Allison

@the_lost-journal

Oh, cool!

my next question was going to be what those letters stood for lol so that’s a double answer! Lolol cool cool though.

@the_lost-journal

Oh nice, a topic for your WIPs! *subscribes*

Which one of your works is Carrot Cake from?

@savannah_grace2009

*exhale* 

Snap doodle.

Just finished reading through all your chapters… man, I dont even know what to say…

Must read moreeeeee. WRITE WRITE WRITE!

Eloy is my favorite… Aubrielle is probably second. And, since he hasn’t done anything yet that I can see, Cassian is also a fav.

Liviaaaa, you be lusting, girlie…c…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Okay, well, I am reading! *Shoves all the motivation your way* I will give you some comments and some in-depth thoughts! Hopefully these are what you’re looking for.

Comments (as I’m going through) –

– Characters are very easy to picture, and not very easy to forget. XD So you’re good in that area.

– Prose flows smoothly…[Read more]

@keilah-h

It’s in the update on her profile. 🙃

@the_lost-journal

oop, uhh, I will make a topic for it!!!!!!!!!

Sounds good😂

Nice, because I know other denominations just forgive to one another… 😬 that sounds worse.

And of course, we should reconcile ourselves with our fellow man, especially those we have wronged, but man cannot forgive sin, only God, and by extension those He’s given a…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle sounded like it!

I recognized “ace” from an Australian book series about dogs; the main dog character calls his mate that once or twice when he’s talking about her, implying that she’s the very best. It stands to reason that’d be a British thing too, and it certainly sounds like somethin that’d come out of the WWI time period.

@the_lost-journal

I knew you would say that 😂

What can I say? You know me.

There should be more people named CARROT!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Maybe look up words meaning carrot in various languages, that might work.

Where exactly is the link again? I seem to remember it was on an external document or something rather than being posted directly on KP.

@ellette-giselle haha!!

Not as familiar with that one, and google search brought up nothing, but I’m guessing it means that’s good.

@savannah_grace2009 yay!

@keilah-h

yes, actually!!!!!

I think I have a couple more chapters since you last read it!!!

@savannah_grace2009 yep!

Got any more of your story yet?

I haven’t been checking, sorry.

@keilah-h

aw yesss

@ellette-giselle I love it. You can use British and Aussie expressions around me whenever you want!

@savannah_grace2009 yeahh!! it’s always great to have that sense of community.

@keilah-h

I feel like I always write the most when I post on KP or when I know people will read it…

It’s so cool to see writers supporting other writers <3

@whalekeeper lol

@ellette-giselle I’m glad.

And I’m over here wondering if your cry of “crikey!” was just the first thing that came to mind or if you specifically chose it cause you thought I’d get a kick out of it.

If the second is the case, your presumption was correct.

If it’s the first and I’m over thinking it, ignore that.

@savannah_grace2009

I also just want to know that people are reading it, because it’s hard to write when you don’t know if people even care or are interested, if that makes sense. When I know people are reading it, it gives me so much more motivation!!

yessss this happens to me too. The I worked on for over half of 2024 and was the first fan…[Read more]