@acancello
Active 3 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Marcurious
He tensed as the clamor of battle roared in his ears.
“Climb on!” he shouted, and shapeshifted into a horse. Hugo and Ottoline scrambled on, and Marcurious took off at full gallop. He had to find somewhere safe…
There! He spotted a small cave into the side of a hill. Ottoline and Hugo slid off and Marcurious changed…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@calyhuge @beth-torres @savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer @acancello @rae @jonas @highscribeofaetherium
you all are the ones who haven’t left the rp right?
ok here we go
Snake
He swooped down and grabbed a few soldiers, flinging them up into the air before freezing them into blocks of ice.
This was more fun than he’d thought.
He barely noticed…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
You’re not the only one! We eat at 5 too, lol.
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HighScribe replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
5?!? Wow. Impressive. We usually eat around 7:00-7:30 XD
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
I may answer all your questions later, but for now, I am drawn into the story.
Alrighty, awesome! 👍
I see potential for this story to be better if you had at least one chapter before this that introduced us to daily life with the Orb. It would drawn me in more, and make us care about Ev and Ami more than just plopping them and the plot in our…
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HighScribe replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Wow!!! That’s amazing! Congratulations!!!!!!!! 🥳🥳
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@rae @highscribeofaetherium @grcr @beth-torres @whalekeeper @esther-c @hybridlore @savannah_grace2009 @acancello @loopylin @princesachronicle22 @thearcaneaxiom
Reminder! We’re planning to smash that record into the dust at 5 EST/4 CST/3 MST/2 PST.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Oh my goodness, congratulations!! That’s so exciting!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Oh my goodness!!!!! I am so happy for you, and so proud of you! I am so lucky to get to know you as a friend on here, and I’m celebrating right with you, girl!! You have to let me know how editing/publishing goes!!!
Well, Pitts are explained later in the book, same with Rippak and Godede Waters. I didn’t want to explain everything…[Read more]
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G replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
AHHH!!! I’m so happy for you!!!! Congratulations!!! 🎉 🎉🎉🎉😆😆😆
*lights a random fireworks from last year*
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @mineralizedwritings @smiley @esther-c @rae @hybridlore @keilah-h @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @acancello @mineralizedwritings @vinagirl
Okay, I really have been working on this chapter a bunch, and I would like to know you’re guys’ thoughts! I know some of you guys have read this chapter, but I was wondering if you had any…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
I would be such an emotional wreck 😭😭😭 LIKE FINISHING A NOVEL!!! THAT IS SO AMAZING!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
OH MY GOSH GIRLLLLLLL!!!! I AM SO HAPPY FOR YOU!!! I LITERALLY FREAKED OUT WHEN I READ THAT YOU’RE FINISHING THE EPILOGUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHH!!! <333
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Woah!! I’m so proud of you!! Good luck on your edits! 💖💖🎉🎉
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
Wait, what’s this about you writing your epilogue?! Did you finish something big?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ posted a new activity comment 1 year, 1 month ago
@acancello
Oh no!! I’m sorry, DC sounds amazing, so sorry you guys don’t get to go 🙁 I kinda hope we can still go to Havre because that’s where my grandparents live, so it’s really nice to get to see them.
I would bring my books to work on at night…but I go to public school for almost 9 hours a day, so by the time I get home, the last thing I…[Read more] -
SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
Thanks for understanding!! 🙂 and thanks for supporting me <3
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@acancello @grcr @hybridlore @esther-c
I’ve been praying about this today…and I just got a strong sense that God wants me to keep the beginning like I had it…like the second link.
I just feel a lot better about the way I had it before. I’m not sure why…I just get anxiety every time I think about starting it that way, and feel immediate…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
You guys, thank you so much for reading it and for everything!! I was kinda scared for some reason that nobody would be interested to even look at it!
The first one does pull me in better and I want to read more, but I just love the description and feel of the second, however, it may be a bit slow for the beginning…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
I will definitely think about all this! I need to get more opinions before I make a decision…I am just so new to all this and want to see what more people think.
It’s a neat idea with the time change or whatever, I just don’t want it to be too confusing, and/or abrupt, you know?
Awww your dedication and acknowledgement…
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