@acancello
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 1 week ago
Thank you so much! 💗
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 1 week ago
YES!😭 I’m finishing my big novel up right now!!! Its 85k words unedited so I’m feeling pretty good about the length.
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Allison posted a new activity comment 11 months, 1 week ago
Theres a book series? Now I know what I need to get 😂
Portal is a first person puzzle video game with so many secrets! My pfp is one of the characters. If you ever get the opportunity, you should totally get it! -
Allison posted a new activity comment 11 months, 1 week ago
Have you played Portal?
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Allison posted a new activity comment 11 months, 1 week ago
WhAt?!?! You never told me!! XD I LOOOOVVVEEEE Halo! XDXD
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Allison posted an update 11 months, 1 week ago
I cant take the suspense!
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Allison posted a new activity comment 11 months, 1 week ago
Awwww! What did you name it??
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😊😊 We haven’t decided on a name yet, but we’re thinking about Halo or Arbiter… (because we’re HUGE fans of that video game lol 😂)❤️❤️
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WhAt?!?! You never told me!! XD I LOOOOVVVEEEE Halo! XDXD
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Have you played Portal?
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Lol XD XD Yeah our big sister got us hooked on it, and then we got the book series and loved that too. lol
Hmm, I’ve never played Portal before (or at least I don’t think so)… what kind of game is it? 😀
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Theres a book series? Now I know what I need to get 😂
Portal is a first person puzzle video game with so many secrets! My pfp is one of the characters. If you ever get the opportunity, you should totally get it! -
Lol 😄 Yeah, it’s really good series. It starts Chief out as a kid, and how he became a legend and everything… lol
The main problems (in our opinion) was the flood book (because it’s written by a different author than the first and other books) and that our mom has to skip a lot of language in it… 😐Oooo… That sounds very interesting. I’ll…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 11 months, 1 week ago
I just read your chapter above… ERICH!! He may be another one of my favorites…
Ahh, well, you’ll come up with something😊
I did! Luckily I remembered that we have melt and pour soap and other craft supplies.
Yep, sure is! I’ve had these characters and stuff for a while (and several of the characters also appeared in Fre…
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Allison posted a new activity comment 11 months, 1 week ago
@savannah_grace2009
That will be fun! Hopefully your Moms back gets better. Back injuries are rough! I guess now I’m not going? Plans changed again XD. We were going to go to D.C, but my parents didnt want to drive in the Christmas traffic. Oh well, there will always be another time!
And I know, learning is so… enlightening. My brother thinks…[Read more]-
@acancello
Oh no!! I’m sorry, DC sounds amazing, so sorry you guys don’t get to go 🙁 I kinda hope we can still go to Havre because that’s where my grandparents live, so it’s really nice to get to see them.
I would bring my books to work on at night…but I go to public school for almost 9 hours a day, so by the time I get home, the last thing I…[Read more]
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Allison posted a new activity comment 11 months, 1 week ago
I had the most amazing idea for a new WIP and started planning, but after a while I switched to my old one and it was so familiar and comforting❤️ Yes, I just loooove being a writer!
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Sometimes I try starting another WIP, but mine is just so comforting and just makes me so…idk, happy I guess?? Being a writer is amazing <3
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Allison posted a new activity comment 11 months, 1 week ago
@freedomwriter76
I cant see any of your replies on the comments, they pop up in my email but not on here.. (I think also a while ago you chatted me and asked how I was doing and I couldn’t see it and I feel so bad that I never responded 😂) I got the one you sent me today too in my email…
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Allison replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
Thats totally ok, go with what God wants you to do! The second chapter eased you more into the action which is also a very good type of introduction😊
I kind of am still a little worried that nobody will like it the other way XD
Dont worry, I do! Think of really popular books like Harry Potter, J.K. Rowling didn’t jump right…[Read more]
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Allison replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
it’s all true though…I became such a better writer when I joined KP and after talking to all of you guys!!
I did to! I dont think I would have ever got this is close to finishing without everyone on here <3
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Allison replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
Ok, I read them both. The first one does pull me in better and I want to read more, but I just love the description and feel of the second, however, it may be a bit slow for the beginning chapter. That’s all I have for now, I will go over it more later today if I have time!
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Allison replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
This is supposed to say “feel free to tag me in any post”…so yeah…XD
Dont worry, I understood XD I make errors like that all the time 😂
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Allison replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
Awww your dedication and acknowledgement is so sweet 🥰
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Allison replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 11 months, 1 week ago
I have skimmed through these pages here and read pieces of your WIP and I have to say… I love them! Your really good at describing the way things look and feel. I will defiantly look through your link and give my critique 🙂 And pretty soon I will be posting some of mine to get feedback, I’ll be sure to tag you 🙂
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Allison posted a new activity comment 11 months, 1 week ago
Aw man, being sick sucks. Hope you recover soon! <3 And a test? Oof, wish you luck 🙂 We are off school now, since we didnt take other breaks off throughout the year, but to be honest, I really miss it XD I love learning
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Allison posted an update 11 months, 1 week ago
@freedomwriter76
Hi! We haven’t chatted in a while. I was wondering how you are doing? You ready for the holidays? <3-
@freedomwriter76
I cant see any of your replies on the comments, they pop up in my email but not on here.. (I think also a while ago you chatted me and asked how I was doing and I couldn’t see it and I feel so bad that I never responded 😂) I got the one you sent me today too in my email…
Anyway, I’m sorry your weekend was rough, if you ever…[Read more]
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Allison posted a new activity comment 11 months, 1 week ago
I dont blame you, cornhole is not the most exciting game XD Ive played a bit though since one of my good friends loves it, but usually they all turn into a good old fashioned game of ‘pelt’. XDXDXD
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@acancello
Turns out I might get out of school thursday the easy way…I just got sick XD AND I HAVE A TEST TOMORROW!!!!!!!!!! AHHHH!!! the timing couldn’t be worse…but at the same time I have all the time I’m sick to study lol-
Aw man, being sick sucks. Hope you recover soon! <3 And a test? Oof, wish you luck 🙂 We are off school now, since we didnt take other breaks off throughout the year, but to be honest, I really miss it XD I love learning
Annnnnd I may get to go on a trip to with some friends this week…. we will see… 😃 😬 -
@acancello
Thanks <3 I love learning too!!! (everyone thinks I'm weird for that XD) Ooooh! A trip!! We might go to Havre (a town in Montana) this weekend for Christmas, if my mom's back gets better. It really hurts her to travel in a car, so it all depends on how she's feeling.
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Have you played Portal?
Lol XD XD Yeah our big sister got us hooked on it, and then we got the book series and loved that too. lol
Hmm, I’ve never played Portal before (or at least I don’t think so)… what kind of game is it? 😀
Theres a book series? Now I know what I need to get 😂
Portal is a first person puzzle video game with so many secrets! My pfp is one of the characters. If you ever get the opportunity, you should totally get it!
Lol 😄 Yeah, it’s really good series. It starts Chief out as a kid, and how he became a legend and everything… lol
The main problems (in our opinion) was the flood book (because it’s written by a different author than the first and other books) and that our mom has to skip a lot of language in it… 😐
Oooo… That sounds very interesting. I’ll…[Read more]