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@kate-flournoy yes, it’s from Pinterest. I’m not actually going to use that, I was just trying out the website and figuring out all the buttons. And yes, going to change the font.

Thanks, XD.
1. Not original? Ok, I can work with that.
2. Um…not really sure how I can fix that. But a lot more action happens after this particular section.
3. NO! DID I INOFO-DUMP?! I really tried not to…where?
4. Oh. Kay. I’ll see what I can do about that.
5. Oh, you ain’t seen nothin’ yet. If you had read the outline thingy on the first…[Read more]

Okay, I just read the portion on this page.

Here’s what I think.

1. It’s pretty good, it doesn’t really feel original in the sense that I’ve read stuff that sounds pretty similar and I’m sure others have too, but I think that it was written pretty well with all that detail.

2. Personally, I enjoy it more when the character “moves around” first.…[Read more]

https://www.canva.com/design/DACkNk_RzL8/VD1CsbSmOlMFwR0s6XTIkA/edit?category=tACZChfZug8

I tried that Canva website, and played around with it. I got this.

Won’t be the finished product, but I does look pretty cool.

Just on the last page, @xonos-darkgrate. Thanks! That’s actually a really good idea…I’m goin’ tae think on that.

WOW! Thanks, @kate-flournoy! I do have some questions…

I wanted to possibly go for something such as a hand with fire coming out of it, with maybe my “Emblem of the Chosen” somewhere. Either that or something combining a leaf and fire. (Since, you know, Leaf-boy and Ember-girl) Is that complatible with your guidelines?

Okay, in regards to the two moons thing, I haven’t read too many books with that setting so I’m fine with it. But what I think would be REALLY interesting is for you to only have one moon, but in that book where two are needed, something happens to make or cause a second to appear. Evoking a sense of surprise, wonder, and not-so-cliché-ness.…[Read more]

Ok, so I am having a hard time with some details. In particular,

Is having two moons cliche? I wanted to have two moons, (especially since the second book involves the moon as an important factor) but I’ve already read several books with that particular setup, and am now wondering if it would be overused.

Help?

@xonos-darkgrate I would absolutely love it if you read those two samples, and tell me the pros and cons of each one. I will leave you to it, Sir Magistrate of the RS. (hehe, no one here knows what that is…)

@allison-grace I have the same name on everything (Aislinn is my pseudonym of choice for ABSOLUTELY EVERYTHING!) and sometimes I get really confused…at Bright Lights last week, we were doing an icebreaker type activity, and I accidentally said, “Hi! I’m Aislinn!” instead of my real name! *embarrassed*

Farewell @Aislinn-mollisong

GOODNIGHT, KINGDOM PEN!!!
I am going to bed.
My nice, soft, warm bed…..

@Catwing okay, see you!! *salutes*

Cool, @catwing! Hmmm…I think maybe you could either put another sentence at the end, or change that last sentence a little bit. It sounds sort of awkward (to me at least) when you say it out loud. Other than that, IT REALLY MAKES ME WANT TO READ IT!!!! Please finish it soon and publish it and let me read it!!!!

I….have all of those @allison-grace. Especially the one about the forums…I am currently (meaning right this very second) on KP, Aetherlight forums, and NaNoWriMo. My alternate realities keep getting tangled…

@allison-grace We all are. 😀

I actually wasn’t writing this whole time. Sorry…..

@Dragon-Snapper Okay byeee. See you in the future. 😀

@catwing @jane-maree I’m signing out now. I wrote 1085 and edited almost a chapter. Byeee!!!
*and then I shall makes some collages. Yessss..*