Captain’s Log, Stardate 70797.4 For thirteen hours and twenty-four minutes, we have tailed the cosmic trail of the vandalizing devils who dared damage our ship’s hyperdrive. I stare out the glass and into the black that seems to be the color of my mood.
The surrounding clusters of gas and rock, stars, asteroids— such maddening technicality— are insistently scattered in our way. My growing impatience covets an audience with the supernova responsible. Clean up after yourself, you haphazard accident!
The sudden impact of an asteroid fragment sends a jarring quiver through the console. I stumble, beating my head against the mocking wall. Curse this string of ill luck.
The ship enters familiar territory, the constellations resembling the drawings of my awed child self. Fate, I know you despise me, but I would like to know how you designed countless sequences from congeries of these burning pests.
I look up from my narrative just in time to be half-blinded by the enormous swirl of reflecting dust and gas, arranged so deceptively as something marvelous.
A commander steps to my side with an update on the ship’s recovery and a sudden knot in his tongue as his eyes widen at the window’s display. He is lost in admiration with the rest of the crew. I wave a dismissive hand, but as the footsteps fade, I turn back to the cloud and address the authority of the stars once more. You are curious things, claiming to own control, yet not half clever enough to create this.
A flash of ship darts across our view like a plunging comet, and I hear faint assurances that there is no cause for alarm. Under gritted teeth, I swear I’ll catch the ravaging rogues who forced me into this speed-reduced scenic route.
Or, perhaps… I’ll thank them.
I find my eyes turned to my shoulder, gazing as the galaxies fade along with my headache. My destiny is destined against me, but despite our mutual mistrust, I can’t help but reason that even though it seems as if the stars rule the universe, they are far too intricate to have established themselves.
This storm of a world is the work of Someone greater.
Oh I love this!! Well done! I like the uniqueness, like, usually poetry is full of nature and trees and rivers (though I do know stars fall in this category), but this is more of a futuristic piece, which I find quite different from a lot that I’ve read. *enthusiastic clapping* Good job!
Wow, thank you so much for your amazing encouragement!
Wow! I never would’ve thought someone could write a sci-fi poem! You did a great job, I especially like how you ended it. May this poem live long and prosper! 😉
It always makes me happy if people think I’ve done the unexpected 🙂 I believe in boldly writing what no one has written before. Thank you very much for your encouragement! 🙂
This is awesome sauce Cindy! I love the Captain’s voice (I’m not sure if you usually refer to poetry as having a voice, but this poem has one and it’s fantastic 🙂 ). And how you manage to pull it all together to such a beautiful conclusion….I just can’t handle it. 🙂
Aww, Gabby! It’s my turn to explode with happiness. Thank you very much, girl 🙂
Oooooooh… I LOVE IT. So unique. Very well done, Cindy.
This made me smile so much 🙂 🙂 Thank you, Kate!
Wow… this is… really wow. A sci-fi poem! Fantastic!
This encouragement… is so… wow. You people really spoil me with all your encouragement. Thank you 🙂
Ooh yes. So much sci-fi epicness. *flails*
So many smiles I get from reading these comments. *flails* Thank you so much 😀
I love your unique setting and the lacy poetry tag on the high-tech background and the beautiful Star Trek-esque eagerness to explore creation. And everything, actually. *pats myself on the back for telling you to write a spacey poem*
*smiles ridiculously wide*