello
I’m not on Christmas break yet…we get out on Thursday at 2, when we usually get out at 3:45 so it’s a nice early release! I probably won’t go to school on Thursday just because it’s going to be a big school party and I don’t want to play in a cornhole tournament just because…lol-
I dont blame you, cornhole is not the most exciting game XD Ive played a bit though since one of my good friends loves it, but usually they all turn into a good old fashioned game of ‘pelt’. XDXDXD
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Turns out I might get out of school thursday the easy way…I just got sick XD AND I HAVE A TEST TOMORROW!!!!!!!!!! AHHHH!!! the timing couldn’t be worse…but at the same time I have all the time I’m sick to study lol-
Aw man, being sick sucks. Hope you recover soon! <3 And a test? Oof, wish you luck 🙂 We are off school now, since we didnt take other breaks off throughout the year, but to be honest, I really miss it XD I love learning
Annnnnd I may get to go on a trip to with some friends this week…. we will see… 😃 😬 -
@acancello
Thanks <3 I love learning too!!! (everyone thinks I'm weird for that XD) Ooooh! A trip!! We might go to Havre (a town in Montana) this weekend for Christmas, if my mom's back gets better. It really hurts her to travel in a car, so it all depends on how she's feeling.
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Kylie replied to the topic December Daily Poetry in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 1 year, 2 months ago
@acancello
You don’t have to have an Amazon account…you can just go to amazon.com and get what you need! If you don’t have an account you do have to pay for shipping…but yeah, it doesn’t bother me that much.
I know, it is so annoying how so many girls just are totally addicted to their phones!! I have a flip phone so I can’t do that much on…[Read more] -
SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 1 year, 2 months ago
@acancello
Oh that’s funny XD I absolutely LOVE coffee…especially a good pumpkin spice latte (mmm….) My stories need a lot of editing, but as people read them then it inspires me to actually DO the editing lol
Oh no!!! XD I literally just looked up “gifts for mom” etc. I reccommend Amazon, it’s my best friend lol
OH I wish I was brave enough…[Read more]-
I should start having people edit.. that would be great!
We dont have Amazon so I will either make something or have my Dad take me shopping… Ill think of something XD
Boys dont scare me at all, but maybe because the neighborhood I’m from was mostly boys (Skateboarding boys) and they are some of my best friends since they are really active like…[Read more] -
@acancello
You don’t have to have an Amazon account…you can just go to amazon.com and get what you need! If you don’t have an account you do have to pay for shipping…but yeah, it doesn’t bother me that much.
I know, it is so annoying how so many girls just are totally addicted to their phones!! I have a flip phone so I can’t do that much on…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 1 year, 2 months ago
@acancello
Oooh, coffee’s amazing!!! And I’ve also been getting closer to a girl at school who I consider to be in the popular group at school and I’ve always felt kinda inferior to her (cuz she’s amazing at sports and everyone likes her, while I’m just the quiet nerd of the class lol), but we’ve kinda bonded a little over our writing. She really…[Read more]-
Yeah, thats kind of the funny thing, I hate coffee XD I was there for my home school group, it was a board game night.
Thats great that you are getting closer to her! And she reads your stories? Thats great! I would have people read mine, but they need a lot of editing…. OH NO! Thank you! You just reminded me that I have not gotten any thing…[Read more] -
@acancello
Oh that’s funny XD I absolutely LOVE coffee…especially a good pumpkin spice latte (mmm….) My stories need a lot of editing, but as people read them then it inspires me to actually DO the editing lol
Oh no!!! XD I literally just looked up “gifts for mom” etc. I reccommend Amazon, it’s my best friend lol
OH I wish I was brave enough…[Read more]-
I should start having people edit.. that would be great!
We dont have Amazon so I will either make something or have my Dad take me shopping… Ill think of something XD
Boys dont scare me at all, but maybe because the neighborhood I’m from was mostly boys (Skateboarding boys) and they are some of my best friends since they are really active like…[Read more] -
@acancello
You don’t have to have an Amazon account…you can just go to amazon.com and get what you need! If you don’t have an account you do have to pay for shipping…but yeah, it doesn’t bother me that much.
I know, it is so annoying how so many girls just are totally addicted to their phones!! I have a flip phone so I can’t do that much on…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Exactly! I feel like having Vikii will make the future story better, (My brother is trying to convince me to write a sequel…)
Yeah, because then she can comfort him, and he can realize how much she does care about him while she realizes how she cares for him as well.
And yes, you totally should write a sequel!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 1 year, 2 months ago
@acancello
hey, this is random, but how’s writing going? more importantly, how’s Hugo??? <333 XD-
Hi! Thanks for asking, it means a lot 🙂 Its going pretty good, I went to a coffee shop last night and met a girl who was really interested in my work.
I am now at 80k and I’m soooooooooooooo close!!!!!!!!!!
Hugos good, right now hes helping people evacuate the city. XD
Hows your writing? Are you ready for the Holidays?-
@acancello
Oooh, coffee’s amazing!!! And I’ve also been getting closer to a girl at school who I consider to be in the popular group at school and I’ve always felt kinda inferior to her (cuz she’s amazing at sports and everyone likes her, while I’m just the quiet nerd of the class lol), but we’ve kinda bonded a little over our writing. She really…[Read more]-
Yeah, thats kind of the funny thing, I hate coffee XD I was there for my home school group, it was a board game night.
Thats great that you are getting closer to her! And she reads your stories? Thats great! I would have people read mine, but they need a lot of editing…. OH NO! Thank you! You just reminded me that I have not gotten any thing…[Read more] -
@acancello
Oh that’s funny XD I absolutely LOVE coffee…especially a good pumpkin spice latte (mmm….) My stories need a lot of editing, but as people read them then it inspires me to actually DO the editing lol
Oh no!!! XD I literally just looked up “gifts for mom” etc. I reccommend Amazon, it’s my best friend lol
OH I wish I was brave enough…[Read more]-
I should start having people edit.. that would be great!
We dont have Amazon so I will either make something or have my Dad take me shopping… Ill think of something XD
Boys dont scare me at all, but maybe because the neighborhood I’m from was mostly boys (Skateboarding boys) and they are some of my best friends since they are really active like…[Read more] -
@acancello
You don’t have to have an Amazon account…you can just go to amazon.com and get what you need! If you don’t have an account you do have to pay for shipping…but yeah, it doesn’t bother me that much.
I know, it is so annoying how so many girls just are totally addicted to their phones!! I have a flip phone so I can’t do that much on…[Read more]
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Also, I really admire how social you are…like I am just so tense around social environments and just kind of want to disappear so yeah. Random thought XD I need to learn to be more social…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @acancello @grcr
Rally!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
I know it probably has to happen….but it’s going to like destroy poor Hugo…(I mean at least Vikki can comfort him…still it’s sad though)
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whaley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Yeah, like @acancello says, it’s a spectrum. I have writer friends who looooooove talking about their projects 😂
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
 (OH! Also I have decided in my WIP, Vikii does live! But instead of her its the main characters older brother and Hugos sister.😭)
Girl that might be even worse….WHY WOULD YOU KILL HUGO’S SISTER???? I’m going to kidnap him and give him a hug and fuzzy blankets and hot cocoa…it’s so sad!!!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
I LOVE THEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT WAS SO SWEET!!
Marcurious
The glint of the fire caught Hugo’s face at the perfect angle, reflecting the tears that trickled from his brown eyes.
Marcurious felt for him. “I’ve lost people, too,” he said, touching Hugo’s shoulder. “My friend was lost in a battle against the Pythonos…we were trying to…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@acancello I know you’re busy…but it’s been a while since we RP’d Hottoline…hehe
Ottoline
She sat next to Marcurious and Hugo in the grass around the campfire. It had been a long day. She’d almost died…
Her eyelids were heavy, and she slowly nodded off, welcoming the embrace of sleep.
Marcurious
He smiled to himself as Ottoline fell…[Read more]
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Kylie replied to the topic December Daily Poetry in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@acancello Cool ❤️
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Aw man, being sick sucks. Hope you recover soon! <3 And a test? Oof, wish you luck 🙂 We are off school now, since we didnt take other breaks off throughout the year, but to be honest, I really miss it XD I love learning
Annnnnd I may get to go on a trip to with some friends this week…. we will see… 😃 😬
@acancello
Thanks <3 I love learning too!!! (everyone thinks I'm weird for that XD) Ooooh! A trip!! We might go to Havre (a town in Montana) this weekend for Christmas, if my mom's back gets better. It really hurts her to travel in a car, so it all depends on how she's feeling.