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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
@keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @koshka HIIIII!!!
Yessss Callan is…not good XD yall want me to post another scene?
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
Okay! I did a Sypher RP above.
Hope you get to feeling and sleeping better. Sounds like both you and Barnes need a good rest.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
Btw, did y’all see the watercolor Syph my sister posted to the art section a bit back?
Syph
“I didn’t mean to hurt your feelings, I just thought you were confused, so I thought it would be best if you just came and watched. I’m sorry if I hurt you.”
Syph blinked, flushed blue, then white. The air in the classroom hung he…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic How do you want to improve? in the forum Topic of the Week 3 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic How do you want to improve? in the forum Topic of the Week 3 months ago
I need to work on consistency, which I get is mostly self-discipline (and which is something I’ve always had to work on, writing life aside). I want to write, but I don’t have to write, and there are many things in my life right now that I have to do. Setting aside a specific time to do what I want, even when I’m tired, has been hard. But I’m tr…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
Callan’s….oof. I
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Koshka replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
*Slowly freaks out*
November scenes!!! She’s writing again!! November! Ara! Ahhhhhhhhhhh-
*Freaking out escalates tenfold*
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
But ya callan sucks
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
And if she was there (she does later have a confrontation with her, Callan and November) she isn’t at that place in her character to fight back );
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
@loopylin sadly no XD
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
@loopylin awww thx!! I feel like my writing is subpar tbh….but idk sometimes posting it elsewhere helps? idk…I give myself such a hard time. I’m just writing it down, and I have to remind myself that every single second XD
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic How do you want to improve? in the forum Topic of the Week 3 months ago
@whalekeeper for me I feel like my writing isn’t like…good enough? Like it’s too childish? or…idk…not (mature isn’t the right word…) like I don’t like doing descriptions…so def description writing, but I just feel like its not great. I feel like I wrote better in the past and that thought process stinks so I try not to dwell on it…
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
ANYWAYYY if u want to read the scenes I’ve got…it’s November scenes… (good luck gang…don’t hate me XD)
here’s the first one! (btw I’m not looking for critiques. this is a draft and idk how the writing is honestly…im not super happy but im just getting words down.)
And its not super linear cuz Im not doing Ara’s…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 started the topic I AM WRITING AGAIN!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
Hi gang!!!
SOOO As the title says I started writing again! Yay!
I just couldn’t get away from my series yall…I tried with the old Peter Pan story (which I love) but I just couldn’t get away from my WIP. But that’s ok cuz im finally getting words again!!!
I came up with an idea thats kinda working now! Writing all the scenes for one…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months ago
As for the other stuff, I really appreciated the themes you worked with. That we can’t love ourselves as we should through our own eyes. We have to see us (and others) through God’s love, light, hope. That isn’t easy, but it’s worth it.
I liked the order, how you spliced poem and story together. It made it easy to read and follow.
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Koshka replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months ago
Wow. That sixth story was dark, but I know it’s needed.
It’s sad how many people indulge in self harm just “trying to feel”, but since it looks “normal”, like tattoos, piercings, or extreme diets, other people don’t see it for what it is.
My warning wouldn’t be that it’s dark or violent, but that you don’t want to even…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic PLEASE TEAR THIS APART–URGENT CRITIQUES NEEDED in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 months, 1 week ago
*Cracks knuckles*
First off, that sounds awesome.
Second, Thursday? That’s a pretty tight crunch, but you can do this. Right? Right.
I’ll read through and give what thoughts I have ect. and (if you’d like) typos/errors I catch. What type of accountability do you want? I can email you daily, you can email me, whatever you…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
It looks like we’ll be at a church training thing this Saturday, so I probably won’t be able to join. That said, you’re welcome to send an email link, and if I happen to be free I’ll bounce on.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
*Splutter of laughter*
Fish person? How is Syph like a fish person, pray tell?
Syph
So he didn’t have to “get a girl”, whatever that meant. He turned to give Ellie a grateful smile before shifting narrowed eyes to the Rax Boy.
What was that supposed to mean? A good natured challenge, or a patronizing ‘let the Little…[Read more]
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