@acancello
Active 1 year, 11 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Enid replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed
The hurried navigation through the pews is all too real, lol.The brunette shrugged.
This is the feminine version of a french word, so unless I’m misunderstanding who is speaking here – I think it’s Riker – this should be brunet. Same difference between blonde and blond.
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 1 year, 5 months ago
What exactly IS your job?
Huntress: Well……We used to be mercenaries. Hired guns. We were supposed to guard our employer’s mine in an asteroid belt from his brother’s team, but it turns out it was all a ruse and the only reason we were fighting was because a sneaky Sunekite provoked the battle as revenge for the brothers’…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
I like it where it is as it is sort of the first rush of the downhill slide we’re about to hit.
Oh no.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
🤦🏼♀️
It’s the gang, y’all. The same gang from last book. The same gang we left at the end of the last book and are now picking up and the beginning of the next.
Do I really gotta remind the reader?
In the previous books in the series, the POV characters switched every time. Especially with the way that you left off the last boo…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 5 months ago
@loopylin very cool!! The drawing reminds me a little of a character in one of the video games my brother plays. Unfortunately, he happens to hate her cause she’s indirectly responsible for killing him and making him lose a really good win streak. lol
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
@ellette-giselle hehe, ok then🤭
(not a finished scene btw, but a snippet)
The Schind family looked exhausted, barely awake.
Not that Leon doubted that he probably looked much the same.
Thoughts of Germany had reawakened thoughts, memories, and even nightmares that plagued his sleep and sometimes even his waking moments.
He shifted on the…
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
@ellette-giselle hehe thank youuuu🤭
and no, this is actually a section from The Bois’ book🫶😂
(and I’ll fix those typos, this was completely unedited, so😂)
tho I could share a snippet from Book 3 if you wanted👀
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
@ellette-giselle @rae @savannah_grace2009 @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @koshka @godlyfantasy12 @anyone-else-idk
I love them y’all😭🫶
So much had crumbled.
So many lives had been lost.
Leo sank against the wall, fists clenching and unclenching, every breath heavy, tears blurring his vision.
Dietrich…Fin…so many lives had been lost.
And Eze…
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freedom replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@ellette-giselle haha I’m glad you like my commentary😂
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freedom replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@ellette-giselle You can tag me, sure! But I can’t make any promises on me reading all of the sections😅🫶
and that feeling definitely came across in the scene
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freedom replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@ellette-giselle I only read the section you shared today, I picked quite the section to read😭💀
Any thoughts on this section in particular?
Other than I think it shattered me??? 😭
it’s really good, I love the strength they all have for their faith and their determination to stand no matter the cost.
I think it’s sad enough and portrays…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
I haven’t been keeping up with all of this, but MA’AM.
way to tear me into pieces on a random Friday morning😭😭
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
AAH I gotta go. If y’all roleplay some more I’ll reply later tonight at like 3 am
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
So uh… Here’s a literal visual for the dance. XD
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Enid replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 5 months ago
Guys, I felt the need to say this because of the school dance we’ve waited for, for two+ years. I am at prom right now – right now – and it’s pretty fun.

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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 1 year, 5 months ago
What’s one place you’ve never been to, but have always wanted to visit?
Huntress: Well, thanks to our jobs, we’ve been to a lot of places….. I guess I’ve always wanted to just travel the galaxy without having to worry about someone being after us. Or us being after someone. I don’t really care where it is.
What is something you…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 1 year, 5 months ago
“What do you mean? They are like… ya know? Languages? I can really put them in a category. I guess they each have their own unique letters… and they are each unique to their country. Like German has weird letters, one looks like an uppercase B…”
Huntress: Huh. Like an uppercase B. If only Medic were here, then you could talk…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 1 year, 5 months ago
Bleh, I’m bored. Here is some Flazzy rambling. 🥱
What’s one place you’ve never been to, but have always wanted to visit?
“I actually travel a lot because my dad lives in another country, so I don’t really think about going anywhere a lot… but I guess… uh…” *long pause* “…oh, I want to go to the Ethri Islands. They’re, like, at the top of o…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Final book in the The Flames of Hope Saga: The Dawn Will Come in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 5 months ago
@ellette-giselle oooh! I loved the bookbinding part!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Interviews in the forum Characters 1 year, 5 months ago
but why are you releasing wild raccoons into her yard?
“Mom said I couldn’t keep them. What else was I supposed to do?”Sounds like my charrie Soldier lolllll
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