Allison

@elishavet-pidyon

She’s not childlike. She’s a phantom of her childhood, dancing on the wind by the power of lunchables and red 40.

lol that’s cool.

@grcr wowwww that looks awesome!!

@ellette-giselle

The cover looks really cool! Who designed the image? Was that you?

I wanted to add that the description on the back looked good, but the last paragraph didn’t give us much hope, if that makes sense. Most of the time in descriptions like that you’ll see something that leaves the reader guessing whether or not something is goi…[Read more]

I feel like their faces are wonky…

@ellette-giselle

Okay… here it is… hopefully it’s at least a little accurate—I feel like I may have butchered them. If there’s anything you don’t like, let me know—I can change or redo things. 😊😅

I’m so sorry I didn’t draw the combat boots… there were too many feet and I was exhausted. Ignore the hands too—could almost go without saying at t…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle yep, pretty real to me lol

I might try it! If I can find a place to get the song.

@ellette-giselle The way you talked about Sniper sounds like he’s in the room looking over my shoulder at what I’m typing lolllllll

Which would actually be terrifying for a few reasons. But hey, it’s not like I haven’t also insinuated that my characters actually exist and know what I think of them lol

Anyway, that song is super cool, fits Ro…[Read more]

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Picture is pretty much finished. Will post tomorrow…

@ellette-giselle

Huh, weird. I didn’t do that intentionally, but it might be because you don’t have an account anymore. 🤷

Thank you so much!!

@rae That sounds cool!

@ellette-giselle I don’t know. Either way could work.

Oh, never mind, you found the typo.

Other than that, the cover looks beautiful.

Also, I have a few suggestions for the back blurb.

• You accidentally wrote “These children are forbidden to form any emotional that might hinder their unwavering loyalty.” Should it be “emotional bond” instead?
• “Jonathan, the second-born” should maybe be something like “Jonathan, a second-born.” But that one can stay in if you really want…

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@ellette-giselle That looks really good!!

I’m assuming the number changes for each sector.

It reminds me a little bit of the insignias my brother designs for his Icebreaker Empire universe. (He hopes to someday make a video game with a tie-in book series.)

@ellette-giselle

It looks awesome! Is that for the series covers, or an illustration, or what?

@ellette-giselle

So exciting!! 😅

@ellette-giselle

Good to have you back!

I’ll try to get to those questions later today. 😉 Sorry I haven’t yet.

@ellette-giselle yay!