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      @freedomwriter76

      so sad!!! whyyyyyy??? whyyyyyy????

      I’m sorry, but it helps set up Filip’s arc

      truthfully I meant it to be less sad, and then I started writing and it just sort of took over

      (also, okay, it’s helpful to know that Lena’s sister is blind and not Lena…I didn’t have that information before XD Lena doesn’t need to stay hidden then…but her younger sister does.)

      Yes, see I missed a lot in my original blurb XD And yeah most of the time Alicja stays inside and she’s not allowed to use a chain, since that would give it away, she’s also told to blink a lot when in public so they can’t look at her eyes super close

      Poor girl

      I have redeemed you; I have summoned you by name; you are mine.”
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        *Screams* Girl I love it!!!!! And I love the fact that’s there siblings  (that always add such an element to the story)

        And Alice is already my fav

         

        I have redeemed you; I have summoned you by name; you are mine.”
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          AWWW! Miley that was so sad. 😭

           

          @freedomwriter76

          OoOOo!!! I really like it so far…

          You should definitely try to do it for NaNo, though I know it’ll probably be hard. 😅

          I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child

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            I made boards for my Historical fic!!!!!

            And I came up with a new charrie…

            Eleanor

            A British middle-class lady who finds herself stuck in Poland when Germany invades

            now for more details here’s her bio

            Eleanor moved to Poland to leave her old life behind, she then finds herself falling for Marek. A man who is passionate and kind yet she struggles to trust him or any other man because of her abusive father she had growing up.

            When Marek is lost fighting off Germany she finds herself filled with anger and using her strength and skill to get revenge on the Nazis, feeling no remorse in the things she does.

            I have redeemed you; I have summoned you by name; you are mine.”
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              Here’s Marek and Eleanor’s board

              I have redeemed you; I have summoned you by name; you are mine.”
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                Here’s Marek

                I have redeemed you; I have summoned you by name; you are mine.”
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                  Lena’s

                  I have redeemed you; I have summoned you by name; you are mine.”
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                    And finally Filip

                    I have redeemed you; I have summoned you by name; you are mine.”
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                      Also, I’m debating about adding these charries to the RP

                      because honestly I’m in love with all of them

                      I have redeemed you; I have summoned you by name; you are mine.”
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                        AWWW!

                        Those boards are SO good!!!😍

                        I rolled the log over and underneath was a tiny little stick and I was like, "That log had a child

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                          Thanks, girl!!

                           

                          I have redeemed you; I have summoned you by name; you are mine.”
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                            @smiley those boards legit just brought tears to my eyes

                             

                            I love these charries and this story so much 😭💕💕😭

                             

                            now I’m feeling like Marek is gonna be my fav…XD

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                              @freedomwriter76

                              those boards legit just brought tears to my eyes I love these charries and this story so much 😭💕💕😭

                              I’m sorry, yet happy that you enjoy my characters

                              now I’m feeling like Marek is gonna be my fav…XD

                              I knew it!! When I was making his board and figuring him out, I was like “Marek is going to be Freedom’s favorite I just know it” XD

                              I really struggle to write broken boys so I spent a while trying to figure out his board and arc

                               

                              I have redeemed you; I have summoned you by name; you are mine.”
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                                @smiley

                                I knew it!! When I was making his board and figuring him out, I was like “Marek is going to be Freedom’s favorite I just know it” XD

                                I really struggle to write broken boys so I spent a while trying to figure out his board and arc

                                Aww, Miley, you know me so well XD

                                 

                                Haha…I have several. maybe I could give you some tips 😝

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                                  Aww, Miley, you know me so well XD

                                  I know it’s amazing XD Or I just know that you like the poor broken bois

                                  Haha…I have several. maybe I could give you some tips 😝

                                  Throw them at me, because I literally struggle so much, especially because I don’t know how to make them enjoyable, and like with girls I enjoy giving them quirks like they love ice cream or love to play uno XD But I’m kind of terrible when it comes to Boys

                                  And my brother is no help XD

                                  I have redeemed you; I have summoned you by name; you are mine.”
                                  ‭‭Isaiah‬ ‭43‬:‭1‬

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