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@Catwing sounds like fun!! I’m halfway through chapter 37 (of Hope Ann’s novel Fidelyon) and it’s pretty good. *nodnod*

@Catwing @Salome01w4g I am here to join you! I’ll be critiquing/editing.

@catwing Oh dear. It ate him…

I’ve got to go now. I edited quite a bit. 😀

@catwing Maybe to Jack it would appear that the flashlight appeared out of nowhere? Like, he can’t see the fairy yet, because he doesn’t know they exist. He doesn’t believe in them yet?

@catwing Gotta love the humor! 😛

Hey catwing, go outline. 😉

Suddenly, a flashlight appeared out of nowhere. Jack put his hand on his head, clenching at his hair! “Goodness me! A flashlight! My requests have been answered!”

@catwing Yes! Isn’t editing so much fun!

I’m going through and killing all the telling, and making my sarcastic character ten times as snarky. It’s awesome. 😛 I’m about 16, maybe 17% through with editing. Making progress. 😀

I’ve been able to incorporate world building too, which I decided to do after I wrote the book. *hides under piles of…[Read more]

@catwing Hiya! I’m editing too!

@salome01w4g @that_writer_Girl_99 Time for dinner! Have fun with ethics and novels that don’t want to be written! 😀

@that_writer_Girl_99 That sounds…difficult. 😉

@that_writer_Girl_99 *pats shoulder*

What’s ethics?

@That_writer_Girl_99 Watcha studying?
@salome01w4g Hiya! I’m worldbuilding.

@That-writer-girl-99 Hey, you still there?

Hello, @radically-surrendered! I’m new here too, but welcome to Kingdom Pen! I will not say it’s the “bestiest” place on earth since that’s not even a word, but this place comes pretty close! Welcome anyways!

The Magistrate approves.

I’ve got Spotify so I listen to one or two songs from each of their albums.
I really only like a few of them.

@emily @shannon @salome01w4g @daeus @catwing @daughteroftheking
I’m worldbuilding at the moment.

@michael-stanton *nods* Of course, of course…that makes sense. Poor underlings.

Honestly, I never expected them to die. I was to engrossed by the actual movie, but I didn’t expect them to live either. Because if they did, where were they be in New Hope?

This works right?

This is what me, my mom, and quite a few others that I know think…

@catwing, alright, I’ll try again.

@aislinn-mollisong, yeah. I use V’s picture a lot and I wanted to do something different this time.
And I REALLY like the sound of.. “magistrate”.