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@princesachronicle22

Cool! So is this with Ziren then?

@princesachronicle22

Ohhh! Is this for Viscount? What are you doing to her in the torture chamber that is a book page?

@freedomwriter76

I think these look great! The first thing I would say when it comes to this stuff is think about how consistent does this fit with the narrative of the cannon series, the issue with that however, is that the cannon isn’t even consistent with itself. That being said, I think you did well on this with both characters. Steve was…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Yeah, the Castle is actually really cool. My logical brain pesters me about the contradictions, and how the lore doesn’t quite work in any cannon sense, but that’s not the point. I really struggle with characters, I can make them struggle, and that’s a big part, but that’s still a small piece of who they are as an individual. The…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Yep…I’ve felt like that too many times to count. 😂😂😂 I think that’s why I started writing fanfictions even more…they’re great for practicing writing and they get you writing without making you stress so much. 😊

Yeah, stress is a big thing when it comes to writing. If your doing it just because you feel like you have to, then you’…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

Lol, okay, fair…😂😂😂…but some of it is done for me…I’m just…changing things…😜

True. I guess that’s probably the biggest advantage to fanfiction. A base templet has been provided, so now you can dedicated your energy more into the story instead.

@freedomwriter76

Yw!!! ❤️❤️❤️ It seems like a lot of fun…I just don’t have the patience. 😆😆😆

Say’s the one writing 4 books worth of fanfiction😆

@princesachronicle22

What contradictions? Very incomplete yes, but I’m thorough in making sure there isn’t anything that contradicts anything else.

@freedomwriter76

Well, I’m sure you’ll find something that fits perfectly into your model!!! 😊

Yeah, it will come to me and/or Princess eventually.

Y’all’s worldbuilding is absolutely A M A Z I N G !!!! 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

You make me blush:)

@esther-c

See ya!

@freedomwriter76 @esther-c.

Hmmm…I was thinking (maybe…) someone can merely look at the stone and it will break??? Just a thought that came into my mind. 😂

Yeah, what’s interesting about that is that it does correlate to the particular model we’re doing. It could be rationalized, but I’m still not sure, it still feels a little too much like the…[Read more]

@princesachronicle22

I’m still open to suggestions. Your the one writing about it, what makes sense for the scene?

@freedomwriter76

I’m doing marvelous today, I’m currently pondering on on aspect of my magic system.

(btw, I don’t think I’ve said it before, but I love your forum signature. ❤️)

Thank!  The Justice and Mercy of God is something I’ve been pondering for a while now. I absolutely love yours too! That’s what I think many of us are lacking nowa…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I’m here! What discussion would improve your present mood?

@sarahsmile

Cool! This actually reminds me of this cute show we just finished watching. It’s called Silverpoint. 4 kids are at a summer camp, and they find a strange object sticking out of the ground in the middle of the woods, and they kept calling it the Rock. Strange things start happening ever since. At first it seemed pretty b level, but the…[Read more]

@e-m-trepke

First off, I love that! Second off, we are using ether too!!! We actually have many degrees of ethereal concepts, like the most fundamental before all else is the Everything and the Nothing. Both are kinda Ether-esque  mega manifolds that briefly touched creating the universe. But then there’s many lower degrees of ether having to do…[Read more]

@e-m-trepke

I love this!!! I love the little white dragon. What’s your worldbuilding like? Is this a particular dragon, or one of many? How and why do they fly in space? ect?

@sarahsmile

Bing is the MC of one of my WIPs: a sci-fi story (it’s supposed to be sci-fi, at least) with a plot that involves asteroids and summer camp, in the current iteration of the story-line (the bit of the story-line I know, that is). Some of Bing’s characteristics are that he is a teenager (I think he’s a little short for his age), he’s an…

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@mineralizedwritings

This is beautiful! Very vibrant with personality, and I love how you shaped and shaded the mountains.

@sarahsmile

Lol, yeah, I was trying to suggest that I was sad at the lack of response, but it gave me a good laugh regardless.

Well it’s awesome to meet you, welcome, and I can’t wait to see you here again soon!