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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 12 months ago
@That_Writer-Girl_99 I promise I haven’t forgotten you. I’m really busy right now so I will get to this as soon as possible, but it may be a bit. 😉
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Keleigha Liess and
Hannah Olsen are now friends 8 years, 12 months ago -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Sam I am: Doom, Glitter, and Iphones in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 12 months ago
@Winter-Rose poor guy… *hugs him* Seriously though, you did great. First person pov is not one of my strong points and can be very easy to do typically, but you did great with it. Thanks for sharing. 😀
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Rolena Hatfield replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 12 months ago
There are no words to express my amusement @ethryndal 😀 This will definitely go down in KeePer history.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 12 months ago
@Daeus yep. 590 words, so I’m pretty happy. 🙂 Thanks yourself.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 12 months ago
@Daeus writing now. I’ll be going until two o clock.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 12 months ago
@Daeus about to be. I’ll tag you when I start.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 12 months ago
*screams*
@Ethryndal aaauuuuggghhhh!!! I’m dying! *chokes on her laughter and topples over off her chair and goes into spasms on the floor*PERFECT. Absolutely perfect.
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Keleigha Liess posted an update 8 years, 12 months ago
@ethryndal For some reason, it’s not letting me respond to that thread… :/ Anyway, I’ve been on KP for maybe a year, just not very active until now. The “Stewards of the Pen” thing kind of gave me an incentive to do more, you know, find time! 😉 How about you?
That’s fun. How close are your siblings to you in age? I have 8 younger siblings,…[Read more]-
@ceaseless-prayer Huh. It did that to me a couple days ago. Weird.
Ah yes, the Stewards of the Pen thing. I wish I had social media just so I could promote this awesome place. 🙂 I’ve been here for about six months. It’s crazy though, because I FEEL like I’ve been here forever, and have known these people my whole life.
Nice, so you’re the…[Read more]
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Yeah, me too! I’ve wanted to be more involved before, just busy…
It is fun. It’s nice to have so many KPers with big families, most people think it is weird, or at least odd. Do you enjoy having older siblings? I always wanted some. I kind of adopt my friends’ My best friend is the second youngest of eight, & we’ve been BF since K-5, so I don’t…[Read more]-
Older siblings are fun. But you know, my siblings are so close to me in age that it’s not really like having older siblings, if you know what I mean. We’re more like partners in crime. 😉 And hey, adopted siblings are almost as good as the real thing, am I right? I also know a family with eight kids (how coincidental is that? XD), three of which…[Read more]
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Yeah, I do, I don’t really feel like my eighteen & sixteen-year old sisters are younger than me. I’m 20, so, your sister’s age? 😉 Yeah, almost. 😉 We have a wonderful church where we are all really close, kind of like a big extended family. Where do you guys go to church? Me neither. I think it’s wonderful!
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 12 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 could you give me the link to the doc again? Mine is doing weird things.
That sounds like a great solution. Good job. I notice you’re thinking in wider perspectives now— purposefully using the interactions to develop or manipulate. *wiggles eyebrows* Excellent work, my young padawan. 😉
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Keleigha Liess and
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 8 years, 12 months ago
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 12 months ago
@Daeus it just doesn’t like me. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 12 months ago
Okay @Daeus my post does not appear to be showing up. My guess is it got spammed.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 12 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 wow, that took an unexpected turn. 😛 I love it. Good job with the prose. 😉
You’re right though, the shift in Matthias is pretty obvious.
And… that might actually be a problem. It’s perfectly fine for him to change his personality as you write him; that’s not what I’m worried about. It’s that the Matthias we meet first and…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 12 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 wow, that took an unexpected turn. 😛 I love it. Good job with the prose. 😉
You’re right though, the shift in Matthias is pretty obvious.
And… that might actually be a problem. It’s perfectly fine for him to change his personality as you write him; that’s not what I’m worried about. It’s that the Matthias we meet first and…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 12 months ago
@That-Writer_Girl_99 wow, that took an unexpected turn. 😛 I love it. Good job with the prose. 😉
You’re right though, the shift in Matthias is pretty obvious.
And… that might actually be a problem. It’s perfectly fine for him to change his personality as you write him; that’s not what I’m worried about. It’s that the Matthias we meet first and…[Read more] -
Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 12 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 well I’m here now. XD *folds hands primly**ahem* You had a question?
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Rolena Hatfield replied to the topic Shorty Story – Mystery in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 12 months ago
@dragon-snapper That’s so exciting that you’re entering a contest!
I liked taking this little adventure with Daniel and Jack. Your descriptions are clever 🙂The one part I was confused by…
“For a while, I trekked about the house with a whisper of guilt trickling into my head. However, I knew that if there was indeed a problem,…”
I guess…[Read more]
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Keleigha Liess posted an update 8 years, 12 months ago
@ethryndal So, I am curious, are you and Anne of Lothlorein any sort of relations?
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@ceaseless-prayer Erm…no, not really. Don’t even know each other except through KP. Now I’m curious—why’d you think so? *lowers voice* Is it because of the elf thing? 😉
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Hehe, well, sort of, more because you guys picked the same “country/ region” whatever. ;), & because you talk sort of similarly, if that makes sense. 😉 I notice my sisters & I tend to say things in similar ways. So, do you have any siblings or anything on KP? 🙂
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That’s so funny! I never realized that. Maybe we’re long lost sisters or something. 😛
Alas, I have no siblings on KP. I like to pretend that everyone’s my siblings to combat the loneliness. 😉 How about you? Is your sister on KP?
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Maybe!! Haha.
Yes, I am blessed, I have three sisters on KP. 😉 You’re welcome to share, if you like. ;p Do you have any siblings?-
Aw, that’s so cool! I have two siblings, a brother and a sister.
So how long have you been on KP? I don’t recall seeing you around that much.
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