Allison

@raxforge 😂

@koshka @ellette-giselle

Oki-doki. I have to catch up on some work, so I might not reply immediately, sorry about that.

Barnes

Barnes listened, and then replied quietly as the two young men thought. “I understand you aren’t too hopeful about this whole thing. But think for a second about the school you were transferred to. Your leaders must n…[Read more]

You can start with a blurb if you’ve written one! :]

*Subscribing*

@loopylin @ellette-giselle

😁🤪🫠🤫

@raxforge lolllll what prompted THAT conversation?

@ellette-giselle awww thank you!!

Okay, so here’s a magic system that I’ve been working on for a long time and keep modifying, but I feel is in a pretty good place now.

(Technically, it’s more like two magic systems, but they are highly connected to each other.)

First, to understand it, you need a quick crash course in my universe’s rules.

Humans are made up of five aspects:…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle which ones? The comic panels?

I didn’t draw the whole thing, just added whatever I wanted to an existing image, but thank you! I enjoy trying to match the style.

@whalekeeper

You can share one of your systems if you want, Jonas! I think it’s safe to say you have a few. XD

You could say that…                               (It’s about 13…)

I’ll see if I have a good one I haven’t talked about much.

I once beta-read a book which is now published, and it had a big magic problem which the author didn’t rew…

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@savannah_grace2009

AHHH YOU HOPPED ON THE TREND TOOOOO

THIS TREND SLAAAAAAYYYYS ✨

but most of the time they can simply pull moisture from the air and rehydrate.

Mooooost of the time. Except when they’re in the desert. 😁 Or if they get freeze-dried and packaged. (That got dark…)

If a Pitt can’t sing, they can’t control the plants as they do not…

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@elishavet-pidyon

They don’t have blood, but if cut the wound will spill light that in turn heals it.

That’s some cool concept imagery. 😎

So there are “laws unbreakable” like the cost of reason and the concept of ransom blood which are deep in the fabric of the world.

How does the concept of ransom blood work? What are some of the other unbre…[Read more]

@loopylin

Literally everyone loves your concept, so you’ve got originality conquered and in the bag, girl. XD

I love it so much but it loves to frustrate me and taunt me with its vagueness. Maybe you guys could help me make it make sense?

Ideas ideas

– An Ink drawing melts away after a certain time limit

– After the artist draws something, they…[Read more]

@jonas

Thanks for the debriefing! I’ve read up on these concepts before, but it’s been so long since I focused on them, that I felt you were better able to summarize these things.

Of these, I think effects is actually the least important. Access and costs can both be very important, but cost probably a bit more so.

Definitely agree with this. Any…[Read more]

@rae wow.

just wow.

Amazing! I love redemption arcs too, and this short story is a good setup!

@stephie lol!

never heard that before. But hey, at least I’m not the only one.

@elishavet-pidyon @koshka

Apparently my feet changed that, which meant my story was changing itself. A terrifying thought indeed.

Dun … dun… DUN!!! XD

Nice segment. Interested to see where it goes next…