AveryTheExplodey

@mineralizedwritings @acancello @esther-c @freedomwriter76 @trailblazer @grcr

Oh my gosh guys…Ottoline’s story is so sad, reading it literally almost made me cry (and I wrote it)!

@acancello @grcr @mineralizedwritings @esther-c @freedomwriter76 @trailblazer

Ottoline

Tired of the conversation, Ottoline decided to get a breather and sit on the inviting looking gray couch over in the corner. She pondered the past events in her mind. In one day, she had failed to get food, found a mysterious house, met new people, actually…[Read more]

@Anyone

Some more intriguing questions for anyone willing to discuss!

What happens to those who don’t have the opportunity to learn about the Savior in this life?

Where is the line we must walk between scholarly rigor and child like faith?

Do we discern truth based off of what feels right, or what has more logical substance? (More and more C…[Read more]

@esther-c

I’ve been learning a lot about Ottoline as well every time I write her POV. I think this is really helpful!

@freedomwriter76

Yeah a lot has happened….lol

@grcr @mineralizedwritings @acancello

yep! so it’s official, lol. it will also build drama as the characters either begin to have suspicions of each other or to to the other side of the pendulum and begin to trust each other. (if this is the case, than “Hottoline” will become a bigger deal)

@mineralizedwritings

I love that idea! Actually I was just wondering if we should make the door be locked the other day, but wasn’t sure if you guys would want to do that.

@trailblazer

I had a bonnet too!!!

@trailblazer

Oh my gosh…my Little House phase lasted like three years! I would always wear my hair in two braids, and a dress (mainly one that my grandma made for me that looked exactly like something Laura would wear). I would even try to walk like Laura and hum the intro to the Little House movies!

It was really bad, lol

@esther-c @grcr @mineralizedwritings @acancello @trailblazer @freedomwriter76

Ottoline

Learn to trust? Ottoline stifled a laugh. What a ridiculous concept!  She watched Kari walk away and a sense of guilt set on her shoulders. What was wrong with her? Why couldn’t she be more like Kari, or Amir, or Lane, or even Hugo, as annoying as he was? Why…[Read more]

@trailblazer

Mormon is the nick name for the Church, so there isn’t really any difference😂 That being said, we prefer to use the true name of the Church, because it expresses that we worship Christ, and that He is the core of the Gospel, many think we worship Mormon, when we don’t. Mormon is regarded as a great profit of God, but this isn’t…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom

Thanks for your patience with me! I hope this is a good kickoff to get started. Oh, and excuse my potty mouth😂

Haha! I love this because I can have my characters “swear” in the book without saying actual swear words. I can avoid people thinking the words in their head, and because the made up words have no meaning in reality, I…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Ahh man, I literally just barely missed the next chapter reveal. I guess I’ll have to read it tomorrow🙃

@savannah_grace2009

Ok, I’m finally gonna get through the rest of your chapters:

I enjoyed chapter 3. It functions as a proper first chapter (Lilitu is the real main character, right?), all the previous ones seemed more like a series of prologues. This is fine, The Way of Kings, the first book of the Stormlight Archives by Brandon Sanderson did…[Read more]

@trailblazer

I suppose that’s a working explanation. Where Christ is the solid, the Holy Spirit is the liquid, and Heavenly Father is gas, expressing the hierarchy of God’s physical manifestation. Both solid and liquid are confined to this earth, whereas gas can permeate through all of space. I like that explanation more than the egg one.

Once…[Read more]

@grcr

nice! well, everyone, I have to go now. Nice talking you you all, goodnight!

@thearcaneaxiom

Yeah, I’m a member of The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter-Day Saints, and we believe that Heavenly Father, the Holy Ghost, and Jesus Christ are three distinct beings, though they are indeed one in purpose. (Please don’t burn me at the stake😅)

I’m not inclined to burn people at the stake, and since I can’t burn anyone through my…[Read more]

@grcr @jonas @highscribeofaetherium @trailblazer @anyone-else

Here’s the 6th chapter! I haven’t posted new ones in a while so I thought I should post my favorite chapter!!!! 😁 It’s really sad but also a little romantic .  Any feedback would be appreciated!

Chapter 6: Hiding

Triggers: Abuse, a punch

“Sef!”

Sef heard the door crash open upst…[Read more]

@jonas @esther-c @highscribeofaetherium @trailblazer @anyone-else (if you don’t want to read it that’s fine so just because I tagged you doesn’t mean you have to 😁

Next chapter:

Chapter 6: Hiding

Triggers: Abuse

“Sef!”

Sef heard the door crash open upstairs and began to panic. It was late, and the odds that Iver had not been drinking were nex…[Read more]

@grcr

Gotcha. I have to get off at 9, so we basically both have a half hour 😂