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@overcomer Alrighty I managed to grab enough time to read and give it an edit over. I did it in a google doc, so hopefully it works. I’ll link to it, and you should be able to see what I’ve suggested and accept/reject said edit suggestions.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/16jNPsx_TyzVFKnVbbBRcaITZK3x85NNkgf8kNLyWrZc/edit?usp=sharing

*hopes it works*

@winter-rose okie dokie! (Have fun eating dinner 🙂 ) I got a little plotting done and also some critiquing work.

@winter-rose sshhhhhh don’t tell. xD I’m sending out messenger pigeons to my minion armies to mount their attack while I hide in my tower and practice my evil overlord laughs.

@aratrea oh thank you!! That will definitely be useful. 🙂

I thought that maybe I could get the villain out of his office and actually go to the ‘front lines’ so he can better command his agents (naturally under constant bodyguard supervision so there’s no way he could get killed). And then I can add a more personal attack from him, and a more…[Read more]

@winter-rose I’ll be plotting! 🙂

@winter-rose yay! Good for you! 😀 Thanks for writing with me.

@jenali oh yesss. I read that book last year and liked it quite a lot. It had a really interesting concept.

@aratrea thank you!! 🙂
I’m sort of struggling with my beginning. It feels a bit up-down and not entirely connected to the plot. After the inciting incident there’s seven chapters before the first plot point and I’m not sure how to keep the plot moving during that time not just pointless action scenes.
And making my villain not an evil-overlord…[Read more]

@winter-rose any time. 🙂 I’m very happy to try help out if I can.

@Winter-rose oh nice. 🙂
Some from my names list: Evans, Hier, Morgan, Enwood, Brys.

@winter-rose Bringer, Chase, Taliman, Harrison, Grayson

@Dragon-snapper okay thanks for writing!!

@winter-rose hmmm what’s the genre?

@winter-rose you’re very welcome. 🙂 I have super powers on offer whenever needed. 😛

@winter-rose ah nice! *gives you super powers so you don’t get distracted* Have fun with that. 😀
I’m kind of switching between plotting my novel-to-be and writing the first chapter.

@Dragon-snapper granted. 😛 But what we really need is some taters.

@jane-maree *stops charge* Ahem, Frodo wouldn’t have gotten far without Sam. For Sam too! *resumes charge*

@jane-maree *stops charge* Ahem, Frodo wouldn’t have gotten far without Sam.

@Dragon-Snapper *draws sword* *does an epic speech*…for Frodo. *charges*

@Dragon-Snapper *draws sword* *does an epic speach*…for Frodo. *charges*

@jane-maree @winter-rose For the Shire!