AveryTheExplodey

Nice! Would this actually count as a full short story? I couldn’t detect any full plot, but maybe it’s there. One piece of advice my writing teacher gave us for our short story assignment was ‘make sure you write a short story and not just a scene.’ Putting aside whether it counts as a short story, it’s a really good snapshot/scene at least.

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@everyone

I have to go now…I’ll continue the conversation between Fracture and Krenna maybe tonight. This RP is very entertaining lol

Fracture

He glowered at the girl in front of him.

“Impudent child! Well, I’ve-” he attempted to come up with a reasonable comeback. “Well, rocks are very intimidating when they’re hurled at your face!”

@rae

Bye!

@jonas

It seems Glace is carrying on two conversations simultaneously. I don’t know how that’s possible, but whatever, lol.

Perhaps Fractures insanity will help the matter, lol

@highscribeofaetherium

Yeah, me too XD

Fracture

He tried to contain his growing rage, but failed miserably. Don’t these people have any manners?

He tried again.

“I AM THE GREAT COMPOUND FRACTURE! YOU WILL FEAR ME. FEAR AND TREMBLE! BE AFRAID! BE VERY AFRAID!”

The people fell silent, and one began to laugh.

“HOW DARE YOU LAUGH AT ME!!”…[Read more]

Fracture

“You want to know what I can do?” Fracture but into the conversation, “I can give my mortal enemies compound fractures, hence my name. And I can do this…” He began to burst into his maniacal laughter again.

He stuck out his lower lip and pouted when no one acknowledged his superior talents.

Fracture

How rude, he thought. Why was everyone ignoring him? Obviously they were all too scared of him to venture near him. He smiled to himself. How he loved being scary.

Is Fracture the only one who doesn’t have anyone who generally hates him?

Fracture

“I would start, but I genuinely doubt that either of you would share your name in return.” Fracture raised his hand and eagerly jumped up and down.

“Oh, I will! I will! But my name is so scary you probably couldn’t even hear it without trembling in fear-”

“I already know your name, you dummy.”

“How…DARE YOU!” he gasped for breath.…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

The only one I could think of is “breaking bad habits”.

But this is an interesting topic! Thanks for the tag!

@rae

you’re good! (I’m not good at it either.)

@highscribeofaetherium

lol

that’s harsh.

Still though, it’s amazing how fast this RP is moving! I was gone over one weekend, and we had like 15 new pages!!

@highscribeofaetherium

You and Jonas are wayyy better at memes than I am, though, lol

@jonas

@trailblazer

I like these scenes!