AveryTheExplodey

@esther-c

“So, uh, y-you like t-to eat?” Lukas asked. He kicked himself. That came out sounding much worse than it sounded in his head. He wished he could take it back, but could do nothing. So he stood there with a pained expression, waiting for Liv’s reply.

I’M DYING!!!!!!!!!!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Livia

“So, uh, y-you like t-to eat?”

Liv stared blank…[Read more]

@jonas

Yeah, and names don’t have to be from the same language. A name that is noticeably foreign will be useful to say that the character is from a different context. If the character is from the same ethnic context, but has a foreign name, suggests a history with their parents, whatever that may be.

@esther-c

This is really up to you. I like the idea of the giving himself up thing instead of just being in the way though. It would cause a lot of emotional drive for Dabir later on. Not only because Amir saved him, but because he willfully took it upon himself.

@rae

This story is so sad! It’s really good though, well done! I don’t think we need to enforce the deadline. I would want ours to be judged in this case, because I went full comedy, and you were much more serious, so it’s not really possible to realistically compare them in a meaningful way. Thanks for the congrats though!

@rae @savannah_grace20…[Read more]

ChatGPT doesn’t work with making conlangs at all, I’ve made many heart felt attempts on helping it along.

@jonas

So I have a few questions about this. Is this all one language then, or is there room for diversification. I think that it can all be rationalized as cohesive, though I noticed not only Greek names, but also traces from languages like French. This is fine, just thought I’d mention it. If you want to pay a little more attention to the…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Sorry I haven’t responded to this one until now. I think it’s good. All that I would mention is that the history tangent with the pythonos while only a paragraph or two, felt a little sudden. Lilitu is young, and while he may be thinking about these things, I think this part would flow much better if you made it much more of a…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

Same. XD

@rae

lol!

@rae

Aww poor Nahim! *hugs him and gives him hot cocoa and fuzzy blanket*

@rae

RUEE! HOW DARE YOU???

Jk.

I did that to Sef too… you’re fine…

@calyhuge

lol!!!

@calyhuge

I ALSO LOVE ROCKY.

@rae

Lol!!!! I’m dying!!!

@rae lol!!!

Here’s a story I wrote for this prompt…I didn’t revise it so it probably isn’t that good…but………..anyway…

@jonas @thearcaneaxiom @highscribeofaetherium @anyoneelseinterested

Fragments

Her very soul aches.

Her heart is frozen.

Her hands are shaking.

She desperately wants to cry.

But she can’t. She can’t show it. She…[Read more]

@rae

Yeah, sorry about that…XD

@rae

Oops. You deleted your post. Never mind.

@rae

 Sara knows what I mean.

I do? Do you mean crying/heart emojis? Do I dare say those words?

Even if you don’t post it on KP, I really recommend making a board for yourself. It really helps you understand/express yourself. All the pain, all the happy times, everything about you in one image, if that makes sense. (though obviously if you don’t…[Read more]

I’ve seen a moose once. And I think I’ve seen an elk.

But I know my dad has. He hunts them, sometimes.

@grcr

That’s so funny! And thanks!!