Allison

…@savannah_grace2009

Oh wow, a lot happened, and I’m overwhelmed just reading this conversation 😅 I can’t address everything y’all and Sara said, but I have a few small thoughts.

About the Pythonos’ redeemability:

I didn’t mean to imply that they can’t be saved! I just meant that they wouldn’t have any draw to be saved, so they can never be sa…

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@theshadow ok so actually I was reading over my writing again and I realized that while you were off in saying Engineer’s line was from when their team lost and he wanted to know why, there actually is a scene very close to that in the story! He’s trying to boost morale for his team after they get beaten soundly, although Huntress is the only one…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle I know right? Ugh.

I’m glad it seems to be working for you now though

@mineralizedwritings haha that’s a cute style for him! He looks great!

@ellette-giselle I have no idea. Maybe just go into your settings and see if you accidentally hit something or if a glitch turned off the notifications.

@linus-smallprint ooh, more trivia!

@ellette-giselle

unfortunately, that scene is a LOOOONNNNNGGGG ways away.

We have plenty of other heartbreaking things before then…

but thanks for being so interested in it! That means a lot!!!!!!!!

@ellette-giselle

Yeahhhh! hahaha

Thanks for letting me bounce ideas off of you!!! I really appreciate that! <3

@ellette-giselle

I have ADHD…it’s not my fault!!! 😂😂

you’re gonna hate me when you hear what I’m gonna do! heheheh

So you know how you said that Eloy should die INSTEAD of Cass?

Well, Cass is going to be executed.

Naturally Eloy is angry at his brother for everything he did, so he builds up anger, and then instead of stepping in front of…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

WAIT actually Cassian is still dying nvm

I forgot about that

I HAVE PLANS

God can also deliver us over to our sins and temptations…another random thought. (see Romans 1)

@ellette-giselle

No, you’re fine!!!

I just can never seem to think things through before I say them! I reply too fast…

Thanks for helping me, this gave me a lot to think about! (you too @jonas !) Today I developed sooo much of the plot thanks to you guys!

No it wasn’t your mistake, it was MY mistake…I still feel bad for confusing everybody…[Read more]

I’m getting to the point where I don’t even know what I mean 😭

Goodness I realized I keep contradicting myself.

Sorry guys.

I say things without thinking them through. (blame it on the coffee!)

I know I said there can’t be redemption for Cass, but I didn’t really mean that.

Ugh. Sorry for the confusion!

Holy cow this thing blew up into a bigger thing than I intended and I feel bad for some reason sorry :/

@ellette-giselle @jonas

But there’s a problem there. When we chose to live in sin, or even directly comit evil, there is still hope for us until death. Even the vilest of sinner can be redeemed by the blood of Christ. If you make Pythonos unredeemable, you are almost saying that the blood of Christ is not enough for them. You know? Which is why r…

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@ellette-giselle

Yeah, I think we just hit the major plot-hole. I think you need something between Pythonos and people. You see, even the most depraved of people do not become demons.

To be fair, it is an allegory, and not everything needs to be a one-to-one correlation. I personally don’t have a problem with Pythonos representing both demons a…[Read more]

I also do like @elette-giselle ‘s idea with Eloy.

@savannah_grace2009

Lilitu was kind of my “you’re never too far gone” person, because his parents are Jraldath and Selena! There’s going to be this epic confrontation scene where he wrestles with the knowledge that he was meant to be evil from the moment he was born. Does that work? Or do I still need Cassian?

My problem with that is that evil is…[Read more]

Pythonos could become loyal to the Great One again…but why would they want to? They lose all ability to love or care or feel regret and are consumed by evil and the desire for power. I just don’t know how that could work without digging a hole for myself XD

@ellette-giselle

But Cass becomes a Pythonos, so there’s no redemption. At least, i can’t think of a way that he could be redeemed.

(See post above where I replied to Jonas)

NO I AM NOT KILLING ELOY NO NO NO I love him too much ahhh

Also…Cass doesn’t just get tortured.

He HELPS TORTURE THEM. So that won’t really work…