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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
The girl’s wide eyes dulled from silver to gray, and a final puff of air escaped her stone lips.
WAITWHATNO FELICITY
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
That second to last paragraph was really good, I like the way you wrote it.
Lucille
Lucy dropped the hatchet on the floor and walked several paces, realizing that it wouldn’t be too good to fall on it. A kid in the east fields had fallen on his father’s ax two years ago and there had been many cautionary stories before that.
She slid to…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
I also have some good ideas basing off Whaley’s poem.
Be my guest! I just riffed on what I remembered of the characters lol
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Violent of the “kill everything” type.
XD Oh Gabriel, you force of nature
Lucille
Lucy peered out the window at the crows. “They’re real handsome birds when they’re not so close up.”
She eyed the room’s mantelpiece noticing a handle sticking from the ornate wood. It was a small silver hatchet. Without hesitation, she yanked it free of it…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
I also have some good ideas basing off Whaley’s poem. So far my characters haven’t really had arcs besides “we’re trying to get outta here” but what if they did?
idk what “losing yourself” and “fighting the mist” and “finding dread” entail, but I’m sure it’s nothing they can’t handle, right? …..right?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
@rae ooooh Snipes and Gabriel will be something for sure lol
hopefully Gabriel won’t think Soldier (and maybe Sniper too?) is one of those monsters he fights at home or another giant crow.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Can you guys describe your characters?
Oh! Yeah I can do that. Barnes is just a tall woman with chopped blonde hair. Wears very old-style clothing from maybe the 40s, a suit in this. Also a white mask with dark eyeholes. Little Lucy is literally the same but without the mask and with even shorter hair.
It’s cool you want to draw this! B…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
I’m good with anything that happens as long as Lucy stays with Gabriel. She’d be none too happy if they got separated
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
5 is Ayla, Ducktator’s character
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
@loopylin I’d be good with that. My characters might not though, they’ll be super confused.
@rae @whalekeeper if Loopy pulls her charries, you mind if my three join your party?
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Can you guys describe your characters? I’m only gonna draw silhouettes or closeups of eyes or hands or feet or whatever’s important to the character’s arc in this rp, but I still would like details.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
so we got:
1: Felicity
2: Kefa’s cat prince
3: Mel
4: Kefa’s split personality character
5: Not sure who this is
6: Huntress
7: Sniper
8: Soldier?
9: Gabriel
10: Barnes
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
You can always make them lose their way and come back to them another time. The mist could warp time and they’d wander around without doing anything significant for days on end. So you can do something else in the meantime.
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
The way I’ve imagined it, the labyrinth is really good at acting like it has a mastermind. It’s not a person and doesn’t have a person behind it, but it can mechanically detect, reflect and manipulate real people’s thoughts. No one within the story wrote the poem; it just spontaneously manifested because of how the labyrinth…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
It’s like a Wings of Fire prophecy. I kinda want to draw a thing for it, kinda like this:

(Not my art)
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
@whalekeeper i love that poem hehe
I think I can pick out Huntress and Sniper plus Kefa’s removed characters. Who are the rest?
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Lucille
Lucy did as she was told and more; she slid every candle into her trouser belt and pockets. The flames flickered around her waist like a burner under a pan and she hissed with restrained laughter.
The poem didn’t make much sense. Was it about people who had already escaped? Had they died? She recognized Gabriel’s title, but the res…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Labyrinth rp in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
My hand is fine now. I was rather miffed because I burnt my hand yesterday too, pulling steak out of the oven. It’s never bad burn, just painful for ten minutes or so.
Baking is indeed fun and time-consuming
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